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I Am In Love With Jake Lin. I love how the author is able to describe it so well that I felt like I was watching it on a screen and not just reading. This is actually my first game novel that I'm reading and I'm loving it.
Very intresting from the start. I quite like it especially since there is gaming invoolved. Can't wait to read more! Good job dear author. I am sure it will get better as I keep reading. >///<
It seems likea good story, but badly translated. Despite many missing connecting words, and improper word form choices, I was interested enough to keep reading until I ran out of chapters. I suspect that practice will improve the writing quickly, because the story telling is decent in spite of the slightly broken English. Some suspension of disbelief is required for me, since the setting feels rather game-within-a-game, but as long as I set aside the expectation that the main character lives in the same reality that I do, it seems fairly consistent so far.
I was excited from the start with this novel. It's my first novel under video games with systems etc. Definite must read where it throws you into the action of the story quickly. Was sad to see the family life he grew up with and of course the bullies over his defected arm. I found the system quite funny, basically insulted him straight away 😂 I am excited to see where this novel goes. Like I said it's my first video game book but so far so good! Keep up the good work author ☺️
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This is a must-read story guys. Sincerely I haven't read a gaming story before so this bi's my first attempt at it, and I must saw I was enthralled by it. I love the unique character of the MC, Jake. The author painted really good characters and with each chapter you get pulled into the story. Few grammatical errors are strewn in here and there, but they are negligible. Thanks author for this beautiful story, I look forward to reading more.
I really liked the gaming system and the characters who surprisely got me interested and involved even if it is not my favorite genre! The author’s grammar and descriptions are very cured so I totally suggest It to everyone and not just readers interested in gaming!
It's a bid sad to be honest . Jake feels like one of the characters I could bond with . 'First handicapped engineer' These are really powerful words. People in the society should really encourage handicapped people. Anyway back to the novel, A handicapped being a genius at mathematics such as jake is quite inspiring. Then the way the system was introduced is quite intriguing . The way the havoc was created and he woke up into a system. The descriptions are really great. So far this book is really good and it also shows author's hard work so keep it up author. You've got this.
Loved the book author did an excellent job in writing this. Waiting impatiently for more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This would officially be the first time I would review a book under the genre Video games and I'm glad I am now. Jake's character for one thing isn't the usual brooding bad boy or dumb at first and well interestingly has a disablity (for now I think). The first chapter was a little fast paced and few grammar errors but not one we can't overlook. I have confidence with the next chapters, it's bound to be a masterpiece. The next chapters took a drastic turn as Patina his sister mysteriously committed suicide 😥, the reason still unknown. The system was introduced smoothly and might I add, the option given to him to either accept it or die(because he was already in a life threatening situation got me cracking up 👀🤫 who says no to an offer like that? 😂 Alread added this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Author, you did good by this story plot. It is certainly going to remain in my library. Hey, you! Yes, you reading this. Read this book and you will not regret it. [img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=update]
The story so far is great, and I am interested to see what happens in the future. Adding this one to the collection! A bit of work could be done with the formatting, but over all, it is great so far!
Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something. Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer. Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system". So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting. It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused. I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
I am a fan of anime. So I tried out this novel, and while reading it, I felt like I was watching an anime. The story is intriguing, like, what happens next? And I am looking forward to reading more chapters. Keep up the good work, author.
READ IT GUYS! Read it to know the worth of the story, a very interesting and exciting System trope novel. The gaming Characters and Story plot is just great. It takes a lot of chapters for me to be hooked with the story, but this book completely made me hooked by just the first chapter.
5/5 (* ^ ω ^) The storyline is interesting ٩(◕‿◕｡)۶ I can properly sense the character development (☆ω☆) The world building is great ♡( ◡‿◡ ) The author has a unique writing style ╰(▔∀▔)╯ Great, please continue, author (´｡• ω •｡`) ♡
I Am In Love With Jake Lin. I love how the author is able to describe it so well that I felt like I was watching it on a screen and not just reading. This is actually my first game novel that I'm reading and I'm loving it.
Very intresting from the start. I quite like it especially since there is gaming invoolved. Can't wait to read more! Good job dear author. I am sure it will get better as I keep reading. >///<
It seems likea good story, but badly translated. Despite many missing connecting words, and improper word form choices, I was interested enough to keep reading until I ran out of chapters. I suspect that practice will improve the writing quickly, because the story telling is decent in spite of the slightly broken English. Some suspension of disbelief is required for me, since the setting feels rather game-within-a-game, but as long as I set aside the expectation that the main character lives in the same reality that I do, it seems fairly consistent so far.
I was excited from the start with this novel. It's my first novel under video games with systems etc. Definite must read where it throws you into the action of the story quickly. Was sad to see the family life he grew up with and of course the bullies over his defected arm. I found the system quite funny, basically insulted him straight away 😂 I am excited to see where this novel goes. Like I said it's my first video game book but so far so good! Keep up the good work author ☺️
ネタバレを明かす This is a must-read story guys. Sincerely I haven't read a gaming story before so this bi's my first attempt at it, and I must saw I was enthralled by it. I love the unique character of the MC, Jake. The author painted really good characters and with each chapter you get pulled into the story. Few grammatical errors are strewn in here and there, but they are negligible. Thanks author for this beautiful story, I look forward to reading more.
I really liked the gaming system and the characters who surprisely got me interested and involved even if it is not my favorite genre! The author’s grammar and descriptions are very cured so I totally suggest It to everyone and not just readers interested in gaming!
It's a bid sad to be honest . Jake feels like one of the characters I could bond with . 'First handicapped engineer' These are really powerful words. People in the society should really encourage handicapped people. Anyway back to the novel, A handicapped being a genius at mathematics such as jake is quite inspiring. Then the way the system was introduced is quite intriguing . The way the havoc was created and he woke up into a system. The descriptions are really great. So far this book is really good and it also shows author's hard work so keep it up author. You've got this.
Loved the book author did an excellent job in writing this. Waiting impatiently for more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This would officially be the first time I would review a book under the genre Video games and I'm glad I am now. Jake's character for one thing isn't the usual brooding bad boy or dumb at first and well interestingly has a disablity (for now I think). The first chapter was a little fast paced and few grammar errors but not one we can't overlook. I have confidence with the next chapters, it's bound to be a masterpiece. The next chapters took a drastic turn as Patina his sister mysteriously committed suicide 😥, the reason still unknown. The system was introduced smoothly and might I add, the option given to him to either accept it or die(because he was already in a life threatening situation got me cracking up 👀🤫 who says no to an offer like that? 😂 Alread added this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Author, you did good by this story plot. It is certainly going to remain in my library. Hey, you! Yes, you reading this. Read this book and you will not regret it. [img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=fp][img=update]
The story so far is great, and I am interested to see what happens in the future. Adding this one to the collection! A bit of work could be done with the formatting, but over all, it is great so far!
Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something. Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer. Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system". So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting. It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused. I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
I am a fan of anime. So I tried out this novel, and while reading it, I felt like I was watching an anime. The story is intriguing, like, what happens next? And I am looking forward to reading more chapters. Keep up the good work, author.
READ IT GUYS! Read it to know the worth of the story, a very interesting and exciting System trope novel. The gaming Characters and Story plot is just great. It takes a lot of chapters for me to be hooked with the story, but this book completely made me hooked by just the first chapter.
5/5 (* ^ ω ^) The storyline is interesting ٩(◕‿◕｡)۶ I can properly sense the character development (☆ω☆) The world building is great ♡( ◡‿◡ ) The author has a unique writing style ╰(▔∀▔)╯ Great, please continue, author (´｡• ω •｡`) ♡