Dark Light Nights

LV 10

Majestica

Hi author , remember me? I was here reviewing two months ago and you did not fail to amuse me , again! Dark Light Nights progress: Writing Quality: over the past months , i notice you become more active in showing and it is a good sign. You need to focus more on what you wanted to feel in writing your book than coming back to see typos and it is fine to have that. Everyone has typo problems. Updating Stability: See your book is not just about words to enjoy , it feels I am watching a movie. For me , i like it. I like how you do it! Story Development: I thought it was a normal conflict but as I read further , it becomes scary , romantic , literature ,funny and mixed with amazing setups. Character Design: Ciana started as a pleasing character , then she became sensitive as the story developes. Everyone in the story has unique names , lively personalities that blends in! World Background: Arkedss may not described completely yet but i read and picture out the clans location and style, and to think about it—just takes me to another level of the world. The way you explain it , i do not know but for me , It is fantastic. HOPING TO READ MORE, AND I HOPE SOME READERS WOULD NOT GIVE UP READING THIS NOVEL DUE TO THE COINS ! YOU WOULD NOT REGRET READING EACH CHAPTER, THE NOVEL IS CREATED WELL! Do not forget to rest too fellow Author.[img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend]

3yr 3

LV 10

Majestica

I can’t wait for the next chapters , please update 😭😭

3yr 6

LV 10

Nineza_Yk

Hello sis! I read your synopsis and chapter 1 it is amazing, I feel like I am in a movie or smth. I don't know about the other people but the writing quality is good! , story development, its kinda slow pace but worth reading, character design! Ciana is described in chapter 2 beautifully. Keep updating more chapters! I am happy I read Dark Light Nights, its worth my time.

3yr 3

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!

3yr 3

LV 2

Parth_Singh_1448

The story is quite interesting, but you cant miss even a single paragraph because the story is taking new turn, in each paragh. The story is great, but characters are not well defined, world background is extraordinary, and fun to read something new! Updates are slow but we can understand. Overall amazing story, I hope it will get more interesting in future.

3yr 2

LV 2

TheSuccessor

This is on point! Now, the book isn't choppy and use descriptive details to explain the plot. I could tell what was going on like the banishing of Alexander. Now I would say, I feel like the world background could be a bit defined, because at some times I forget where certain things are happening. Nonetheless, masterpiece.

2yr 1

LV 1

BLOOPINGBLOOPER

hi, !!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

3yr 1

LV 10

Xuizu_14

I give 5 stars because I saw your book from the part where you start it and now, you progress a lot the way you explain things. Its you trying to be in that science fiction, you spiced it up like your own recipe. Keep it up! also I like the chapter where Ciana just threw Eino like merciless [img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr 1

LV 1

Olympu

I've only read the first chapter and I'm loving it. Saying good luck to a fellow author! Teach me your secrets! 👍 (I need to write more. So I might just do this. Jdodndikdndodnidndodhdindidjdijdndkdnkdndidjdidjidjdid)

3yr 1

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LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

Excellent all in all. Good writing, good characters, and wonderful world-building. The only thing I would recommend is a bit more description of what the setting and characters look like. I look forward to continuing my reading through your story.

3yr 1

LV 10

Baby_Kulot_2620

Here is a good novel, the build of the words, well we can't avoid errors or grammar stuff, however, this book has a potential to grow. Keep it up !❤

3yr 1

LV 10

BlindBandit

An excellent novel with an interesting premise, a likeable cast of characters and an intriguing plot progression. I'm very excited to read the next chapters and I look forward to more.

3yr 1

LV 3

Proteety_Promi

Writing quality is great though there are a few things you can be a bit careful about. But the story has great potential. Like it a lot! Keep working on it!

3yr 1

LV 1

ReginaldDabs

Really neat story! I liked the opening, it really drew me in. The grammar isn't perfect, but that doesn't bother me at all personally, so it doesn't lower my rating one bit. Really interested and excited to see where it goes next!

3yr 1

LV 3

kuhaku_sora

The book cover (and the lighting for "Dark Light Nights" the red thingy) looks so awesome! I really love that and the concept of the story! The first few chapters are very captivating! The only thing that I'd like to point out the "Show, not tell" technique. There are few incomplete sentences from here and there. I am sure that once those were fixed, this novel will stand top on the mountains of books in Webnovel! Kudos for the author! (by the way, the sword reminded me of Star Wars. It looks so perfect and amazing!)

3yr 1

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LV 13

BigMarch

Have been reading around 10 chapters. At first, I thought this novel would be the classic light vs dark theme, but there seems more to it when you read more chapters. There are a lot of unique character with their own quirk. Ciana one of the most interesting, I think. The story progress in slow pace, not exactly my cup of tea but still bearable overall it's a good read!

3yr 1

LV 3

kuhaku_sora

I have read few of your chapters, and boy am I glad about it! Your cover is amazing, together with your chapters! I encourage everyone to read this awesome novel!

3yr 1

LV 4

Maryixxx

"A Highly Recommended Novel." I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.

3yr 1

LV 2

Madym

Intriguing Story! I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand, the flow is amazing, the author surprises you in many ways, it has a good concept and the dialogues. Any reader will get caught up from the very start, the prologue of the work. MCs character designing, abilities, and the world-building of this work are definitely top-notch. In the end, I can only say Good work author, keep updating, it is in my collection now. As for all the readers out there, please give this work a try.

3yr 1