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A very interesting stoty. The way Temari's Character was designed and the other characters too is very refreshing and life like. This book is addictive and the same time immersive. I hope to see from chapters!!! Great Job!!
So far so good. Interesting theme. The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.
The beginning is interesting and intriguing, making you want more. The characters are alive and behaving realistically. Thumbы up to author. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I should be honest and I say this has to be a movie! The opening intro to the world and the plot very hooking for me. Not all can execute such a hooking chapter like yours! Kudos! Grammar was okay and it was readable and I hope I can read a hundred chaps in one go! Haha nice nice nice!
If there is a rating 6, I might give it six!! This story is really easy to get addicted to!!! Temari's behaviors are also cute and most importantly I FELT IN LOVE WITH RHYS from the start! The cover is also eye catching and your writing style is also easy to read! The pace is also well!! Will be waiting for future chapters, author!!
Beautiful cover page! The plot is interesting and your main character also. From the very beginning, you nicely describe the world you created. You're doing well! Good luck with the contest!
This is a good story that more people should read. I hope more people can discover this gem. It has a good flow and it is obvious that the author really thought about the plot well
Ok, ok. Hear me out. I love your prose and pacing. Seriously. Everything just flows really smooth. This goes right to my library. I don't know if I can add much to the review, besides that I really enjoyed the read.
It's a good story. I'm into mystical and creepy lands. (don't ask me why) The first chap was a little slow but the later ones had good pacing. the grammar and the use of tense could use a little work but overall, this was a good read.
Wow! Another enthralling, intriguing, and great story I've ever read. The storyline is perfectly planned, every chapter was written adequately. Such a great book from you Author. Added it to my library, good luck and I'll be waiting for more chapters.
The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
Excellent book, Author!! The naration so smooth and it clearly pictures in my head. Already add to collection. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] Good Job!
Promising story. Interesting development. still new and I still have many questions but I will keep on reading to know what will happen. Kudos to the author
Hi. Foxy Fairy here. This is my first royal romance story and my first serialized story here in webnovel. I hope you take a chance to read this and if you like it, I hope you can leave a review and share it with other readers. :) I am enjoying plotting and writing this story so there will be a lot of twists and turns in store. :)
So I came across this story accidentally and it seems interesting! I love the world building at the beginning and the writing voice is easy to read. Keep up the good work! 😊
I have not been as seen in by a story since Lucia and The Remarried Empress. It is unfortunate that many stories are over rated so the rating system is less meaningful. This story is deserving of a five star rating.
A very interesting stoty. The way Temari's Character was designed and the other characters too is very refreshing and life like. This book is addictive and the same time immersive. I hope to see from chapters!!! Great Job!!
So far so good. Interesting theme. The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.
The beginning is interesting and intriguing, making you want more. The characters are alive and behaving realistically. Thumbы up to author. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I should be honest and I say this has to be a movie! The opening intro to the world and the plot very hooking for me. Not all can execute such a hooking chapter like yours! Kudos! Grammar was okay and it was readable and I hope I can read a hundred chaps in one go! Haha nice nice nice!
If there is a rating 6, I might give it six!! This story is really easy to get addicted to!!! Temari's behaviors are also cute and most importantly I FELT IN LOVE WITH RHYS from the start! The cover is also eye catching and your writing style is also easy to read! The pace is also well!! Will be waiting for future chapters, author!!
Beautiful cover page! The plot is interesting and your main character also. From the very beginning, you nicely describe the world you created. You're doing well! Good luck with the contest!
This is a good story that more people should read. I hope more people can discover this gem. It has a good flow and it is obvious that the author really thought about the plot well
Ok, ok. Hear me out. I love your prose and pacing. Seriously. Everything just flows really smooth. This goes right to my library. I don't know if I can add much to the review, besides that I really enjoyed the read.
It's a good story. I'm into mystical and creepy lands. (don't ask me why) The first chap was a little slow but the later ones had good pacing. the grammar and the use of tense could use a little work but overall, this was a good read.
Wow! Another enthralling, intriguing, and great story I've ever read. The storyline is perfectly planned, every chapter was written adequately. Such a great book from you Author. Added it to my library, good luck and I'll be waiting for more chapters.
The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
Excellent book, Author!! The naration so smooth and it clearly pictures in my head. Already add to collection. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] Good Job!
Promising story. Interesting development. still new and I still have many questions but I will keep on reading to know what will happen. Kudos to the author
Hi. Foxy Fairy here. This is my first royal romance story and my first serialized story here in webnovel. I hope you take a chance to read this and if you like it, I hope you can leave a review and share it with other readers. :) I am enjoying plotting and writing this story so there will be a lot of twists and turns in store. :)
So I came across this story accidentally and it seems interesting! I love the world building at the beginning and the writing voice is easy to read. Keep up the good work! 😊
I have not been as seen in by a story since Lucia and The Remarried Empress. It is unfortunate that many stories are over rated so the rating system is less meaningful. This story is deserving of a five star rating.