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it is a good novel and im just writing this for exp so yeah ignore me ...............................................................................
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Seeing how everyone made high review I decided to give the story a try....well it turned out be a disappointment. Story was rushed and the characters are bleak. Mc is suppose to be some cold blooded murderer whose goal is to reach the top but his personality make this novel a comedy. One of the most annoying part of this story was watching him face everything with ease, as if he’s some untouchable god even though all he did in his past was beating up and killing some gangster brutally. He breezes through the tower and when he reached around floor 5, he fed a lvl3 mutated zombie until it turned into a lvl 25 monster. Well what happened? He killed it of course. What was his lvl? Around 7..... this novel is a nonsense and full with cliches. Read this if you want to read about op mc while shutting off your brain.
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Among the best novels on WN. It has good grammar, with mistakes few and far between. The writing balances its serious story with lively language and timely jokes (mind you, actually funny jokes). Almost all characters introduced are a interseting and serve some kind of purpose, but the story never goes too far with the unimportant ones. Josh, the MC, is extremely interesting, with an intriguing backstory and lots of personality. The world background is interesting, not exactly a new concept, but definitely a good take on it. It has lots of room to expand, as most is learned as the MC learns it. The story developes steadily, but is slightly slow at times (this can be considered as my own preference). Definately on my top 5 list on WN.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This novel is hilarious, the MC is extremely OP and have a warped vision of what being "normal" is, to everyone who watched and loved one punch man, I would recommend this novel without hesitation.
The story is great! It starts amazingly and has realistic and incredible points of interest. There’s a mix of comedy added that is fun to read, though it gets to a bit much. The story is great up until about chapter 215. After that, and even at that point, the realistic, action-packed and gritty story turns into a complete unrealistic comedy designed to mock the previous chapters. There are complete 180’s for nearly every character and thr progression of the story stagnates early on until it completely stops. SLIGHT SPOILER- - - - Josh Malum at around 215 ish and afterwards is a total comedy character thay does whatever he wants, mocks everyone, has this insane brovado that lets him overcome anything no matter what, mocks the military and uses them for stupid fun and the very-serious-very-strong members if society bow down to him only because of their sudden interest in a made-up guild no one has heard of except from the rookie competition. This “made up” guild apparently garnered SO MUCH attention from its mention in the rookie competition championship that the military and B/A/S rated guilds bow to him and his every whim. Then it gets to the alter tower and ifs ridiculous weird challenges that are so dumb and random it ruins the story almost immediately. Honestly, I’m pretty sure the author was changed around chapter 140 or so. Great start of a book, and I loved it. The comedy and how far it went ruined it for me. It was all so random and forced it was hard to read.
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The most fun novel I've read on this site so far (and I've read 100+ without an account)! Very refreshing, high octane and fast paced. If you are a web novel (Korean, Chinese & Japanese) rotten water like me, you'll find this very fun!
rarely does a first chapter so perfectly highlight the contents of the book. I'm generally a fan of framed stories, I've read quite a few that use this literary technique. This was a masterful use of it.
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Keep the chapters coming ❤ Been dumping all of my golden tickets and power stones in here to keep it going. My favorite new webnovel, has affordable privilege prices and great content. Going to throw in some gifts if it keeps consistent with high quality!
See what you make me do? a review This novel is an overload of Cynicism and pop culture references in a nice little tower of perfect placement for optimal punch power the author is having fun and you will notice
it's just too simple. the character isn't consistent. there is no thrill. the writing is of an amateur who actually tried. i read till the guy reached floor 7 and then it got cringey, boring and predictable. The fight scenes aren't really fight scenes, it's just the mc doing things.
Fan-JoshMFMalum-tastic Would recommened to anyone with more than 3 brain cells. If you have less than that, go suck on the balls of a snake backwards. Good writing, Funny. What more do you need, you primate. The funny sticks make the happy brain mush juice.
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This novel is just amaxing and for once i cant say anything bad about the novel other than the fact that sometimes there a few spelling errors, but thats normal and barely noticibale and the only reason this isn’t A 5 star is because the mc got cockblocked! F you author!
To every prospective reader this book mc Josh gives you the feeling better of John from Dragonborn saga. Though I must say it is a crude version as I only read 1st 30 chapter before reviewing. Overall ok author is trying to create that op atmosphere around mc.
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I love this novel, the story is amazing. I like how he interacts with the tower system and how he always finds a way to defeat his enemies. But, although I understand that it's pretty boring to see his stats every chapter, you should still put it sometimes to keep in mind how strong he is at the moment. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
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I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this after the first few chapters, but it quickly became one of my favourites. There is so much depth given to the characters throughout the story, I was pleasantly surprised. This is really a top tier novel.
All I can say is that, this story is awesome. The way you portray your character, their actions, the reactions from the other characters, how they think, feel is amazing, and I wish more stories were like yours. Please continue creating such an amazing peace of literature. :)
This is an amazing novel that i always look forward to reading. the characters are amazingly full, and the story so far is extremely funny and entertaining. The world is well designed with good connections being made. overall i highly recommend this to anyone
this is like watching Deadpool climb the tower. there are many lol moments. lots of chapters. lots and lots of chapters weekly. watching crazy has never been so fun.
it is a good novel and im just writing this for exp so yeah ignore me ...............................................................................
