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a normal human was migrated to Naruto's Kurama with a character system.
the characters of this work are not of my creation only the MC and others that can be created in the course of the work. the cover photo is not mine.
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レビューを書くI read this fanfic before the author rewritten this fic. While there are only 3 chapters (in the time I'm writing) the story and it's idea is there but the context of the mc transmigrated into Kurama and getting the system is left out. Other than that the idea of the story has potential but the Harem and NTR aspect of the previous fanfic turned me off. TLDR This fanfic has potential but has too few chapters to tell if it's worth it
Not worth the 20minutes I wasted reading Not bad grammar not bad idea other than the fact that 99.9% of the stuff he says isn't in the story and most of it is made up because if you go to the wiki it shows that even when a seal is undone the person with the seal can still make it so the tailed beast is unable to leave the body of the host 2 when the tailed beast leaves the body all chakra related to the beast can't be saved in the host or be connected to it the only way naruto survived this way was because Minato sealed half of the yang side of Kurama in him witch he later gave to naruto but it's still Kurama. 2.6
very good.....................its new way of development an character design.............................waiting for update :)..................................................[img=update]
I read the first few chapters and I can't continue reading it because the writer can't decide if kurama is a girl or a boy with her in one chapter and him in another I just can't continue reading it
作者 Kj18
The grammar is pretty decent, there are some mixed up pronouns but it's not a big deal. The idea is pretty praiseworthy and unique. I also like how the Mc is OP. I've always liked an MC that is powerful enough to pretty much do whatever he wants. So as long as they aren't stupid or boring, or crazy psychopaths I like OP MC. However the character development is pretty terrible. You have a modern person, presumably, fusing with kurama soul and getting a system. Since their souls fuse and they share emotions like the story says, there is no way the Mc can be a super nice guy with naive dreams of equality right? Wrong, apparently the being made up of a soul that knows everything about Canon and the soul and power of an ancient creature that's been unjustly enslaved by humans for a century and used as a weapon of war, wants to prove that he is not a monster and prove that he's an equal to the humans. This is annoying and a little sad that you gave them this kind of complex where they feel the need to prove themselves to everyone around them like naruto did, like a child that was abused by their parents still trying to seek approval from them even as adults. But some of the biju take it a step further and want to willingly enslave themselves to their village to prove that they are equals and that they aren't monsters. I feel like I'm reading about a bunch of abused wives saying that it's their own fault their husband's hit them. Just for this it went from 4.5-3 and that's only cause the rest of the story is alright and because I don't want this review to be taken as a one star hate review. Of course this can only be counted as my own opinion and if you don't see anything I said as a problem then you should give it a read. Despite what I said it's not a bad novel, it's just not of Interest to me after that.
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