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Well I can truthfully say that I laughed in every chapter till my stomach hurt. I finally found a novel that gives soul to the characters. WHAT I like most is the Mc’s nine monologue and him constantly breaking the fourth wall like Deadpool
Big shot to the writer and congrats on being viral. The updates are steady, and the story is enticing. The characters are well designed, but I would like to see more visual description regarding what the characters and setting looks like. With that being stated, the world building is next level, and the pacing is excellent. This is definitely one of the better and more well-rounded stories on Webnovel. I recommend it for any prospective readers. The formatting and structure is lovely. I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.
it was a good read. the mc is not ungrateful to his family and loves them. he is a young master but not the typical, has a good sense of humour and certainly is not a puss
The mc is the human manifestation of paranoia. Has a good sense of humour and unlike other wimpy transmigrators, he has self confidence and charisma. Most importantly not a SIMP!! and instead a family man.At first their were problem like some explanations being too big or pacing but later on the quality improves. It is a good read if you want to have a laugh while reading a story with good world development and lovable charactersthe mmc's motto should be
AUTHOR PLEASE REMOVE THE 'HAREM' TAG. IT’S OK IF THERE IS MORE THAN ONE FEMALE LEAD (I THINK THREE OR FOUR IS FINE). Honestly it’s an average novel, but it has something interesting (probably the narrative or MC's character design like his decision making I guess) that make it stand out among the rest. I think author should organise the polts a little more. And it'll be better if thete are more 'son of destiny/heaven', and MC will deal with 'em normally (not like othe villain novels i mean fu***ing heroines).
i like his way of writing stuff man , it simple fast and the world building is explained point to point in only one or at most two paragraphs , the punchlines and counters at the beginning were good but it slows down a bit , i like the mc cause he skips a lot of boring stuff ( the same as skipping a cutscene in a game you've played multiple times ), as I feel like it's about to become dull , it gets intresting really fast but the romance is kinda slow so if you are looking for a villain who bangs everything , this is not it , it slow in that regard as mc keeps moving back and forth and doesn't abuse his standing , so overall the mc is a chill dude who got reincarnated and does things at a normal human pace
well I leave the novel here I hate the 4th wall, the MC is also very embarrassing and talks about the children of destiny..., he looks like a child and is supposed to be reincarnated, I didn't like the humor at all
its a pity writer has abonded this its one of best cultivation novels and i rly like his writing style on of my favorite alongesides grand ancestral bloodlines author
just the fact that he writes his secret notes in galactic basic (star wars) is really inspirational. lolz
Early chapters contain way too many information and inner monologue but it gets better at later chap. I like the plot and pace But i have to say the chapters are quite short
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this is one of those stories that follows a template more often used in Japanese Fantasy stories, one where the transmigrated person realizes he is the boss in a story with a different main character than him. But instead of it playing out in a galge game setting it is in a xianxia setting. The main character is a bit more pro active in finding the 'protagonists' than in Japanese stories and he forms a team to find those 'protagonists' so that he can avoid them or kill them before they become too strong. The problem that I have with these kinds of stories is that inevitably the main character is just as much a 'protagonist' as the 'protagonists' he tries to avoid / kill. I generally only enjoy this type of story when the main character disconnects himself from the story of the 'protagonist' and that is not really happening in this story. Add to that a cultivation ladder that uses metals (even if you use the explanation of the metal type indicates the hardness of the body I don't like it because I think xianxia stories should use levels that have a Daoism flavor) and some other world building choices that I don't like adds up to make me rate this story not that high. This is more a matter of taste than quality of writing bc the story building, characters and conversations are pretty well written.
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This is so great and hilarious. good history sorry but my english is so bad , im not good writing in english jajaj ........................................
I really enjoy this novel. Our protagonist has transmigrated into the body of a "rich young master". The previous tenet was a typical loser rich young master however the new soul/personality is intelligent, knowledgeable, and determined that he won't become a stepping stone for any MC or Hero that comes along. This story is about how he works hard to become strong, respected, and avoid being the bad guy. It is fun watching he get paranoid about meeting an MC/Hero and making plans to both prevent scenarios where he would be in conflict with an MC and to steal their heaven sent opportunities to keep them from getting strong enough to cause trouble. My biggest and only real complaint is that the updates are VERY slow. I don't want to spoil the fun of reading this so I won't give any more details. I highly recommend this if you like interesting intelligent amusing fun good-guy protagonists. I almost forgot to mention that he is rich and he knows it and he is not afraid use it.