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Seeing how everyone made high review I decided to give the story a try....well it turned out be a disappointment. Story was rushed and the characters are bleak. Mc is suppose to be some cold blooded murderer whose goal is to reach the top but his personality make this novel a comedy. One of the most annoying part of this story was watching him face everything with ease, as if he’s some untouchable god even though all he did in his past was beating up and killing some gangster brutally. He breezes through the tower and when he reached around floor 5, he fed a lvl3 mutated zombie until it turned into a lvl 25 monster. Well what happened? He killed it of course. What was his lvl? Around 7..... this novel is a nonsense and full with cliches. Read this if you want to read about op mc while shutting off your brain.
ネタバレを明かす Among the best novels on WN. It has good grammar, with mistakes few and far between. The writing balances its serious story with lively language and timely jokes (mind you, actually funny jokes). Almost all characters introduced are a interseting and serve some kind of purpose, but the story never goes too far with the unimportant ones. Josh, the MC, is extremely interesting, with an intriguing backstory and lots of personality. The world background is interesting, not exactly a new concept, but definitely a good take on it. It has lots of room to expand, as most is learned as the MC learns it. The story developes steadily, but is slightly slow at times (this can be considered as my own preference). Definately on my top 5 list on WN.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This novel is hilarious, the MC is extremely OP and have a warped vision of what being "normal" is, to everyone who watched and loved one punch man, I would recommend this novel without hesitation.
The story is great! It starts amazingly and has realistic and incredible points of interest. There’s a mix of comedy added that is fun to read, though it gets to a bit much. The story is great up until about chapter 215. After that, and even at that point, the realistic, action-packed and gritty story turns into a complete unrealistic comedy designed to mock the previous chapters. There are complete 180’s for nearly every character and thr progression of the story stagnates early on until it completely stops. SLIGHT SPOILER- - - - Josh Malum at around 215 ish and afterwards is a total comedy character thay does whatever he wants, mocks everyone, has this insane brovado that lets him overcome anything no matter what, mocks the military and uses them for stupid fun and the very-serious-very-strong members if society bow down to him only because of their sudden interest in a made-up guild no one has heard of except from the rookie competition. This “made up” guild apparently garnered SO MUCH attention from its mention in the rookie competition championship that the military and B/A/S rated guilds bow to him and his every whim. Then it gets to the alter tower and ifs ridiculous weird challenges that are so dumb and random it ruins the story almost immediately. Honestly, I’m pretty sure the author was changed around chapter 140 or so. Great start of a book, and I loved it. The comedy and how far it went ruined it for me. It was all so random and forced it was hard to read.
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The most fun novel I've read on this site so far (and I've read 100+ without an account)! Very refreshing, high octane and fast paced. If you are a web novel (Korean, Chinese & Japanese) rotten water like me, you'll find this very fun!
rarely does a first chapter so perfectly highlight the contents of the book. I'm generally a fan of framed stories, I've read quite a few that use this literary technique. This was a masterful use of it.
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Keep the chapters coming ❤ Been dumping all of my golden tickets and power stones in here to keep it going. My favorite new webnovel, has affordable privilege prices and great content. Going to throw in some gifts if it keeps consistent with high quality!
See what you make me do? a review This novel is an overload of Cynicism and pop culture references in a nice little tower of perfect placement for optimal punch power the author is having fun and you will notice
it's just too simple. the character isn't consistent. there is no thrill. the writing is of an amateur who actually tried. i read till the guy reached floor 7 and then it got cringey, boring and predictable. The fight scenes aren't really fight scenes, it's just the mc doing things.
Fan-JoshMFMalum-tastic Would recommened to anyone with more than 3 brain cells. If you have less than that, go suck on the balls of a snake backwards. Good writing, Funny. What more do you need, you primate. The funny sticks make the happy brain mush juice.
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This novel is just amaxing and for once i cant say anything bad about the novel other than the fact that sometimes there a few spelling errors, but thats normal and barely noticibale and the only reason this isn’t A 5 star is because the mc got cockblocked! F you author!
To every prospective reader this book mc Josh gives you the feeling better of John from Dragonborn saga. Though I must say it is a crude version as I only read 1st 30 chapter before reviewing. Overall ok author is trying to create that op atmosphere around mc.
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I love this novel, the story is amazing. I like how he interacts with the tower system and how he always finds a way to defeat his enemies. But, although I understand that it's pretty boring to see his stats every chapter, you should still put it sometimes to keep in mind how strong he is at the moment. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
ネタバレを明かす I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this after the first few chapters, but it quickly became one of my favourites. There is so much depth given to the characters throughout the story, I was pleasantly surprised. This is really a top tier novel.
All I can say is that, this story is awesome. The way you portray your character, their actions, the reactions from the other characters, how they think, feel is amazing, and I wish more stories were like yours. Please continue creating such an amazing peace of literature. :)
This is an amazing novel that i always look forward to reading. the characters are amazingly full, and the story so far is extremely funny and entertaining. The world is well designed with good connections being made. overall i highly recommend this to anyone
this is like watching Deadpool climb the tower. there are many lol moments. lots of chapters. lots and lots of chapters weekly. watching crazy has never been so fun.