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I'm gonna be honest here, the quality is a bit of a disappointment. The writing quality is really questionable since there's so many errors to it. The story is very quick, and it's almost too quick for some people. The character is okayish, but he feels one sided. The updating quality seems okay, but the world is very simple, almost too simple. This story needs a mot of polishing for it to be regarded higher, and I hope that you really put effort into it! It's a good story, it just needs some more care to it.
I'm gonna be honest here, the quality is a bit of a disappointment. The writing quality is really questionable since there's so many errors to it. The story is very quick, and it's almost too quick for some people. The character is okayish, but he feels one sided. The updating quality seems okay, but the world is very simple, almost too simple. This story needs a mot of polishing for it to be regarded higher, and I hope that you really put effort into it! It's a good story, it just needs some more care to it.