has potential but definetly need to reread before posting, its not so much the grammar but more like calling the mc she/her all the time and I'm starting to think the mc is suppose to be a woman and not a man.
has potential but definetly need to reread before posting, its not so much the grammar but more like calling the mc she/her all the time and I'm starting to think the mc is suppose to be a woman and not a man.
has potential but definetly need to reread before posting, its not so much the grammar but more like calling the mc she/her all the time and I'm starting to think the mc is suppose to be a woman and not a man.