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章 6: Update

Updates are slow because I'm busy and trying to remember the storyline XD

But someone commented I should add enemies and i was thinking this and one of the ideas I came up with was adding a reincarnate to the mix who will join in the second year. Let me know your thoughts on this or any other ideas you want added.

Also in case you want to know the mc personality because he's been to two worlds supposedly means he needs to be some face slapping maniac but keep in mind when he was send to the other world he had no knowledge of that world and he did not receive any powers and did not face much hardships thus his personality did not change much, Now in the HP verse I plan to make him go through hardships in one way or another so he can develop. That was just so people understand his personality a bit better.

That's it for today keep in mind I am busy so be patient for chapters and that's it, let me know feedback in the comments.


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