I Love story's plot...when will be next chapter.. I eagerly waiting for it.... please make available next chapter.................. thanks.......best regards to you.....
The novel has a very good start, and the first stages of development are great, but after he killed the protagonist, I feel that he is already losing the initial focus, which was to make the mc the villain, rather than a villain the mc of the novel is becoming more and more like a typical cultivation novel mc and is losing its initial charm.
Amazing novels and the author is a very interactive in the comments and makes it enjoyable . This is not a translation but an original novel. The mc is a cautious person but not so much that it gets annoying . The mc is a fun joyful person and also his family is not dead . He does not blush or be embarrassed about romantic things and likes to flirt with his senior sister. Just give the first 10 chapters a try
Good storyline but unfortunately irregular updates and the caracters descriptions could be better [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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has great potential, would like to be a bit more fast paced, but i think the author already knows that and that is his decision in the end. btw cai zhenkang it just the best as character, dude is jokes
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I am a new reader myself and this is my second review all these years but I've already read until newest chapter to this date. one word for seniors and juniors out there who are interested after reading this novel description. TORTURE, you all must prepare yourself before reading. . . well, this novel is very good and all things, recommended ahahaha, but it's just a new novel so the chapter is not much that's why I hope I found this novel a few months later 😭. well, torture because I enjoy this novel very much and I found it too soon haha. . . . that's it from me, happy reading!!
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Writing Quality - *** Stability of Updates - ***** Story Development - ***** Character Design - ***** World Background - *** I usually don't give reviews, and when I do, it's usually bad ones below 3 stars. This novel, however, made me enjoy myself more than I thought it would. I really found a hidden gem. Writing Quality - Yes, the grammar and English are not the best, but it is actually so minor that it will not disturb your enjoyment of the story. Just ignore those minor grammar issues and you will get the time of your life with the comedy. The narration is enjoyable as well. Stability of Updates - Update is stable I guess? I usually give high score in this section so no issue here. Story Development - This is your 'typical' xianxia novel that has almost all the cliche, but the cliche does not apply to the MC, but the 'Child of the plane AKA MC'. So far, at 100+ chapters, we have only one such 'MC', and he is a villain, but I am looking forward to more to come. Although this story is not original as there are already some other novels that use this plot, the execution done by the author is perfect IMO. Character Design - Talking about the actual MC, he is smart. No, he is actually smart for real, not like some other novels that say the MC is smart when he is really just a retard. There are very few unlikable characters in the novel, the author did a good job not making the whole world the enemy of the MC like some other boring novels. Even if there are some characters you hate, those are made like this on purpose by the author. Very little romance but, there are hints on that here and there. Probably a harem, not that I mind. World Background - The world background is dull tbh, you can probably find tons of other novels out there with similar settings. But I know it is hard to make an interesting world in novels so it does not actually matter much. It also does not take out the enjoyment of the readers. Also, the novel is in an early phase so there should be more options for the author to improve in this aspect. Conclusion - Overall, it is an enjoyable read. Regardless of the flaws, if something is enjoyable, just read it. This is really different from other novels and not your cliche stuff.
After binge reading this novel today I can definitely say I really hope you keep your writing style and can improve it more as this a d*** good novel for webnovel standards! Thank you for this gem author!
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Fun read, some parodies of cultivation novels but I haven't read much of them to understand most of them. Enjoyable nonetheless. Characters mesh well with each and have good interactions, the best part of the story. So far, the antagonists are rather poor. Fighting scenes aren't anything special a lot of them are anticlimactic, I felt like it was a weaker part of the story. Story has a lot of monologue but most of them were enjoyable. Harem members are slowly built up some progress but not too much.
