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Al primer capítulo me lo venía venir al segundo tenía ganas y al tercero lo dropeo con ganas el tema de los deseos es estúpido e inútil pero bueno el autor lo habrá escrito en el momento por aburrimiento
TAKE MY POWER STONES THIS IS SO GOOD I NEED MORE OF THIS MORE MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MOEE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE KORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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This novel is one of the better novels I've seen and if not the best. I'm hoping for more chapters and really interested in what happens in the future
It's a bit on the edgy side for me coupled with the fact that I hate harems this may be a little biased but here goes. The writing quality is good I'm pretty sure he is a native English speaker and I have seen no mistakes in his grammar and punctuation. His speed on updates is pretty slow and sporadic but considering he is doing this for fun that is expected. Story development is predictable and simple and doesn't show much thought but again is expected since he is doing this for fun. Character design is complex and shows they're thought process which most of the time is reasonable. World background this is a fanfic so I guess it's just the way they present the background of it which I am supposed to review which I would say he (I'm assuming the author is a he) does a pretty good job but I feel like you would have to have general knowledge about one piece to follow the story which you should if you are reading a fanfic about it. 3/5 Overall Review: Is a decent fanfic which shows despite him doing this for fun he does put in effort. I would say Character Design and Writing Quality are the highlights of the fanfic he does research to help us the readers understand the concepts he is trying to get across better and in my opinion is a talented writer despite that this is not my cup of tea still 166 thousand people read the things you type so this definitely pleases a wide range of people so keep doing and don't get discouraged as people are reading your work even if it doesn't feel like it. In case you don't want to read all that: Decent fanfic not my cup of tea.
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over all this fanfic is one of the best I have read. the grammar and story flow are fantastic. please don't drop this fanfic its one of the best.
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honestamente tiene pocos capitulos y todo pero considerando que es nuevo escribiendo y ademas el protagonista es bastante decente yo diria (osea le puse 5 estrellas obviamente va a ser decente para mi) y si el no lo deja abandonado yo digo que se volveria mejor de lo que ya es y seria unas 5 estrellas en todo
so far so good but please go ahead don't follow the MC too much and don't be too loud like he's an idiot who will save everyone, just like he is neutral but when there is evil in front of his eyes he will judge his "sins" and for the world, I suggest to animeverse first like DXD, OP, NARUTO, BLEACH, MHA, AGK or others after a while you get bored then you can change to games or movies like resident evil or god of war/percy jackson,oh and I hope the update is stable every 1-2 days.
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Hi author 🙂, i join for reading for Adventures Isn't it about Ghost rider multiverse very interested, so anyways author i vote for you good single day
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Al primer capítulo me lo venía venir al segundo tenía ganas y al tercero lo dropeo con ganas el tema de los deseos es estúpido e inútil pero bueno el autor lo habrá escrito en el momento por aburrimiento
TAKE MY POWER STONES THIS IS SO GOOD I NEED MORE OF THIS MORE MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MOEE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE KORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Thank you!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This novel is one of the better novels I've seen and if not the best. I'm hoping for more chapters and really interested in what happens in the future
It's a bit on the edgy side for me coupled with the fact that I hate harems this may be a little biased but here goes. The writing quality is good I'm pretty sure he is a native English speaker and I have seen no mistakes in his grammar and punctuation. His speed on updates is pretty slow and sporadic but considering he is doing this for fun that is expected. Story development is predictable and simple and doesn't show much thought but again is expected since he is doing this for fun. Character design is complex and shows they're thought process which most of the time is reasonable. World background this is a fanfic so I guess it's just the way they present the background of it which I am supposed to review which I would say he (I'm assuming the author is a he) does a pretty good job but I feel like you would have to have general knowledge about one piece to follow the story which you should if you are reading a fanfic about it. 3/5 Overall Review: Is a decent fanfic which shows despite him doing this for fun he does put in effort. I would say Character Design and Writing Quality are the highlights of the fanfic he does research to help us the readers understand the concepts he is trying to get across better and in my opinion is a talented writer despite that this is not my cup of tea still 166 thousand people read the things you type so this definitely pleases a wide range of people so keep doing and don't get discouraged as people are reading your work even if it doesn't feel like it. In case you don't want to read all that: Decent fanfic not my cup of tea.
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Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
over all this fanfic is one of the best I have read. the grammar and story flow are fantastic. please don't drop this fanfic its one of the best.
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honestamente tiene pocos capitulos y todo pero considerando que es nuevo escribiendo y ademas el protagonista es bastante decente yo diria (osea le puse 5 estrellas obviamente va a ser decente para mi) y si el no lo deja abandonado yo digo que se volveria mejor de lo que ya es y seria unas 5 estrellas en todo
so far so good but please go ahead don't follow the MC too much and don't be too loud like he's an idiot who will save everyone, just like he is neutral but when there is evil in front of his eyes he will judge his "sins" and for the world, I suggest to animeverse first like DXD, OP, NARUTO, BLEACH, MHA, AGK or others after a while you get bored then you can change to games or movies like resident evil or god of war/percy jackson,oh and I hope the update is stable every 1-2 days.
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Hi author 🙂, i join for reading for Adventures Isn't it about Ghost rider multiverse very interested, so anyways author i vote for you good single day
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Interesting one piece fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