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Hello guys. It's been quite a while since I abruptly ended Lyrica's story. I'm still sad that I had to cancel Alteria. But after deciding to look back at my work, I realized it's still somehow getting a few readers. It kinda makes me want to remake the story from the beginning, fix any mistakes I've written, but I don't know if I can recall how I want the story to progress. Anyways, I appreciate you readers coming here getting a glimpse of the world of Alteria. Thank you so much.
author, why is this marked as complete?Add more, please🙏🙏🙏🙏. I love this book.🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏📚👍📚👍📚👍📚👍📚👍📚
Important: To all my readers, especially those who stuck with me since chapter one even though there were so many errors made (lol), I just want to thank you all for reading my story. My goal is to finish this story as it is the first part of a 3 seperate stories I'm planning to write. However, time, money, and reality is telling me that I have to do something else first. I have to do something that will help support myself and my love in writing stories from my head. I hate taking this course of action, and I will definitely miss the characters and some few concepts I made in terms of superpowers and abilities, but I'm going to have to give Alteria a very abrupt end. I'm sorry for not being able to do what I promised and I thank you for understanding why I have to do it. However, my idea of putting the stories in my head into words and share it to all still hasn't changed. If I am allowed to, in the indefinite future, I will write again. The title will change, the characters will have different names, the way the story goes will be changed, but the plot inside my head will remain the same. If that time actually comes, I will be more than glad to have you all read it! Again, thank you all for reading Alteria. That is all for me for now. Farewell! - OwariDa02
I really, really, reallyyyyyyy love your stort author! I hope that you'll update more chapters of it. I can't get enough of this story. I'm waiting for their next adventures and how the story develops. Also, the character development of each of them. Love this story ❤️❣️
I really like your novel so far looking forward to future chapters!!! I was wondering though if there will be romance? I would love if you could reply. Thank you😘
I just finished reading it and I don't regret it at all It was very good words can't express how good it is but this just my opinion and you should go read it yourself and see I'm gonna rate it 4 stars can't wait to see more thanks go your hard work
The plot is well built at first it seems like other isekai then the backstory came and it kinda made me sadㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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Interesting and refreshing introduction and progression of the story. Kinda reminds me of of the game "Life Is Strange". The flow is creative and fairly thrilling and the portrayal of the setting and the characters are put into heart and emotion.
Definitely a story with a heart. The MC has a very tender, painful backstory that will tug at your heartstrings. Her parents are just amazing though, I must say. The MC herself is very well portrayed, actions are congruent to her age. Her innocence also comes through in the writing. The writing itself is very good, only minor tense issues that do not take away from the story. The emotional core of the story is what hooks you on to it. Thank you, author. It will remain in my library as I look forward to reading the entire story. Great work!
Wow, like the prologue already took my heart away! It goes ahead in a literally claming sense and there comes the twist, I like it how the author hs paced the story❤️✨keeping writing this beautiful story
Truly a good piece of work. Loved it so far. You should try changing your cover into something more eye catching Everything else is nice...!
Wow~ I did not think that i would find this hidden gem here. I like the story and the pace with which the story progressed so far. A very good work auther~ Keep going~
This story is well built and the plot seems promising. I'm looking forward to where the author takes us to. I've only read a couple of chapters though. Keep posting~~ Author-sama Fighting!!!
WOW! What a great story! Very well written and very well thought out. I was shocked by the twist! Well done!! Characters are well developed and interesting!
The first five chapters touched my soul. For a moment, I was speechless on everything that was proceeding. But the author should've really made her daughter find out about their new jobs. It was just my personal point, but I really love the story premise and also the following chapters.
so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters
This story was amazing. I thought the prologue was the same as mostly isekai, but I was wrong. For a couple of chapters, the author success in playing reader emotion. The plotting story is easy to imagine, as I'm in the story itself. I look forward to another chapter...
Hello, everyone. I am the Author of Alteria. I hope you enjoy the first part of the story I wanted to make for a long time. If you do, please leave a review and tell me what you like and dislike about it! This will help me improve as an author! This is only the beginning, so I hope you're ready for the ride!
