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This novel is a pile of meaninglessness. It started good, we all are hyped by the backstory of the MC, and expecting revenge and what's after, but it all crashed with a meaningless dull twist.
Primeiramente, desejo sucesso, sua obra e fantasticaaaaa! E espero que continue escrevendo. Boa sorte que possa ter todo o reconhecimento que lhe e merecido.
What is this. the novel starts with the sob story and a very detailed sob story for 7 chapters. So I think the author missed on tag 'tragedy' for this novel.
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after reading this novel for a bit I can conclude that this is a high-quality piece of work. the way the office set up the scenes made the reader invested into the book and by the time you found out the main character's motivation you were hooked. this is a book that takes a different direction to the whole played out system johnra. it is worth anyone's time and should be getting more recognition.
This is a very intriguing story, guys. The author did a splendid job with descriptions and world background and characters development . I mean, it’s an all round interesting piece. Give it a try, you’ll lovr it.
I read the first few chapters the story was promising and had potential , it's a good read the way of your writing was clear , but if you can improve some mistakes it'll be more fun to.read like grammatical mistakes, the correct form of tense and just try to look for punctuation marks sometimes it breaks a sentence and cause confusion but it's my personal opinion or it's perfectly written keep going author 😊
I admit that this is a very nice novel as the author has indeed lured me to read more with his hooking words. Definitely, this author is one who is good with words and for this I easily recommend you his book. Give it a try you will be surprised.
What a coolll book cover! I don't see any errors from reading the book, great narration. The title and synopsis is a hook already, give this a read everyone! P.S the cover really caught my attention! Love this!
I love the turn for the dark! I like the writing of the author, I'm quite not into system books, but this one definitely goes to my library. Great work author, all the best[img=recommend]
A well-written slow burner. It was pretty good. The grammar did its job and most of the story flowed. Some dialogues felt awkward as there were to tags but overall I liked the story. Hopefully, the author would keep this updated.
Great story so far, like the plot's premise and the story's flow. Would be nice to see the progress of the protagonist across the series. Good luck author.
You have a great title for the story among the other system novels out there! The introduction is solid, and it slowly progresses towards the plot where Yuki would one day have this system (i am still a few chapters behind, but I know that is going to be awesome). I am excited to see more about what is going to happenb to the future chapters!
ネタバレを明かす This is definitely entertaining. From the first chapter, I can feel myself being in the protagonist’s situation. The author did a good job playing every scene out. This is a masterpiece. I will be sure to read this story to the very end. Kudos to you, author. You did a fantastic job .🤗🤗🤗
This is not boring guys 🤗🤗 it is very readable, I assured. It's like a bite of chocolate 🍫 it's very intriguing, with not many errors. I highly recommend 👏👏
Have not read that far yet but it sure is going nicely! I love main characters that have that attitude of just wanting to rule everything and all. Loving how this MC started out this way and not just straight up overpowered. It really makes me want to await his character development. The synopsis and title are quite hooking, I must say! The pace so far is good and the plot is interesting 😊 Overall, great work here! Keep it up, author!
The plot is really interesting and amazing! The writing quality is great too! I love it a lot! It's getting interesting. Keep updating this good work!
The writing is so beautifully crafted that i am in love, it’s so nice with needed details, the plot is great on it’s own. The author has done a very good job in writing this.
It is very interesting and an easy read. The first 5 chapters were already really good and could stand out on their own. The tone was also consistent throughout. I really like how the author brought the main character to life!
From the review swap: Alright. I'm going to say that, although the writing is good... My main issue is this: The story and MC felt um... medium. I can understand the appeal to others, yet it took a dark turn and that isn't the problem for me. More like, how it turned towards that dark turn. The rest of how powerful he was, I didn't mind much, since if well executed it can be good. Yet, it isn't my thing to read about OP characters, so I'll be dropping the book here. Otherwise, it is good. TLDR: Thought the dark turn was unwarranted and OP protagonists aren't really my thing, yet the writing is overall good.
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I am really enjoying how this story was put together! The way the author explained what led to the M.Cs decision to jump to his death was really intriguing, that actually got me hooked This novel is definitely going to be a success!!
It is a great novel! A very good execution of the story considering the background of the story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters! Keep going ; )
I've read a lot of system novels. But even among all the ones I've read, this one stands out. Despite there being a few cliche parts, the writing quality is pretty much flawless, updates are stable, and the characters are well-described and colorful. I especially loved the beginning, how you cut through all the different memories. It was a pretty unique way to start off the story!
Wow, that was a emotional start that easily made me grip my heart. We can relate to the characters and understand both their perspectives at the same time, making us confuse who is right or wrong. I see good potential in the plot ahead and would encourage everyone to give it a read since the grammar isn't bad like most novels in WN,
Nice story! Feels different vibe! Synopsis was very interesting and plot is well defined. Sure want to read further more! Keep it up! I cheer you!
