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Hi author , remember me? I was here reviewing two months ago and you did not fail to amuse me , again! Dark Light Nights progress: Writing Quality: over the past months , i notice you become more active in showing and it is a good sign. You need to focus more on what you wanted to feel in writing your book than coming back to see typos and it is fine to have that. Everyone has typo problems. Updating Stability: See your book is not just about words to enjoy , it feels I am watching a movie. For me , i like it. I like how you do it! Story Development: I thought it was a normal conflict but as I read further , it becomes scary , romantic , literature ,funny and mixed with amazing setups. Character Design: Ciana started as a pleasing character , then she became sensitive as the story developes. Everyone in the story has unique names , lively personalities that blends in! World Background: Arkedss may not described completely yet but i read and picture out the clans location and style, and to think about it—just takes me to another level of the world. The way you explain it , i do not know but for me , It is fantastic. HOPING TO READ MORE, AND I HOPE SOME READERS WOULD NOT GIVE UP READING THIS NOVEL DUE TO THE COINS ! YOU WOULD NOT REGRET READING EACH CHAPTER, THE NOVEL IS CREATED WELL! Do not forget to rest too fellow Author.[img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend]
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This is on point! Now, the book isn't choppy and use descriptive details to explain the plot. I could tell what was going on like the banishing of Alexander. Now I would say, I feel like the world background could be a bit defined, because at some times I forget where certain things are happening. Nonetheless, masterpiece.
hi, !!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
I give 5 stars because I saw your book from the part where you start it and now, you progress a lot the way you explain things. Its you trying to be in that science fiction, you spiced it up like your own recipe. Keep it up! also I like the chapter where Ciana just threw Eino like merciless [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I've only read the first chapter and I'm loving it. Saying good luck to a fellow author! Teach me your secrets! 👍 (I need to write more. So I might just do this. Jdodndikdndodnidndodhdindidjdijdndkdnkdndidjdidjidjdid)
Excellent all in all. Good writing, good characters, and wonderful world-building. The only thing I would recommend is a bit more description of what the setting and characters look like. I look forward to continuing my reading through your story.
Here is a good novel, the build of the words, well we can't avoid errors or grammar stuff, however, this book has a potential to grow. Keep it up !❤
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Hello sis! I read your synopsis and chapter 1 it is amazing, I feel like I am in a movie or smth. I don't know about the other people but the writing quality is good! , story development, its kinda slow pace but worth reading, character design! Ciana is described in chapter 2 beautifully. Keep updating more chapters! I am happy I read Dark Light Nights, its worth my time.
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The story is quite interesting, but you cant miss even a single paragraph because the story is taking new turn, in each paragh. The story is great, but characters are not well defined, world background is extraordinary, and fun to read something new! Updates are slow but we can understand. Overall amazing story, I hope it will get more interesting in future.
The plot is rather original and refreshing and I'll be looking forward to the rest! The characters are three-dimensional and the world background is spectacular(I'm a bit biased though, as I love any sci-fi setting) The only issues with the novel are some grammar and awkward phrasing which will be fixed in time or with the help of an editor! Overall, an imaginative novel that has a lot of potential and room for improvement. Keep up the good work!
An excellent novel with an interesting premise, a likeable cast of characters and an intriguing plot progression. I'm very excited to read the next chapters and I look forward to more.
Writing quality is great though there are a few things you can be a bit careful about. But the story has great potential. Like it a lot! Keep working on it!
Really neat story! I liked the opening, it really drew me in. The grammar isn't perfect, but that doesn't bother me at all personally, so it doesn't lower my rating one bit. Really interested and excited to see where it goes next!
The book cover (and the lighting for "Dark Light Nights" the red thingy) looks so awesome! I really love that and the concept of the story! The first few chapters are very captivating! The only thing that I'd like to point out the "Show, not tell" technique. There are few incomplete sentences from here and there. I am sure that once those were fixed, this novel will stand top on the mountains of books in Webnovel! Kudos for the author! (by the way, the sword reminded me of Star Wars. It looks so perfect and amazing!)
Have been reading around 10 chapters. At first, I thought this novel would be the classic light vs dark theme, but there seems more to it when you read more chapters. There are a lot of unique character with their own quirk. Ciana one of the most interesting, I think. The story progress in slow pace, not exactly my cup of tea but still bearable overall it's a good read!
I have read few of your chapters, and boy am I glad about it! Your cover is amazing, together with your chapters! I encourage everyone to read this awesome novel!
