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It's a very cliche story, nothing original or interesting, with writing that's hard to understand and pretty lazy. I feel like it's going for comedy but missing by a mile. Plus the cover art seems to be stolen.
this novel is indeed good. It's just that one of the op feels a little dumb. It's just like ur normal character whereas in some novel, Ml or FL has overkill brain and power. Hope the author can continue to hard work. Thanks for the updates.👉💓👈
really loving this novel. got fully booked. need a happy ending for my crown prince and his cute concubine [img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
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1. this book is murdering the english language 2. interesting characters at first, but no development 3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information 4. the story is not bad conclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
I like the story line [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] and I can't wait to start read it 💖💖💖💖 and to the author keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Each chap is really AWESOME!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hi GUys, thanks for the reviews, I got the rates, at last, yeay!!! hahaha, sorry for my writing quality, originally I write in Bahasa and I translate it (its faster this way), so sometimes I missed to check it and the words become unbelievable so bad, hahaha, I will fix it, it would be better by the time, i promise ^^
Hi aitjor, i love the ML, both are so cute, so far i love how Crown aprince always teasing BaiYing, i like BaiYing, he such a cute baby, keep update it thor [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think this novel is not so bad, at first author will give us slow and boring scene, but at somepoint theres some surprises in it, it good lite reading, i cant hold my self smile from the interaction between ML, althought Author wrting sometimes hard to understand a bit but the story line is good, keep update it thor [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story line i love how the development of two ML and cant wait for next chapter, because author only focus on them, keep update it thor, [img=recommend]
The story line is interesting and good, i just read few chapter and i think will keep reading it, i love the two MLs, keep update it author [img=recommend]
I think the development of the ML is good, i like how author only focus on two ML, i think the story line is quite interesting, keep update it author[img=recommend]
I think the novel is not bad, we can see how much effort from the author on giving us the details even lots of things missed here, but so far I enjoy to read this
I havent read this book yet, but its looks exciting and fun, just read the first chapter and will read it for sure, keep on update author dont give up, cant wait for the next chpater, cheeeeeerssssssss......[img=recommend]
Click right away when I see the cover.. the cover is From the manhua *How to survive as a villain* adapted from the novel. then I check the author 's profile and saw Mdzs's WangXian and 2Ha's RanWan.. and I m like.. Fellow Fujoshis!! 😁😂 anyway this is how I stumble upon this great novel 💁♀️ Recommended 🤝
This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more 😉 Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?
In this story of young man HuaBaiYing, who become Crown Prince concubine for his sister who runs away, the rumors said the crown prince is super ugly and pervert who already have three concubines in his side, but the thing is now simple as its sounds, you think the Crown prince is an idiot or what? hi Guys, please help to support my new novel for Webnovel, I'm joining the competition, I'm challenging my self to learn how to join in such a big competition with so many things to learn, still sooooo far to go, but everybody needs a little challenging in their life to be better, even if it does not succeed but the process makes us learn a lot.
🌊🏊...I am happy very VeRy HapPi💎to have discovered this story THaNk U For SHaRiNG and providing A wonderful kind of addiction😉.
It's a very cliche story, nothing original or interesting, with writing that's hard to understand and pretty lazy. I feel like it's going for comedy but missing by a mile. Plus the cover art seems to be stolen.
this novel is indeed good. It's just that one of the op feels a little dumb. It's just like ur normal character whereas in some novel, Ml or FL has overkill brain and power. Hope the author can continue to hard work. Thanks for the updates.👉💓👈
really loving this novel. got fully booked. need a happy ending for my crown prince and his cute concubine [img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
Jkjffghjvfghjbvvbgdfhklgh BC ssa add yeruiittggvbbcxsssdhkklpoiuyreeessaqwdgvvbnjufhht DJ hj he yj h fhjhgggghvvv ujhgvuijg bjkkggv hujghjj
1. this book is murdering the english language 2. interesting characters at first, but no development 3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information 4. the story is not bad conclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
I like the story line [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] and I can't wait to start read it 💖💖💖💖 and to the author keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Each chap is really AWESOME!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hi GUys, thanks for the reviews, I got the rates, at last, yeay!!! hahaha, sorry for my writing quality, originally I write in Bahasa and I translate it (its faster this way), so sometimes I missed to check it and the words become unbelievable so bad, hahaha, I will fix it, it would be better by the time, i promise ^^
Hi aitjor, i love the ML, both are so cute, so far i love how Crown aprince always teasing BaiYing, i like BaiYing, he such a cute baby, keep update it thor [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think this novel is not so bad, at first author will give us slow and boring scene, but at somepoint theres some surprises in it, it good lite reading, i cant hold my self smile from the interaction between ML, althought Author wrting sometimes hard to understand a bit but the story line is good, keep update it thor [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story line i love how the development of two ML and cant wait for next chapter, because author only focus on them, keep update it thor, [img=recommend]
The story line is interesting and good, i just read few chapter and i think will keep reading it, i love the two MLs, keep update it author [img=recommend]
I think the development of the ML is good, i like how author only focus on two ML, i think the story line is quite interesting, keep update it author[img=recommend]
I think the novel is not bad, we can see how much effort from the author on giving us the details even lots of things missed here, but so far I enjoy to read this
I havent read this book yet, but its looks exciting and fun, just read the first chapter and will read it for sure, keep on update author dont give up, cant wait for the next chpater, cheeeeeerssssssss......[img=recommend]
Click right away when I see the cover.. the cover is From the manhua *How to survive as a villain* adapted from the novel. then I check the author 's profile and saw Mdzs's WangXian and 2Ha's RanWan.. and I m like.. Fellow Fujoshis!! 😁😂 anyway this is how I stumble upon this great novel 💁♀️ Recommended 🤝
This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more 😉 Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?
In this story of young man HuaBaiYing, who become Crown Prince concubine for his sister who runs away, the rumors said the crown prince is super ugly and pervert who already have three concubines in his side, but the thing is now simple as its sounds, you think the Crown prince is an idiot or what? hi Guys, please help to support my new novel for Webnovel, I'm joining the competition, I'm challenging my self to learn how to join in such a big competition with so many things to learn, still sooooo far to go, but everybody needs a little challenging in their life to be better, even if it does not succeed but the process makes us learn a lot.
🌊🏊...I am happy very VeRy HapPi💎to have discovered this story THaNk U For SHaRiNG and providing A wonderful kind of addiction😉.