Definitely an easy read! This is the kind of book you'd binge-read at 3 am on a weekday. The beginning starts off by introducing the characters and taking a dive into the memories of the protagonist. However, as the story goes on, the events darken little by little, as everything the protagonist has ever loved, slowly crumbles away into nothingness. It leaves you wondering what will happen next, with the emotions of the main character teetering unpredictably at the edge. Very enjoyable to read, looking forward to new chapters! ^^
How I love system plot. It's like a stress reliever really. So, finding another brilliant book about system makes me happy! Writing style wise, it's excellent without too much adornment and very easy to understand which I find important in system novel. Cos the element system itself is already going to be complicated so author has to simplify it hence the readers won't get overload when reading. And I also like the beginning of the novel because the author didn't dive in right away to the plot. Author told the MC bg story first and let me connect with Yuki, and understand him to a certain level. Besides, the frustration built from reading Yuki's past made me even more eager to read when he accessed the system! I hope Yuki smacked those bullies soon! Keep up the good work author!
Wow, that took a dark turn. I can safely say I love what the author is doing with this story in the early chapters. Begins with the perfect hook as the protagonist jumps off a building to his death, then for the next several chapters we get to see his earlier life and the lead up to this traumatic event. This works as a great way to both grab the reader's attention and get some insight into the protagonist and his state of mind. Throughout the course of these chapters I really came to feel for the protagonist and understand his emotional plight. And then when the reader is all up to speed the story takes another massive turn after the suicide, which I must say I am eager to keep following. I have added this to my library and will be sure to keep my eye on this. Really well-written and entertaining, with an interesting, 3D and sympathetic main character driving the narrative and adding a substantial layer of authenticity. I strongly recommend giving this one a read.
THAT'S A GOOD READ! It's an another system genre where uniquely plotted HOPE FOR YOUR WRITING STYLE TO IMPROVE IN THE FUTURE CHAPS(✷‿✷) I appreciate it
Author shamelessly supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters. The first 40 chapters will be released on the very first day. Following that, a 10 day break will be taken and the story will once again resume. An action Weak to strong story as the character learns to navigate their world in such a way that it seems normal. No characters are overpowered for no reason. Each and everything that happens has its own respective reasoning. Any and all comments as well criticism are welcome. Hope you enjoy!
This novel is a pile of meaninglessness. It started good, we all are hyped by the backstory of the MC, and expecting revenge and what's after, but it all crashed with a meaningless dull twist.
Primeiramente, desejo sucesso, sua obra e fantasticaaaaa! E espero que continue escrevendo. Boa sorte que possa ter todo o reconhecimento que lhe e merecido.
What is this. the novel starts with the sob story and a very detailed sob story for 7 chapters. So I think the author missed on tag 'tragedy' for this novel.
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after reading this novel for a bit I can conclude that this is a high-quality piece of work. the way the office set up the scenes made the reader invested into the book and by the time you found out the main character's motivation you were hooked. this is a book that takes a different direction to the whole played out system johnra. it is worth anyone's time and should be getting more recognition.
This is a very intriguing story, guys. The author did a splendid job with descriptions and world background and characters development . I mean, it’s an all round interesting piece. Give it a try, you’ll lovr it.
I read the first few chapters the story was promising and had potential , it's a good read the way of your writing was clear , but if you can improve some mistakes it'll be more fun to.read like grammatical mistakes, the correct form of tense and just try to look for punctuation marks sometimes it breaks a sentence and cause confusion but it's my personal opinion or it's perfectly written keep going author 😊
I admit that this is a very nice novel as the author has indeed lured me to read more with his hooking words. Definitely, this author is one who is good with words and for this I easily recommend you his book. Give it a try you will be surprised.
What a coolll book cover! I don't see any errors from reading the book, great narration. The title and synopsis is a hook already, give this a read everyone! P.S the cover really caught my attention! Love this!
I love the turn for the dark! I like the writing of the author, I'm quite not into system books, but this one definitely goes to my library. Great work author, all the best[img=recommend]
A well-written slow burner. It was pretty good. The grammar did its job and most of the story flowed. Some dialogues felt awkward as there were to tags but overall I liked the story. Hopefully, the author would keep this updated.
Great story so far, like the plot's premise and the story's flow. Would be nice to see the progress of the protagonist across the series. Good luck author.
You have a great title for the story among the other system novels out there! The introduction is solid, and it slowly progresses towards the plot where Yuki would one day have this system (i am still a few chapters behind, but I know that is going to be awesome). I am excited to see more about what is going to happenb to the future chapters!