Hello guys. It's been quite a while since I abruptly ended Lyrica's story. I'm still sad that I had to cancel Alteria. But after deciding to look back at my work, I realized it's still somehow getting a few readers. It kinda makes me want to remake the story from the beginning, fix any mistakes I've written, but I don't know if I can recall how I want the story to progress. Anyways, I appreciate you readers coming here getting a glimpse of the world of Alteria. Thank you so much.
author, why is this marked as complete?Add more, please🙏🙏🙏🙏. I love this book.🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏♥️🙏📚👍📚👍📚👍📚👍📚👍📚
Important: To all my readers, especially those who stuck with me since chapter one even though there were so many errors made (lol), I just want to thank you all for reading my story. My goal is to finish this story as it is the first part of a 3 seperate stories I'm planning to write. However, time, money, and reality is telling me that I have to do something else first. I have to do something that will help support myself and my love in writing stories from my head. I hate taking this course of action, and I will definitely miss the characters and some few concepts I made in terms of superpowers and abilities, but I'm going to have to give Alteria a very abrupt end. I'm sorry for not being able to do what I promised and I thank you for understanding why I have to do it. However, my idea of putting the stories in my head into words and share it to all still hasn't changed. If I am allowed to, in the indefinite future, I will write again. The title will change, the characters will have different names, the way the story goes will be changed, but the plot inside my head will remain the same. If that time actually comes, I will be more than glad to have you all read it! Again, thank you all for reading Alteria. That is all for me for now. Farewell! - OwariDa02
I really, really, reallyyyyyyy love your stort author! I hope that you'll update more chapters of it. I can't get enough of this story. I'm waiting for their next adventures and how the story develops. Also, the character development of each of them. Love this story ❤️❣️
I really like your novel so far looking forward to future chapters!!! I was wondering though if there will be romance? I would love if you could reply. Thank you😘
I just finished reading it and I don't regret it at all It was very good words can't express how good it is but this just my opinion and you should go read it yourself and see I'm gonna rate it 4 stars can't wait to see more thanks go your hard work
The plot is well built at first it seems like other isekai then the backstory came and it kinda made me sadㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
ネタバレを明かす im.....*sob*..not crying [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Interesting and refreshing introduction and progression of the story. Kinda reminds me of of the game "Life Is Strange". The flow is creative and fairly thrilling and the portrayal of the setting and the characters are put into heart and emotion.
Definitely a story with a heart. The MC has a very tender, painful backstory that will tug at your heartstrings. Her parents are just amazing though, I must say. The MC herself is very well portrayed, actions are congruent to her age. Her innocence also comes through in the writing. The writing itself is very good, only minor tense issues that do not take away from the story. The emotional core of the story is what hooks you on to it. Thank you, author. It will remain in my library as I look forward to reading the entire story. Great work!
Wow, like the prologue already took my heart away! It goes ahead in a literally claming sense and there comes the twist, I like it how the author hs paced the story❤️✨keeping writing this beautiful story
Truly a good piece of work. Loved it so far. You should try changing your cover into something more eye catching Everything else is nice...!
Wow~ I did not think that i would find this hidden gem here. I like the story and the pace with which the story progressed so far. A very good work auther~ Keep going~
This story is well built and the plot seems promising. I'm looking forward to where the author takes us to. I've only read a couple of chapters though. Keep posting~~ Author-sama Fighting!!!
WOW! What a great story! Very well written and very well thought out. I was shocked by the twist! Well done!! Characters are well developed and interesting!
The first five chapters touched my soul. For a moment, I was speechless on everything that was proceeding. But the author should've really made her daughter find out about their new jobs. It was just my personal point, but I really love the story premise and also the following chapters.
so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters
This story was amazing. I thought the prologue was the same as mostly isekai, but I was wrong. For a couple of chapters, the author success in playing reader emotion. The plotting story is easy to imagine, as I'm in the story itself. I look forward to another chapter...
Hello, everyone. I am the Author of Alteria. I hope you enjoy the first part of the story I wanted to make for a long time. If you do, please leave a review and tell me what you like and dislike about it! This will help me improve as an author! This is only the beginning, so I hope you're ready for the ride!