This novel is in the top 5 of the novels that I have ever written. I even read it myself (mostly for editing but that is not the point). Jokes aside, give it a try (〃￣︶￣)人(￣︶￣〃)
Well I can truthfully say that I laughed in every chapter till my stomach hurt. I finally found a novel that gives soul to the characters. WHAT I like most is the Mc’s nine monologue and him constantly breaking the fourth wall like Deadpool
Big shot to the writer and congrats on being viral. The updates are steady, and the story is enticing. The characters are well designed, but I would like to see more visual description regarding what the characters and setting looks like. With that being stated, the world building is next level, and the pacing is excellent. This is definitely one of the better and more well-rounded stories on Webnovel. I recommend it for any prospective readers. The formatting and structure is lovely. I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.
it was a good read. the mc is not ungrateful to his family and loves them. he is a young master but not the typical, has a good sense of humour and certainly is not a puss
The mc is the human manifestation of paranoia. Has a good sense of humour and unlike other wimpy transmigrators, he has self confidence and charisma. Most importantly not a SIMP!! and instead a family man.At first their were problem like some explanations being too big or pacing but later on the quality improves. It is a good read if you want to have a laugh while reading a story with good world development and lovable charactersthe mmc's motto should be
AUTHOR PLEASE REMOVE THE 'HAREM' TAG. IT’S OK IF THERE IS MORE THAN ONE FEMALE LEAD (I THINK THREE OR FOUR IS FINE). Honestly it’s an average novel, but it has something interesting (probably the narrative or MC's character design like his decision making I guess) that make it stand out among the rest. I think author should organise the polts a little more. And it'll be better if thete are more 'son of destiny/heaven', and MC will deal with 'em normally (not like othe villain novels i mean fu***ing heroines).
i like his way of writing stuff man , it simple fast and the world building is explained point to point in only one or at most two paragraphs , the punchlines and counters at the beginning were good but it slows down a bit , i like the mc cause he skips a lot of boring stuff ( the same as skipping a cutscene in a game you've played multiple times ), as I feel like it's about to become dull , it gets intresting really fast but the romance is kinda slow so if you are looking for a villain who bangs everything , this is not it , it slow in that regard as mc keeps moving back and forth and doesn't abuse his standing , so overall the mc is a chill dude who got reincarnated and does things at a normal human pace
well I leave the novel here I hate the 4th wall, the MC is also very embarrassing and talks about the children of destiny..., he looks like a child and is supposed to be reincarnated, I didn't like the humor at all
its a pity writer has abonded this its one of best cultivation novels and i rly like his writing style on of my favorite alongesides grand ancestral bloodlines author
just the fact that he writes his secret notes in galactic basic (star wars) is really inspirational. lolz
Early chapters contain way too many information and inner monologue but it gets better at later chap. I like the plot and pace But i have to say the chapters are quite short
droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?droped?
Why chapter upload are stopped Why chapter upload are stopped Why chapter upload are stopped Why chapter upload are stopped Why chapter upload are stopped Why chapter upload are stopped
this is one of those stories that follows a template more often used in Japanese Fantasy stories, one where the transmigrated person realizes he is the boss in a story with a different main character than him. But instead of it playing out in a galge game setting it is in a xianxia setting. The main character is a bit more pro active in finding the 'protagonists' than in Japanese stories and he forms a team to find those 'protagonists' so that he can avoid them or kill them before they become too strong. The problem that I have with these kinds of stories is that inevitably the main character is just as much a 'protagonist' as the 'protagonists' he tries to avoid / kill. I generally only enjoy this type of story when the main character disconnects himself from the story of the 'protagonist' and that is not really happening in this story. Add to that a cultivation ladder that uses metals (even if you use the explanation of the metal type indicates the hardness of the body I don't like it because I think xianxia stories should use levels that have a Daoism flavor) and some other world building choices that I don't like adds up to make me rate this story not that high. This is more a matter of taste than quality of writing bc the story building, characters and conversations are pretty well written.
author died of covid19 FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
This is so great and hilarious. good history sorry but my english is so bad , im not good writing in english jajaj ........................................
I really enjoy this novel. Our protagonist has transmigrated into the body of a "rich young master". The previous tenet was a typical loser rich young master however the new soul/personality is intelligent, knowledgeable, and determined that he won't become a stepping stone for any MC or Hero that comes along. This story is about how he works hard to become strong, respected, and avoid being the bad guy. It is fun watching he get paranoid about meeting an MC/Hero and making plans to both prevent scenarios where he would be in conflict with an MC and to steal their heaven sent opportunities to keep them from getting strong enough to cause trouble. My biggest and only real complaint is that the updates are VERY slow. I don't want to spoil the fun of reading this so I won't give any more details. I highly recommend this if you like interesting intelligent amusing fun good-guy protagonists. I almost forgot to mention that he is rich and he knows it and he is not afraid use it.