"A Highly Recommended Novel." I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Intriguing Story! I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand, the flow is amazing, the author surprises you in many ways, it has a good concept and the dialogues. Any reader will get caught up from the very start, the prologue of the work. MCs character designing, abilities, and the world-building of this work are definitely top-notch. In the end, I can only say Good work author, keep updating, it is in my collection now. As for all the readers out there, please give this work a try.
Although it felt a little peculiar reading it at first, I was very easily drawn in. Whether it be the pacing of the story, the way the characters were introduced with little to no descriptions, it strikes off as something 'different' and new. Great work👏👏
I jumped into this with no expectations, and was greatly surprised honestly. It's a very intriguing start for the story, and I'm more than curious to read what happens next. Honestly, AMAZING job!!
I got caught up from the start of the first chapter. The idea of two planets, one for dark and one for light, made me interested. Reading about planets and powers in the same book is like finding the perfect combination between Sci-Fi and Fantasy.
I really enjoyed getting to know the unique mythology of this book, Ciana's rebellious yet humble abilities, and the amazing worldbuilding in this futuristic, almost magickal setting. Immediately added to my library, and can't wait to dig in more!
.................................................. Sugoi Sugoi Sugoi!! !! Watashi daisuki ,this book!! !! good good book! plwease Read! must read! Watashi reccomends!
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand , the flow is amazing. Good luck on your writing friend. I really fancy your book. [img=recommend]
It really ends me with a question. The author have succeeded to click my interest with this kind of genre. I mostly read stories this kind and I am sure that it'll be a great journey for me to explore what's more into this. Great minds really worked hard. Goodluck!❤❤❤❤ Lovelots, Cie
It is never a good idea to change the spellings of known words to sound fancy. Such idiosyncrasies are barely forgiven even for top authors, much less a newbie. But then, I can understand the urge to do such things.. these anagrams sound and feel grand in one's own mind. Unfortunately, I give up at three such words. caves & vaecs? Thankfully, author does not over do this, and the writing quality is excellent. if not for the easy reading, and the fast pace of the story, over all brilliant quality, I would not continue. However, the writing quality is good, so I did read .. to the end. Well done. it's worth a read.
Hello there, Readers (New and Old). I want to say Thank you so much for being here. Support, add to the collection, and vote for this novel. I appreciate all the efforts. Enjoy reading, and Have a great day ahead![img=recommend]
Hi author , remember me? I was here reviewing two months ago and you did not fail to amuse me , again! Dark Light Nights progress: Writing Quality: over the past months , i notice you become more active in showing and it is a good sign. You need to focus more on what you wanted to feel in writing your book than coming back to see typos and it is fine to have that. Everyone has typo problems. Updating Stability: See your book is not just about words to enjoy , it feels I am watching a movie. For me , i like it. I like how you do it! Story Development: I thought it was a normal conflict but as I read further , it becomes scary , romantic , literature ,funny and mixed with amazing setups. Character Design: Ciana started as a pleasing character , then she became sensitive as the story developes. Everyone in the story has unique names , lively personalities that blends in! World Background: Arkedss may not described completely yet but i read and picture out the clans location and style, and to think about it—just takes me to another level of the world. The way you explain it , i do not know but for me , It is fantastic. HOPING TO READ MORE, AND I HOPE SOME READERS WOULD NOT GIVE UP READING THIS NOVEL DUE TO THE COINS ! YOU WOULD NOT REGRET READING EACH CHAPTER, THE NOVEL IS CREATED WELL! Do not forget to rest too fellow Author.[img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend]
ネタバレを明かす This is on point! Now, the book isn't choppy and use descriptive details to explain the plot. I could tell what was going on like the banishing of Alexander. Now I would say, I feel like the world background could be a bit defined, because at some times I forget where certain things are happening. Nonetheless, masterpiece.
hi, !!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
I give 5 stars because I saw your book from the part where you start it and now, you progress a lot the way you explain things. Its you trying to be in that science fiction, you spiced it up like your own recipe. Keep it up! also I like the chapter where Ciana just threw Eino like merciless [img=update][img=update][img=update]
ネタバレを明かす fig nkig Cyn of still park of DJ party Larry kaam jaruri park kisi Kath is an of DSM tk lga aaj ke CM of ati is no log DJ lg su of DJ lg su of hm
I've only read the first chapter and I'm loving it. Saying good luck to a fellow author! Teach me your secrets! 👍 (I need to write more. So I might just do this. Jdodndikdndodnidndodhdindidjdijdndkdnkdndidjdidjidjdid)
Excellent all in all. Good writing, good characters, and wonderful world-building. The only thing I would recommend is a bit more description of what the setting and characters look like. I look forward to continuing my reading through your story.
