Armor Queen

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Tiphereth

It looks like webnovel auto hides reviews with bad language in it? Had to change some stuff before it registered Hey author. Sorry if this seems like a scathing review. Seems? No, it is. This novel is so terr1ble, I wonder just how many review swaps you had to go through in order to get this rating. If you didn't do any review swaps, then congratulations, because this novel is so bad that you would have just done the impossible Writing Quality: 2 stars. Each paragraph is over ten sentences long. Sentence flow is nonexistent. Cohesive dialogue? Never heard of it. There were several instances in a single chapter where the sentence count of a paragraph easily reached the thirties, sometimes even forties, in one huge infodump or the other. 2 stars Stability of Updates: 2 stars. Don't get me wrong, the updates are consistent. Which is why I gave it two stars instead of one. This author piles ten chapters on the reader, every sixteen days. Imagine you, a reader, getting an update for this novel. You've forgotten the plot. You've forgotten the characters. You've moved onto other novels in your life. You don't want to experience reading through ten tedious chapters, sift through all the story pieces the author brings back in their terr1ble chapters. For more information on 'terr1ble', see the writing quality star rating. 2 stars for both. Story Development: See if I care. You tell me. Try to read at least ten chapters of it. I'll pay you ten bucks to summarize the story for me. Tell me how much of your life you spent trying to decipher the author's page of infodump. Character Design: 3 stars. Generic Medieval plot, hiding under a pretense of originality. But I don't have time to play house with it. World Background: 2 stars. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Did I ever tell you that some sentences are over thirty sentences long? This novel's world, no, *any* novel's world isn't interesting enough for a reader to sit through a thirty sentence paragraph explaining the rinky-dink politics and intricacies of the world. Before I get ripped a new one in the comments, I suggest this: Read it yourself. Whether you are the author or a reader, just read the novel. Get to chapter five, and take this quiz. What is the plot? Describe the characters. How fun was your read? It doesn't matter if you can do the first two. The answer to the last one is no. And author, don't bother deleting this review.

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Aj_Friday

Hello author! From what i read so far, I can say that this story is very intriguing. A lot of thought and dedication was put into this novel and i applaud you for such an effort. i look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!!

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mss_amalee

Amazing Novel. I love the way the author tells the story. It’s very Unique and Different from other eastern fantasy. I can’t wait for the author to upload more chapters. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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ibbygal

The synopsis was quite interesting. I love the author unique sense of writing. The storyline is also captivating. kudos to the author.🙌🏽🙌🏽

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Pooja_Bansal_3168

Though I had read only a few chapters but they are enough to hook me up. World Background- The world setting is really Exhilirating. I liked the way author gave a detailed info about everything. character setting- Characters are good. it's not hard to relate and understand their views, which I found good because it helped me to connect to the story. plot setting- The plot seems to be revolving around the royal and castle things, which is a nice one. I liked the plot setting. The only thing which somehow poked is there are way too long paragraphs and dialogue are incorporated into it. which somehow becomes boring to read for a longer times. and also the explanation is quite much. Rest all the things I loved about it. keep it up author, written in a good way.

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Ugly_Baby

The synopsis is very interesting. The story plot is great and the writing style is very well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

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foxyash

Stupendo Fantabolous Book! though I have only read 2 chapters till now but I can't help myself from writing a review for this book. I can't describe how amazingly this author has written this book, it has a smooth texture, a smooth flow of read; the plots and scenes are described so precisely using simple words, the characters are shown perfectly. I'm amazed by this author 😊 loved it and can made into a movie if I would have been a director I would have signed this book to make a movie out of it and it would be super duper hit for sure. Definitely 5 stars.

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rena_ok

I like this novel a lot, intrigued storyline, interesting world. A bit slow character development but still good. Can't wait next chapter ...

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SyntheticStorm_9

Amazing, once you get a hang of the writers style it’s easier to stomach , more of a relaxing adventure then a read , could definitely use some more spacing to break up the ideas, overall 7/10!

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GwenCreepy

Hi there author! After been reading a few chapters, I only can say that this is an amazing and well-written story, with a lot of effort and passion. With this kind of books it's a pleasure to read! Keep it up! Your story it's incredible!!!

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Silaw

Hi Author, with just a few chapters, I am already impressed of your work. Keep it up! Good storyline and characters... More upload please[img=uplease. .

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Preston_Murphy

I love the world that's been developing, and all the characters involved. in terms of close plot think of Mulan. my only problem at this point 32 chapters in is the MC has no agency, she has no reason to be doing what she's doing aside from plot demands it. that being said her struggle is real, she has no easy button aside from the fact that she's fast.

The world-building is amazing and I hope the author continues to keep it that way, a very intriguing story. The writing is amazing and I highly recommend the story, Keep up the good work author!!

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Susan_Tori

This book is very intriguing and it is quite easy to follow the plot line. it's one of my best upcoming books here. I totally recommend everyone reading it.

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SecondLittlePig

World building is amazing. The plot is great. Writing style and writing quality is fantastic. Love the characters, they all come to life. Really enjoyed reading it! The scenes are descriptive and every chapter I've read so far were immersive and interesting. I love it! What more can I say?? Highly recommended!

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Megana4

The synopsis is quite interesting and catchy. The story plot is great and the writing style is well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

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Etherealthewriter

Such an interesting story! The synopsis wasnt too detailed but surely intriguing. The idea of the story itself was lovely. Well done author will surely recommend this story to others

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_Jaeee

The Author came up with an intriguing concept that will instantly catch the attention of the readers. The writing style made it even more precise. Good job, Author!

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IamStacyMevoli

I love how the story goes since I am really, really, interested in knights in shining armors, kings, and queens and all that. Kudos to the author for creating such interesting story. Thumbs up!