Divine mind and body

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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Daoist7PXpGE

Amazing book. Now and then you use the wrong pronouns but I believe you will be able to fix that and other than that It's an amazing story full of potential[img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Fenrir_zero

I like the story so far. Its not everyday you get to read an apocalypse novel. I just suggest that you fix your writing quality. You keep switching between she and he to refer to the mc. Couple of grammar issues but nothing really infuriating. Keep it up ma guy.

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Empyrium

It is a good novel with a lot of potential but the grammar is so annoying, the author doesn't know the difference between a female, a male and it. Which is really annoying because you always have to think about it and correct it yourself

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_GLT_

Good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Juanuuuu

Estar esta bien, los capitulos son cortos pero intensos, entiendes o que quiero decir. Sigue subiendo capítulos, no está nada mal. Ánimo colega, lo haces bien.

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DaoistU369pF

Not bad in general, good, the plot is good and the world is fine. You can also more chapters. Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,Good,GoodGood.

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DaoistgvWF09

Not bad in general, the chapters are a little short, but other than that good, the plot is good and the world is fine. You can also upload more chapters

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DraconicWulf

good story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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dreamer_thirteen

I liked it, it has some annoying clichés, but otherwise, it remains faithful to the proposal presented since the first chapters............

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Aquele_que_pensa

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dvces

pretty decent so far, the mc is extremely overpowered i guess it makes sense he rules the world or whatever that cryptic sentence was in the synopsis

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Ricardo2

I love apocalypse related novels, especially if they have romance, and they are very hard to find so I have high expectations for this novel. After reading more I'll edit my review to either increase or decrease my score. Btw the grammar could be a bit better, but it is readable, I've seen much worse.

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fegzzxc

Good story and promising but Author seems not care to correct his error with the she instead of he. And the ponctuation need to be check too, appart from it it's an Op MC from the start so i just hope the side character won't be tge kind of stupid acting whitout thinking. I will maybe later gave another review but so far the story was great but yhe Author who don't treat his work properly make me want to drop this novel it's a shame good luck for your work hope you will learn something with the commenr your reader gave you.

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DraconicWulf

its good story I like it but if get time I would suggest going back fixing she and he mix ups its good promise for its story type other then the typos[img=recommend]