Here is a good novel, the build of the words, well we can't avoid errors or grammar stuff, however, this book has a potential to grow. Keep it up !❤
ネタバレを明かす Hello sis! I read your synopsis and chapter 1 it is amazing, I feel like I am in a movie or smth. I don't know about the other people but the writing quality is good! , story development, its kinda slow pace but worth reading, character design! Ciana is described in chapter 2 beautifully. Keep updating more chapters! I am happy I read Dark Light Nights, its worth my time.
ネタバレを明かす The story is quite interesting, but you cant miss even a single paragraph because the story is taking new turn, in each paragh. The story is great, but characters are not well defined, world background is extraordinary, and fun to read something new! Updates are slow but we can understand. Overall amazing story, I hope it will get more interesting in future.
The plot is rather original and refreshing and I'll be looking forward to the rest! The characters are three-dimensional and the world background is spectacular(I'm a bit biased though, as I love any sci-fi setting) The only issues with the novel are some grammar and awkward phrasing which will be fixed in time or with the help of an editor! Overall, an imaginative novel that has a lot of potential and room for improvement. Keep up the good work!
An excellent novel with an interesting premise, a likeable cast of characters and an intriguing plot progression. I'm very excited to read the next chapters and I look forward to more.
Writing quality is great though there are a few things you can be a bit careful about. But the story has great potential. Like it a lot! Keep working on it!
Really neat story! I liked the opening, it really drew me in. The grammar isn't perfect, but that doesn't bother me at all personally, so it doesn't lower my rating one bit. Really interested and excited to see where it goes next!
The book cover (and the lighting for "Dark Light Nights" the red thingy) looks so awesome! I really love that and the concept of the story! The first few chapters are very captivating! The only thing that I'd like to point out the "Show, not tell" technique. There are few incomplete sentences from here and there. I am sure that once those were fixed, this novel will stand top on the mountains of books in Webnovel! Kudos for the author! (by the way, the sword reminded me of Star Wars. It looks so perfect and amazing!)
Have been reading around 10 chapters. At first, I thought this novel would be the classic light vs dark theme, but there seems more to it when you read more chapters. There are a lot of unique character with their own quirk. Ciana one of the most interesting, I think. The story progress in slow pace, not exactly my cup of tea but still bearable overall it's a good read!
I have read few of your chapters, and boy am I glad about it! Your cover is amazing, together with your chapters! I encourage everyone to read this awesome novel!
"A Highly Recommended Novel." I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Intriguing Story! I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand, the flow is amazing, the author surprises you in many ways, it has a good concept and the dialogues. Any reader will get caught up from the very start, the prologue of the work. MCs character designing, abilities, and the world-building of this work are definitely top-notch. In the end, I can only say Good work author, keep updating, it is in my collection now. As for all the readers out there, please give this work a try.
Although it felt a little peculiar reading it at first, I was very easily drawn in. Whether it be the pacing of the story, the way the characters were introduced with little to no descriptions, it strikes off as something 'different' and new. Great work👏👏
I jumped into this with no expectations, and was greatly surprised honestly. It's a very intriguing start for the story, and I'm more than curious to read what happens next. Honestly, AMAZING job!!
I got caught up from the start of the first chapter. The idea of two planets, one for dark and one for light, made me interested. Reading about planets and powers in the same book is like finding the perfect combination between Sci-Fi and Fantasy.
I really enjoyed getting to know the unique mythology of this book, Ciana's rebellious yet humble abilities, and the amazing worldbuilding in this futuristic, almost magickal setting. Immediately added to my library, and can't wait to dig in more!
.................................................. Sugoi Sugoi Sugoi!! !! Watashi daisuki ,this book!! !! good good book! plwease Read! must read! Watashi reccomends!
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand , the flow is amazing. Good luck on your writing friend. I really fancy your book. [img=recommend]
It really ends me with a question. The author have succeeded to click my interest with this kind of genre. I mostly read stories this kind and I am sure that it'll be a great journey for me to explore what's more into this. Great minds really worked hard. Goodluck!❤❤❤❤ Lovelots, Cie
It is never a good idea to change the spellings of known words to sound fancy. Such idiosyncrasies are barely forgiven even for top authors, much less a newbie. But then, I can understand the urge to do such things.. these anagrams sound and feel grand in one's own mind. Unfortunately, I give up at three such words. caves & vaecs? Thankfully, author does not over do this, and the writing quality is excellent. if not for the easy reading, and the fast pace of the story, over all brilliant quality, I would not continue. However, the writing quality is good, so I did read .. to the end. Well done. it's worth a read.
Hello there, Readers (New and Old). I want to say Thank you so much for being here. Support, add to the collection, and vote for this novel. I appreciate all the efforts. Enjoy reading, and Have a great day ahead![img=recommend]