ネタバレを明かす This is definitely entertaining. From the first chapter, I can feel myself being in the protagonist’s situation. The author did a good job playing every scene out. This is a masterpiece. I will be sure to read this story to the very end. Kudos to you, author. You did a fantastic job .🤗🤗🤗
This is not boring guys 🤗🤗 it is very readable, I assured. It's like a bite of chocolate 🍫 it's very intriguing, with not many errors. I highly recommend 👏👏
Have not read that far yet but it sure is going nicely! I love main characters that have that attitude of just wanting to rule everything and all. Loving how this MC started out this way and not just straight up overpowered. It really makes me want to await his character development. The synopsis and title are quite hooking, I must say! The pace so far is good and the plot is interesting 😊 Overall, great work here! Keep it up, author!
The plot is really interesting and amazing! The writing quality is great too! I love it a lot! It's getting interesting. Keep updating this good work!
The writing is so beautifully crafted that i am in love, it’s so nice with needed details, the plot is great on it’s own. The author has done a very good job in writing this.
It is very interesting and an easy read. The first 5 chapters were already really good and could stand out on their own. The tone was also consistent throughout. I really like how the author brought the main character to life!
From the review swap: Alright. I'm going to say that, although the writing is good... My main issue is this: The story and MC felt um... medium. I can understand the appeal to others, yet it took a dark turn and that isn't the problem for me. More like, how it turned towards that dark turn. The rest of how powerful he was, I didn't mind much, since if well executed it can be good. Yet, it isn't my thing to read about OP characters, so I'll be dropping the book here. Otherwise, it is good. TLDR: Thought the dark turn was unwarranted and OP protagonists aren't really my thing, yet the writing is overall good.
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I am really enjoying how this story was put together! The way the author explained what led to the M.Cs decision to jump to his death was really intriguing, that actually got me hooked This novel is definitely going to be a success!!
It is a great novel! A very good execution of the story considering the background of the story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters! Keep going ; )
I've read a lot of system novels. But even among all the ones I've read, this one stands out. Despite there being a few cliche parts, the writing quality is pretty much flawless, updates are stable, and the characters are well-described and colorful. I especially loved the beginning, how you cut through all the different memories. It was a pretty unique way to start off the story!
Wow, that was a emotional start that easily made me grip my heart. We can relate to the characters and understand both their perspectives at the same time, making us confuse who is right or wrong. I see good potential in the plot ahead and would encourage everyone to give it a read since the grammar isn't bad like most novels in WN,
Nice story! Feels different vibe! Synopsis was very interesting and plot is well defined. Sure want to read further more! Keep it up! I cheer you!
Definitely an easy read! This is the kind of book you'd binge-read at 3 am on a weekday. The beginning starts off by introducing the characters and taking a dive into the memories of the protagonist. However, as the story goes on, the events darken little by little, as everything the protagonist has ever loved, slowly crumbles away into nothingness. It leaves you wondering what will happen next, with the emotions of the main character teetering unpredictably at the edge. Very enjoyable to read, looking forward to new chapters! ^^
How I love system plot. It's like a stress reliever really. So, finding another brilliant book about system makes me happy! Writing style wise, it's excellent without too much adornment and very easy to understand which I find important in system novel. Cos the element system itself is already going to be complicated so author has to simplify it hence the readers won't get overload when reading. And I also like the beginning of the novel because the author didn't dive in right away to the plot. Author told the MC bg story first and let me connect with Yuki, and understand him to a certain level. Besides, the frustration built from reading Yuki's past made me even more eager to read when he accessed the system! I hope Yuki smacked those bullies soon! Keep up the good work author!
Wow, that took a dark turn. I can safely say I love what the author is doing with this story in the early chapters. Begins with the perfect hook as the protagonist jumps off a building to his death, then for the next several chapters we get to see his earlier life and the lead up to this traumatic event. This works as a great way to both grab the reader's attention and get some insight into the protagonist and his state of mind. Throughout the course of these chapters I really came to feel for the protagonist and understand his emotional plight. And then when the reader is all up to speed the story takes another massive turn after the suicide, which I must say I am eager to keep following. I have added this to my library and will be sure to keep my eye on this. Really well-written and entertaining, with an interesting, 3D and sympathetic main character driving the narrative and adding a substantial layer of authenticity. I strongly recommend giving this one a read.
THAT'S A GOOD READ! It's an another system genre where uniquely plotted HOPE FOR YOUR WRITING STYLE TO IMPROVE IN THE FUTURE CHAPS(✷‿✷) I appreciate it
Author shamelessly supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters. The first 40 chapters will be released on the very first day. Following that, a 10 day break will be taken and the story will once again resume. An action Weak to strong story as the character learns to navigate their world in such a way that it seems normal. No characters are overpowered for no reason. Each and everything that happens has its own respective reasoning. Any and all comments as well criticism are welcome. Hope you enjoy!