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The Mafia Game ( Hired Gun )

Teen 60 章 127.4K ビュー
作者: ayen_zone

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Eighteen years old, Ava Smith Kriezer, is on the hunt for the people responsible for her parents' tragic incident that happened years ago.

Ava is one of the young skilled fighters known in the dim, hidden, empty lots and streets of gang wars and street fights.


One unfortunate night, she didn't have the choice to fight, and she decided to stay defenseless. That night, when she thought she stepped inside death's door... she opened her eyes to learn that she is the granddaughter of a multibillionaire old man that she have never seen nor heard before.


Despite being unsure and curious about how her situation turned into, she ran away and stayed determined in her ultimate goal! ...but every time she gets closer, and gets a lead, one of her grandfather's men, Shyn Lee, is always in the picture... helping her. Could he be the knight in shining armor to save her from her broken world? ... or the one who will shatter it more?


(Parental guidance is recommended and that the novel may be unsuitable for younger children.)

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    kuhaku_sora

    This is a fun story to read! The synopsis is great, and I love it! if the author can execute this perfectly, then you can have my 10 stars!!!! The only thing that I'd like to mention is the usage of onomatopoeia. It is okay to use it, but it would be better if you can add more depth into it. For an example the BAAANG could be improve like "I heard a blaring shot coming from elsewhere. It was like a sond of something cracking abruptly..." something like that.

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    Jo_J
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    A great cover page! Nicely written synopsis, which makes me curious about the content. You have an interesting concept for your story. The plot is intriguing. You're doing well! Good luck with the contest! I wish I could have more power stones ;)

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    SpilledInk

    I like this! This book has a truly beautiful storyline.💕 I really like how the author depicts the emotions of the characters in each scene. It's subtle, realistic and exact. The story flows so naturally and so it's easy for readers to follow. Nice work, author.👏👏👏

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    Blackpaint

    First few chapters already hooked me in! I love how the author depicts the MC's emotions. It felt so realistic. I also like that you give space for readers to paint their own imagination regarding the world building because I have the same thoughts when I write. This story will stay in my library!~

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    Cher_Yan

    Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️

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    Samantha_R_Samuel

    So far I am loving what I am reading, there are a few grammatical errors but all of nothing that can’t be easily corrected🤗 I would recommend this book it is quite interesting to read I think you all might agree with me💕🤗Kudos to the author

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    Itsuki_Suzuki

    Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

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    Mayemura

    This is a very good story. I love how you give a detailed description of your characters and setting .However, I rated it 4.8 because of the errors . The tenses mix-up cause the grammar to be erratic. Please correct that and this will be a very catchy story. With that being said, overall you have great potential and I am going to be reading this story too. Already in my library 😃. I know that I want to journey with Ava to the end

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    Empzze
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    Nice work author, intriguing plot and interesting storyline, the story had me hooked in the first chapter, and I really like the pacing too. keep up the good work author i’m cheering for you and i added it to my library already.

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    REaper

    Interesting storyline and unique plot, you can display a lot of character development in the novel, writing needs to be improved otherwise interesting novel, hope to see interesting updates in future

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    _Rain
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    Woah!! I like it..!!! I loved the plot and the flow is smooth. The writing made it easier for me to relate to the character. Looking forward to know the mystery behind her parents. Good luck, Author❤️❤️

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    PinkLemons

    Pretty good. The author really knows how to describe the rush of feelings of the characters. It's a good one to check out if you love mafia novels. Captivating plot. I like it.[img=recommend]

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    Princess_debbs26

    The story has me hooked. A very interesting storyline. I love Ava with the little I have read. The book is a replica of perfection 💖💖. The author did a great job of presenting Ava's emotions.

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    Samcrowned00

    Wow, this book is such a too interesting one and I am sure it will become popular in this app. Good diction. More update from the author please.

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    Mrtin_Monarch

    This story has consistency and an incredible protagonist as well good descriptive writing, can't wait to see how it progresses, already added it to my library by the first chapter

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    Yashima099

    First of all, the book cover is superb and the synopsis was well. I like how you convey the character’s feeling and how descriptive the scence are, I’m only at the beginning and I can tell this book will be great. I’ll definitely finish and wait for the upcoming chapters! Kudos to you Author! 🥰

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    Riyah404

    This is a gripping story. A page-turner. The pacing was nice and easy to follow. You can instantly feel the MC's emotion. Great job, author! Keep on writing! :) I want to read more! :)

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    listen_moon

    Gosh, mind blowing plot. The book cover attracted me a lot. Am attracted most to the novels with featuring female leads with 'brave ' and 'savage ' vibes. It one of the precious gems in that field. Keep writing. ✌✌

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    Bunny_Junnie

    Wow! Just great! The author have a great skill of writing! It's very unique and interesting! I add this book in my library so that I will read it slowly and learn some techniques from you. Now time for a review..... Synopsis is very interesting and plot is really very well defined. I feel like I went into the story! Great job author! Keep it up! I loved it!

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    Oracle_Myth

    The writing style is unique and the author knows how to write action scenes for sure. If you are looking for something that is action-packed and flows easily - this is for you.

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    Chapter 59: 57 2 years ago

    卷 1 : In The Dark

    1. 1
      Chapter 1: Ava's Night 3 years ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2: Pain's Birth 3 years ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3: A Smith 3 years ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4: The Person We Are Not 3 years ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5: The Goosebumps 3 years ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6: Babysitter Shyn 3 years ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7: I Am Here, You Know 3 years ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8: Breathe... 3 years ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9: Chances 3 years ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10: The Red Restaurant 3 years ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11: Goals 3 years ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12: Pent-up Emotions 3 years ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 13: Jet & The Gladiolus Clan 3 years ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 14: Surprise 3 years ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 15: Sketches 3 years ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 16: Curiosity Killed The Cat 3 years ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 17: Meeting The Grim Reapers 3 years ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 18: You're My Caterpillar 3 years ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 19: Letting Go... 3 years ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 20: Shyn's Curiosity 3 years ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 21: Who are you... Shyn? 3 years ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 22: Stepping Up The Game 3 years ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 23: Game Player Shyn 3 years ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 24: Another Day With A Tail 3 years ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 25: The Nuisance And The Advantages 3 years ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 26: Counterattack 3 years ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 27: The Ice Cream Is Cold, But Someone's Feelings Are Burning Hot 3 years ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 28: Feelings 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 29: Mornings are... 3 years ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 30: Shocking... 3 years ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 31: Fifth 3 years ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 32: The Bat 3 years ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 33: Listen... 3 years ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 34: Plans? (A Short Update) 3 years ago
    35. 35
      Chapter 35: Eyes On Me 3 years ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 36: Flashing Lights 3 years ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 37: Fire On Fire 3 years ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 38: Protecting 3 years ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 39: Strange Things 3 years ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 40: Letters 3 years ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 41: Red Dots 3 years ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 42: Peak of the Iceberg 3 years ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 43: Unnoticed Change 3 years ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 44: Just Whining 3 years ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 45: Late Nights 2 years ago
    46. 46
      Chapter 46: Late Nights (Part 2) 2 years ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 47: Darkness 2 years ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 48: Storm 2 years ago
    49. 49
      Chapter 49: Different Kind of Fights 2 years ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 50: Between Darkness And The Darker Side 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 51: RED 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Chapter 52: I Know You 2 years ago

    作者 ayen_zone