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It's your typical Marvel story and honestly it's not even that well written it's not bad for a fast read but it's not worth adding to favorites and wishing daily for Chappys it's more of the Read till recent chaps and then forget about it for months type.
why did you give up/drop all of your books? What happened? Did you get both of your hands lopped off?
Good stuff, it has; Comedy. 09/10 Action. 06/10 Evil MC. 10/10 Overall its good to read as the cruelty is not openly shown, giving chance to those thar dislike Evil MC to like it as well 5 outta 5 + an Asian, Pakistani wrote it with actually good writing. .. Love it fam.
Ma man Dracula (Author) truly leaves me speechless… i have finished 2 novels and i want MOREE!!! Well actually not really speechless i only have one word that is "MOREEEEEEEEEEE"
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Great start with a lot if potential. MC has room to grow but doesn’t get pushed around. Have really high hopes foe this. ALSO DEATH WIFU YANDERE ALREADY MAKES IT PERFECT.
Seems like a pretty good novel but theres just a lot of minor errors. Not capitalizing, spaces before commas, mispelled words, etc. There’s also a lot of timeskips but that makes sense because he’s like 200 years or smth behind the MCU. The story is mostly just MC learns more magic -> fights with someone and then repeat.
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I realy Like the novel and I'm sad since you droppped it. And I would Like it of you Inform US of you drop it since Sometimes you cant know If its droppped or Not.
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I had to give 5 star review because of the profoundness of the ooga booga and I didn’t have power stones hence I couldn’t comprehend it’s profound nature.
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The story is a bit goofy and there are grammar problems here and there but the story is great and MC isn't spineless. Even if the story may seem like a parody it isn't, author just memes a lot. The MC is getting stronger gradually by learning stuff and not instantly getting overpowered. The pace is a bit fast but it's still acceptable. Author-sama I still haven't forgiven you for the way you bamboozled use for that scene with death🙃. I'd definitely recommend reading this.
Author's lack of knowledge in using Capitalization and other punctuation marks are a little off putting for me imo. Sometimes the forced comedy is also getting cringey/annoying sometimes. All in all I think the writing is the main issue.
I love everything about the ff everything is awesome, I always look forward to reading another chapter. Everything about the book is fun I like it a lot.
what can I say ( somebody forced me to write it ) so for the book part great great great it must be repeated three times in one word its fantasticallyhilarius
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Okay but not good. It got boring sometime. Getting Death as his partner was not logical. All the words Mc talk didn't stick with me. wish and what he got is not same. wish you good luck.
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i like this fanfic. btw on the sypnosis what do you mean it doesn't belong to you?....................................pleaze see this author
Forced perverted comedy in some chaps more so in the early chapters. Forced comedy is a little too much. The spelling and writing skills of author is less than 50/100 I would say maybe around 40/100. Grammar is alright so still understandable. Only problem is the comedy getting old the further the chaps go.
if you laugh at one of these,you have to read the novel ,if you didn't laugh.....you should still read the novel,it's a pretty good novel Why don’t The Avengers use The Hulk to advertise their services? He’s essentially a giant Banner. What does Hawkeye like to wear with his suits? A bow tie. Which Avenger is the most trustworthy? The Credible Hulk. Which Avenger is always in a hurry? Black Widow; she’s Russian. What do you call it when Ironman does a cartwheel? A ferrous wheel. What is Ironman’s favorite movie? Ferrous Bueller. Why did Spider-Man join the swim team? Because he had webbed feet. Why are the Avengers so handy with tools? They’re always assembling. What happens when you cross Quicksilver with the Hulk? The Fast and the Furious. If Captain America’s shield is vibranium, what is Hawkeye’s shield? Quicksilver. (Oof
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It's your typical Marvel story and honestly it's not even that well written it's not bad for a fast read but it's not worth adding to favorites and wishing daily for Chappys it's more of the Read till recent chaps and then forget about it for months type.
why did you give up/drop all of your books? What happened? Did you get both of your hands lopped off?
Good stuff, it has; Comedy. 09/10 Action. 06/10 Evil MC. 10/10 Overall its good to read as the cruelty is not openly shown, giving chance to those thar dislike Evil MC to like it as well 5 outta 5 + an Asian, Pakistani wrote it with actually good writing. .. Love it fam.
Ma man Dracula (Author) truly leaves me speechless… i have finished 2 novels and i want MOREE!!! Well actually not really speechless i only have one word that is "MOREEEEEEEEEEE"
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Great start with a lot if potential. MC has room to grow but doesn’t get pushed around. Have really high hopes foe this. ALSO DEATH WIFU YANDERE ALREADY MAKES IT PERFECT.
Seems like a pretty good novel but theres just a lot of minor errors. Not capitalizing, spaces before commas, mispelled words, etc. There’s also a lot of timeskips but that makes sense because he’s like 200 years or smth behind the MCU. The story is mostly just MC learns more magic -> fights with someone and then repeat.
more plz i love all of your work i have all of it in my library 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I realy Like the novel and I'm sad since you droppped it. And I would Like it of you Inform US of you drop it since Sometimes you cant know If its droppped or Not.
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epic book but when will you upload yours other book? ?🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I had to give 5 star review because of the profoundness of the ooga booga and I didn’t have power stones hence I couldn’t comprehend it’s profound nature.
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The story is a bit goofy and there are grammar problems here and there but the story is great and MC isn't spineless. Even if the story may seem like a parody it isn't, author just memes a lot. The MC is getting stronger gradually by learning stuff and not instantly getting overpowered. The pace is a bit fast but it's still acceptable. Author-sama I still haven't forgiven you for the way you bamboozled use for that scene with death🙃. I'd definitely recommend reading this.
Author's lack of knowledge in using Capitalization and other punctuation marks are a little off putting for me imo. Sometimes the forced comedy is also getting cringey/annoying sometimes. All in all I think the writing is the main issue.
I love everything about the ff everything is awesome, I always look forward to reading another chapter. Everything about the book is fun I like it a lot.
what can I say ( somebody forced me to write it ) so for the book part great great great it must be repeated three times in one word its fantasticallyhilarius
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Okay but not good. It got boring sometime. Getting Death as his partner was not logical. All the words Mc talk didn't stick with me. wish and what he got is not same. wish you good luck.
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i like this fanfic. btw on the sypnosis what do you mean it doesn't belong to you?....................................pleaze see this author
Forced perverted comedy in some chaps more so in the early chapters. Forced comedy is a little too much. The spelling and writing skills of author is less than 50/100 I would say maybe around 40/100. Grammar is alright so still understandable. Only problem is the comedy getting old the further the chaps go.
if you laugh at one of these,you have to read the novel ,if you didn't laugh.....you should still read the novel,it's a pretty good novel Why don’t The Avengers use The Hulk to advertise their services? He’s essentially a giant Banner. What does Hawkeye like to wear with his suits? A bow tie. Which Avenger is the most trustworthy? The Credible Hulk. Which Avenger is always in a hurry? Black Widow; she’s Russian. What do you call it when Ironman does a cartwheel? A ferrous wheel. What is Ironman’s favorite movie? Ferrous Bueller. Why did Spider-Man join the swim team? Because he had webbed feet. Why are the Avengers so handy with tools? They’re always assembling. What happens when you cross Quicksilver with the Hulk? The Fast and the Furious. If Captain America’s shield is vibranium, what is Hawkeye’s shield? Quicksilver. (Oof