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Author san please hurry up and update update update update update update update... please quickly. ...... Please update the chapters don't drop or put hiatus on such priceless treasure
1 mês sem atualizações se vc dropp por favor avise, tirando isso do caminho a história é excelente, um objetivo completamente diferente ser imortal eu amei
Chapter 01 -> 26 prologue. MC is mehh [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Aku senang dengan cerita yang mengambil prespektif baru dari kehidupan Severus Snape. Beberapa orang akan mengatakan bahwa Severus tidak layak bahkan untuk dikasihani di akhir cerita kanon. Tapi bagiku, Severus hanyalah korban lingkungan yang terbentuk ditambah nasib sial. Terimakasih kepada penulis untuk cerita yang luar biasa!
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Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Word from a fellow writer.
Nice. But wasn't amelia bones in hupplepuff? Well it isn't cannon so her being griffyndor doesn't shock me. Great chapters though..................
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Hello sir,would you be so kind and change the tag of harry potter to the corret one so more people can reach this beatiful novel.
I always hated potter and his friends. Bully all of them. If it was harmless prank like changing color of hair, clothes then that would have been funny. But no, they prank slytherin and humilated them especially cannon severus. Hope here potter is put to place.
Ravenclaw. The most slytherin thing to do is to be sorted on other house. I honestly think ravenclaw would suit him. He want to stay under the radar and that he cannot do if he is slytherin. Hope it is ravenclaw.
Novel yang menarik, terimakasih kepada penulis karena membawanya dengan selera yang lebih ringan. Kebanyakan fanfic berbasis Severus terkesan gelap dan tidak menyenangkan. Aku menantikan kelanjutan ceritanya karena Severus yang baru tidak memiliki bias Lily, apakah Potter dan gang akan tetap mengganggunya? Apakah Severus akan tetap tertarik dengan Ilmu Hitam dan Pelahap Maut?
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nothing negative to say for the moment, one of the very rare hp ff during the marauder era which isn't a "beautifull" romance (my sister onlt read those, save me 😭😭) it's a good ff, keep it up aurhor-san 👍
Please hope it is ravenclaw. Also he could loot all of the precious things in room and requirements (except ravenclaw diadem). then sell them. Could earn quite a lot of money.
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Excelente fanfic.... Severus es un personaje no explotado un munchos fanfic...... solo espero que no dejes caer el fanfic.. animo con tu escritura.. seguí adelante...
This story is getting good. Loving the plot. He should steal from room of requirements. Invest in muggle companies. Hope both lily and snape are sorted to ravenclaw.
Hope severus and lily both go to or sorted to ravenclaw. Please no slytherin for snape. Hope severus and lily both go to or sorted to ravenclaw. Please no slytherin for snape.
Excellent Harry Potter fanfic, Severus Snape deserves a justice. Quite intersting..........................................................................
Masterpiece! keep up the great work, author-san! i lov this fic. =) <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
I was hoping that you would come back to his and it seems my prayers were answered!! The original was so good, I hope this one will be similar to it.
God i need more-_--_-_-__-_-__--__--_-__--_-_-__-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_6_--_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_--__--_-_--__-_--_-_-__--_-_--_-_-$-$-$---__--__-_-
Splendid. The writing is good and Snape was good choice as the host of the mc. The goal to be immortal is new (at least for me) and therefore enjoyable.
author really happy to see a new Harry potter with different time line cause until now all the fanfic were same like movie this something new that I read after long time so hope you will complete this novel and won't drop it. Best of luck
Finally a fic set before canon. Been looking for a fic like this for a while now. So far things are developing well and mc seems like an interesting character. Can only hope this doesn't get dropped.
Very interesting indeed.... A snape si set in marauders era. A rare find in this site filled with same old hp fics with same setting. I look forward to see how this goes.
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ネタバレを明かす Author san please hurry up and update update update update update update update... please quickly. ...... Please update the chapters don't drop or put hiatus on such priceless treasure
1 mês sem atualizações se vc dropp por favor avise, tirando isso do caminho a história é excelente, um objetivo completamente diferente ser imortal eu amei
Chapter 01 -> 26 prologue. MC is mehh [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Aku senang dengan cerita yang mengambil prespektif baru dari kehidupan Severus Snape. Beberapa orang akan mengatakan bahwa Severus tidak layak bahkan untuk dikasihani di akhir cerita kanon. Tapi bagiku, Severus hanyalah korban lingkungan yang terbentuk ditambah nasib sial. Terimakasih kepada penulis untuk cerita yang luar biasa!
....................................................................................................................................................
Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Add Harry Potter in the tags mate. Word from a fellow writer.
Nice. But wasn't amelia bones in hupplepuff? Well it isn't cannon so her being griffyndor doesn't shock me. Great chapters though..................
ネタバレを明かす Hello sir,would you be so kind and change the tag of harry potter to the corret one so more people can reach this beatiful novel.
I always hated potter and his friends. Bully all of them. If it was harmless prank like changing color of hair, clothes then that would have been funny. But no, they prank slytherin and humilated them especially cannon severus. Hope here potter is put to place.
Ravenclaw. The most slytherin thing to do is to be sorted on other house. I honestly think ravenclaw would suit him. He want to stay under the radar and that he cannot do if he is slytherin. Hope it is ravenclaw.
Novel yang menarik, terimakasih kepada penulis karena membawanya dengan selera yang lebih ringan. Kebanyakan fanfic berbasis Severus terkesan gelap dan tidak menyenangkan. Aku menantikan kelanjutan ceritanya karena Severus yang baru tidak memiliki bias Lily, apakah Potter dan gang akan tetap mengganggunya? Apakah Severus akan tetap tertarik dengan Ilmu Hitam dan Pelahap Maut?
exp.,........................................................................................................................................
nothing negative to say for the moment, one of the very rare hp ff during the marauder era which isn't a "beautifull" romance (my sister onlt read those, save me 😭😭) it's a good ff, keep it up aurhor-san 👍
Please hope it is ravenclaw. Also he could loot all of the precious things in room and requirements (except ravenclaw diadem). then sell them. Could earn quite a lot of money.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Excelente fanfic.... Severus es un personaje no explotado un munchos fanfic...... solo espero que no dejes caer el fanfic.. animo con tu escritura.. seguí adelante...
This story is getting good. Loving the plot. He should steal from room of requirements. Invest in muggle companies. Hope both lily and snape are sorted to ravenclaw.
Hope severus and lily both go to or sorted to ravenclaw. Please no slytherin for snape. Hope severus and lily both go to or sorted to ravenclaw. Please no slytherin for snape.
Excellent Harry Potter fanfic, Severus Snape deserves a justice. Quite intersting..........................................................................
Masterpiece! keep up the great work, author-san! i lov this fic. =) <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
I was hoping that you would come back to his and it seems my prayers were answered!! The original was so good, I hope this one will be similar to it.
God i need more-_--_-_-__-_-__--__--_-__--_-_-__-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_6_--_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_--__--_-_--__-_--_-_-__--_-_--_-_-$-$-$---__--__-_-
Splendid. The writing is good and Snape was good choice as the host of the mc. The goal to be immortal is new (at least for me) and therefore enjoyable.
author really happy to see a new Harry potter with different time line cause until now all the fanfic were same like movie this something new that I read after long time so hope you will complete this novel and won't drop it. Best of luck
Finally a fic set before canon. Been looking for a fic like this for a while now. So far things are developing well and mc seems like an interesting character. Can only hope this doesn't get dropped.
Very interesting indeed.... A snape si set in marauders era. A rare find in this site filled with same old hp fics with same setting. I look forward to see how this goes.