I Love story's plot...when will be next chapter.. I eagerly waiting for it.... please make available next chapter.................. thanks.......best regards to you.....
The novel has a very good start, and the first stages of development are great, but after he killed the protagonist, I feel that he is already losing the initial focus, which was to make the mc the villain, rather than a villain the mc of the novel is becoming more and more like a typical cultivation novel mc and is losing its initial charm.
Amazing novels and the author is a very interactive in the comments and makes it enjoyable . This is not a translation but an original novel. The mc is a cautious person but not so much that it gets annoying . The mc is a fun joyful person and also his family is not dead . He does not blush or be embarrassed about romantic things and likes to flirt with his senior sister. Just give the first 10 chapters a try
Good storyline but unfortunately irregular updates and the caracters descriptions could be better [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
it's a masterpiece ............................................................................................................................
has great potential, would like to be a bit more fast paced, but i think the author already knows that and that is his decision in the end. btw cai zhenkang it just the best as character, dude is jokes
ネタバレを明かす is the story currently on hiatus or dropped.cant see any updates currently........ ................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ........................................sgbshdbskshsbsgdvbshdbdhdgsbdjxjdbdbdhdbdjdjhxndndndjdjxh
I am a new reader myself and this is my second review all these years but I've already read until newest chapter to this date. one word for seniors and juniors out there who are interested after reading this novel description. TORTURE, you all must prepare yourself before reading. . . well, this novel is very good and all things, recommended ahahaha, but it's just a new novel so the chapter is not much that's why I hope I found this novel a few months later 😭. well, torture because I enjoy this novel very much and I found it too soon haha. . . . that's it from me, happy reading!!
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing Quality - *** Stability of Updates - ***** Story Development - ***** Character Design - ***** World Background - *** I usually don't give reviews, and when I do, it's usually bad ones below 3 stars. This novel, however, made me enjoy myself more than I thought it would. I really found a hidden gem. Writing Quality - Yes, the grammar and English are not the best, but it is actually so minor that it will not disturb your enjoyment of the story. Just ignore those minor grammar issues and you will get the time of your life with the comedy. The narration is enjoyable as well. Stability of Updates - Update is stable I guess? I usually give high score in this section so no issue here. Story Development - This is your 'typical' xianxia novel that has almost all the cliche, but the cliche does not apply to the MC, but the 'Child of the plane AKA MC'. So far, at 100+ chapters, we have only one such 'MC', and he is a villain, but I am looking forward to more to come. Although this story is not original as there are already some other novels that use this plot, the execution done by the author is perfect IMO. Character Design - Talking about the actual MC, he is smart. No, he is actually smart for real, not like some other novels that say the MC is smart when he is really just a retard. There are very few unlikable characters in the novel, the author did a good job not making the whole world the enemy of the MC like some other boring novels. Even if there are some characters you hate, those are made like this on purpose by the author. Very little romance but, there are hints on that here and there. Probably a harem, not that I mind. World Background - The world background is dull tbh, you can probably find tons of other novels out there with similar settings. But I know it is hard to make an interesting world in novels so it does not actually matter much. It also does not take out the enjoyment of the readers. Also, the novel is in an early phase so there should be more options for the author to improve in this aspect. Conclusion - Overall, it is an enjoyable read. Regardless of the flaws, if something is enjoyable, just read it. This is really different from other novels and not your cliche stuff.
After binge reading this novel today I can definitely say I really hope you keep your writing style and can improve it more as this a d*** good novel for webnovel standards! Thank you for this gem author!
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Fun read, some parodies of cultivation novels but I haven't read much of them to understand most of them. Enjoyable nonetheless. Characters mesh well with each and have good interactions, the best part of the story. So far, the antagonists are rather poor. Fighting scenes aren't anything special a lot of them are anticlimactic, I felt like it was a weaker part of the story. Story has a lot of monologue but most of them were enjoyable. Harem members are slowly built up some progress but not too much.
This novel is in the top 5 of the novels that I have ever written. I even read it myself (mostly for editing but that is not the point). Jokes aside, give it a try (〃￣︶￣)人(￣︶￣〃)