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I believe your doing great man while I am upset that you gave him a brain tumor I under stand the reason why and think you should keep doing what you do because this is a great story.
Just found this and honestly one of my favourites on webnovel. Hope you decide to come back to it author.
Geeat story but low update stability. Please update this story. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving this a 5 star. I love how Mc's Op but still trying his best to do better, and although he's Op his quirk still has draw backs don't mind the bad reviews author-san there are still readers who loves the story including me
In my opinion this is one of the best mha fanfics on this site and I honestly hope that the author will continue it even though other end unlikely
This is a realy good novel and in my opinion probably one of the best BNHA/MHA fanfics and I hope the author continues it the character design is also realy good again This is probably the best BNHA/MHA fanfics on webnovel
I like this story it really captures how a psychic quirk user would be in the story. I also like the Character Design and the MC has Friends other the main cast.
very high quality for what you’d expect around here. a little rough around the edges at times but that’s just me nitpicking. honestly love it and can’t wait for the next chapter!
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If you wanna read an OP original character this is for you. Since it is an op oc it's not the most interesting or engaging, but that's not why people read this. Its a fun simple read.
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This fan fiction is awesome, very well done, just hope you start updating again. This fan fiction is awesome, very well done, just hope you start updating again.
This book Is well written and also realistic because most of the books that I’ve read the path of The mc is so smooth its so boring but yours is interesting and makes me want to keep going so I love your book pls dont drop 😁
WQ: 5s (there is actual immersion in the story) SU: 5s (regular) SD:3s (good plotline but in the last chapters were some useless drama and a useless nerf) CD:4s (a consistent mc that doesn't have his priorities straight(not in the funny way, unfortunately....)) WB:3s (fanfic, it's a borrowed world) Now for the things I wanted to address: CD: while you depicted the other characters, mc and their interactions perfectly, the USJ incident is where his morals bugged me quite a bit: he was in a life-threatening situation, his teacher almost got killed more than twice in a short amount of time because the mc didn't want to kill the nomu; now, I'm not one of those edgelords who say "kill everything in your path, no matter the law"; but him not using his quirk on Kurogiri or Shigaraki when he had the nomu in the air is completely dumb when he knew that kurogiri could just escape at any given moment if he just left him alone for a second. Now another thing that bugged me is him not wanting to harm the nomu too much: he knows the nomu is nigh immortal, that he doesn't feel pain, that it is a threat to his life and his teacher and that if he doesn't kill it, is is eventually gonna regenerate and come after them later, but he still chose to let the nomu live and escape; although with his limbs torn off (but that was completely useless). Now as for the nerf part, I know you heard that many times before but really? you had to give him a quirk-limiting brain tumour to make him start to think of more efficient and creative ways to use his quirk? You couldn't have, idk.... make him realise after seeing the nomu so resistant to brute force but less to more subtle things that he should think of more ways to use his quirk more efficiently ? you wouldn't have needed that much useless drama and that would have made your story way better: the mc learns from his errors and isn't obligated in some ways to do so. I'll give you another example: you don't like when you have slave systems forcing their hosts to do tasks to get stronger right? well, the better way to achieve the same thing is by giving a good excuse like "the mc wants to get stronger to be able to not feel powerless", instead of forcing him to do so. People prefer when you give a good reason for a character to do something than when you force them to act the way you want. Anyway, good luck with this book, but I'm not dropping, just hope this tumour thing is worth it.
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Okay so he has a powerfull quirk so he has to stay at a facility like somE laB rat and bakugo who can literally blow things up and is agressive in Bature does not. Seriously author why make such a good story into such a bad one Still i will read ahed and see if the story is interesting. But i lost interest after this chapter
I believe your doing great man while I am upset that you gave him a brain tumor I under stand the reason why and think you should keep doing what you do because this is a great story.
Just found this and honestly one of my favourites on webnovel. Hope you decide to come back to it author.
Geeat story but low update stability. Please update this story. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving this a 5 star. I love how Mc's Op but still trying his best to do better, and although he's Op his quirk still has draw backs don't mind the bad reviews author-san there are still readers who loves the story including me
In my opinion this is one of the best mha fanfics on this site and I honestly hope that the author will continue it even though other end unlikely
This is a realy good novel and in my opinion probably one of the best BNHA/MHA fanfics and I hope the author continues it the character design is also realy good again This is probably the best BNHA/MHA fanfics on webnovel
I like this story it really captures how a psychic quirk user would be in the story. I also like the Character Design and the MC has Friends other the main cast.
very high quality for what you’d expect around here. a little rough around the edges at times but that’s just me nitpicking. honestly love it and can’t wait for the next chapter!
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If you wanna read an OP original character this is for you. Since it is an op oc it's not the most interesting or engaging, but that's not why people read this. Its a fun simple read.
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This fan fiction is awesome, very well done, just hope you start updating again. This fan fiction is awesome, very well done, just hope you start updating again.
This book Is well written and also realistic because most of the books that I’ve read the path of The mc is so smooth its so boring but yours is interesting and makes me want to keep going so I love your book pls dont drop 😁
WQ: 5s (there is actual immersion in the story) SU: 5s (regular) SD:3s (good plotline but in the last chapters were some useless drama and a useless nerf) CD:4s (a consistent mc that doesn't have his priorities straight(not in the funny way, unfortunately....)) WB:3s (fanfic, it's a borrowed world) Now for the things I wanted to address: CD: while you depicted the other characters, mc and their interactions perfectly, the USJ incident is where his morals bugged me quite a bit: he was in a life-threatening situation, his teacher almost got killed more than twice in a short amount of time because the mc didn't want to kill the nomu; now, I'm not one of those edgelords who say "kill everything in your path, no matter the law"; but him not using his quirk on Kurogiri or Shigaraki when he had the nomu in the air is completely dumb when he knew that kurogiri could just escape at any given moment if he just left him alone for a second. Now another thing that bugged me is him not wanting to harm the nomu too much: he knows the nomu is nigh immortal, that he doesn't feel pain, that it is a threat to his life and his teacher and that if he doesn't kill it, is is eventually gonna regenerate and come after them later, but he still chose to let the nomu live and escape; although with his limbs torn off (but that was completely useless). Now as for the nerf part, I know you heard that many times before but really? you had to give him a quirk-limiting brain tumour to make him start to think of more efficient and creative ways to use his quirk? You couldn't have, idk.... make him realise after seeing the nomu so resistant to brute force but less to more subtle things that he should think of more ways to use his quirk more efficiently ? you wouldn't have needed that much useless drama and that would have made your story way better: the mc learns from his errors and isn't obligated in some ways to do so. I'll give you another example: you don't like when you have slave systems forcing their hosts to do tasks to get stronger right? well, the better way to achieve the same thing is by giving a good excuse like "the mc wants to get stronger to be able to not feel powerless", instead of forcing him to do so. People prefer when you give a good reason for a character to do something than when you force them to act the way you want. Anyway, good luck with this book, but I'm not dropping, just hope this tumour thing is worth it.
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Okay so he has a powerfull quirk so he has to stay at a facility like somE laB rat and bakugo who can literally blow things up and is agressive in Bature does not. Seriously author why make such a good story into such a bad one Still i will read ahed and see if the story is interesting. But i lost interest after this chapter