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When you come across a good book. I really like how the story is moving along. I don't have any complaints so far. I look forward to reading more of the story in the coming days.
Good but to much traing arc i got bored not recommend for does who dont like slow novel *********************************************
So far its a very interesting concept not many books do a good job with both space and time magic. However I believe this one has done quite well plus its still keeping us on our toes about his third affinity. Can’t wait to see what other spells he comes up with.
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I love the story. The words flow and has amazing grammar. The characters have depth, which is better than a lot of the two dimensional characters out there. Rarely do I give 5 stars, but this book deserves it.
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
I absolutly loved reading these 33 chapters and I'm at a loss now. Did the Author go get milk and left this kid of his with such great potential in abondonment? In my oppinion the story and character building are awesome and can definitely keep up with (for example) The Beginning After The End. I love how the author describes the way how the mc grasps time and space. He pictures the ways of training and surrounding of the mc so clearly, it feels as if I'm watching a movie (pretty much). I would like this comment making the author come back and continue his writing regards to you for the great work of yours up until now. Unfortunately I can't rate the updating stability bc I just read the story a few days ago[img=recommend]
When you come across a good book. I really like how the story is moving along. I don't have any complaints so far. I look forward to reading more of the story in the coming days.
Good but to much traing arc i got bored not recommend for does who dont like slow novel *********************************************
So far its a very interesting concept not many books do a good job with both space and time magic. However I believe this one has done quite well plus its still keeping us on our toes about his third affinity. Can’t wait to see what other spells he comes up with.
ネタバレを明かす I love the story. The words flow and has amazing grammar. The characters have depth, which is better than a lot of the two dimensional characters out there. Rarely do I give 5 stars, but this book deserves it.
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
I absolutly loved reading these 33 chapters and I'm at a loss now. Did the Author go get milk and left this kid of his with such great potential in abondonment? In my oppinion the story and character building are awesome and can definitely keep up with (for example) The Beginning After The End. I love how the author describes the way how the mc grasps time and space. He pictures the ways of training and surrounding of the mc so clearly, it feels as if I'm watching a movie (pretty much). I would like this comment making the author come back and continue his writing regards to you for the great work of yours up until now. Unfortunately I can't rate the updating stability bc I just read the story a few days ago[img=recommend]