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Awesome story. I admit I teared up a bit. Author knows how to pull out our emotion so we feel for the characters and that is just awesome story telling. absolutely loved this novel. Absolutely won't be disappointed reading .
I absolutely love this story❤️❤️!! The love between the main and side characters is so strong that you can feel it. I just wished there were special chapters of how they are now.
This is very interesting story FL is stronge, indipendent and beautiful. ML love her, mystery to solve, great reading 💗💗💗💗💝💝💝💝❤️❤️🌹
great romance novel lot of action plots and twist couldn't put book down. can't wait to read the next novel..................................
Great little read. I would have liked if it continued and we got to see more of them, but sadly it ends at 350 chapters. Will definitely read the sequel if there is one.
I love this story so much! I'm sad that it's ending soon even when I'm still not even half-way through, but so far this story has been an utter joy to read. SUNDROP/MOONKISS OTP FOREVER Looking forward to your next work!
Really good story. So far there is a great story line. I‘m really enjoying it. I highly recommend to check it out. The characters are nice too.
I find it hard to find stories with strong female characters because they're always needing rescue but this book proves me otherwise. There's a balance of being strong and soft at the right time and and that's what gets me hooked to it. Please keep up the good work author!
A good story for binge reading. Characters are well depicted and it's easy to fall in love with them. Mysteries, adventures and true love. Definitely recommend!
I’m loving the mystery around the female lead and her man. This story is fun with some romance and magic. All of the characters are intriguing!!
In fact, I ran into this novel because of the title, but after reading it, I really felt that the author had put an effort into writing it. I thank the author for the wonderful time while reading it[img=recommend]
Definitely a good story. I started reading it two days ago...and I'm hooked. I find myself not being able to put it down...without forcing myself.
I'm hooked! The FL is so strong! I love her determination. The ML is equal parts charm and devotion. Their interactions are always smile-inducing. The supporting characters are equally entertaining!
good writing, good story there really isn't any negative to say nothing in the story seems forced or anything I'm always waiting for new chapters ❤️
A really sweet love story. Also, the fantasy world is well crafted. The author’s hard work clearly shows. Thank you to the author for this amazing story.
Love the novel and definitely will be following how the mystery will be solved. Both FL and ML are well written and very likeable. 2nd characters are standing their own ground and are awesome. Highly recommend to vote for this novel to get more recognition for it!
please continue this book! omg I'm in love!!!! it is written so well. love the characters so much and the plot is so neat. cant wait for more chapters
Love it! The story is interesting and the author has an amazing writing style and quality!
I absolutely love the story. The characters are unique and intriguing. The story moves at a perfect pase and I like that the writer gives just enough description to leave the imagination to the reader. Definitely give the book a try.
I love the novel right away when I see this type of genre the author make such a good novel that I read all of them in one go. It's so interesting and beautifully written, the characters are all good too the ML aint a jerk which is great the FL is also strong Thank you Author for creating this can't wait for more
The story is very intriguing and has a good writing style. The story is interesting enough to keep you wanting to read more. Good job Author! 🥰💖
The writing was excellently done that it's so easy to follow. It's has right pacing too and already lots of mystery to unfold in the next chapters. It's a great read. I highly recommend it to readers. 🤗
After reading few chapters, I couldn't help but give five stars to your book. It's fantastic. I love every aspect of this book and the effort author kept for this book is commendable.
I absolutely love this book! It’s amazing! I can’t wait for more chapters to come out! You are doing a wonderful job! Keep up the good work! 🤗🤗
The novel had a promising premise and a lot of potential to be gripping, but unfortunately, it fell short in execution. The protagonist, while portrayed as highly intuitive and intelligent, often failed to connect the dots when the story blatantly laid out all the hints and clues. This inconsistency in her characterization made her actions feel frustrating and unconvincing. For someone who was designed to be sharp and capable, her lack of awareness didn’t align with the foundation of her character. The pacing of the story was another major drawback. Instead of building momentum, the plot dragged unnecessarily with filler chapters that didn’t contribute to the main storyline. This left the narrative feeling disjointed, with key moments overshadowed and lacking the tension they deserved. The climax, when it finally arrived, felt anti-climactic because the buildup was diluted by too much filler. Character development was a significant missed opportunity. At the beginning, the male lead had an intriguing presence, but as the story progressed, his personality fell flat, becoming one-dimensional and unengaging. The female lead suffered a similar fate—her character was initially oversold as extraordinary, but there was little growth or depth to back it up. As a result, their chemistry lacked spark, and their arcs failed to evoke any emotional investment. Overall, while the novel had an interesting premise and some potential for greatness, it was weighed down by poor pacing, lackluster character development, and missed opportunities to create tension and excitement. It’s a story that could have soared with tighter editing and a stronger focus on the main plot, but instead, it left me skimming through chapters, hoping for more substance.
Awesome story. I admit I teared up a bit. Author knows how to pull out our emotion so we feel for the characters and that is just awesome story telling. absolutely loved this novel. Absolutely won't be disappointed reading .
I absolutely love this story❤️❤️!! The love between the main and side characters is so strong that you can feel it. I just wished there were special chapters of how they are now.
This is very interesting story FL is stronge, indipendent and beautiful. ML love her, mystery to solve, great reading 💗💗💗💗💝💝💝💝❤️❤️🌹
great romance novel lot of action plots and twist couldn't put book down. can't wait to read the next novel..................................
Great little read. I would have liked if it continued and we got to see more of them, but sadly it ends at 350 chapters. Will definitely read the sequel if there is one.
I love this story so much! I'm sad that it's ending soon even when I'm still not even half-way through, but so far this story has been an utter joy to read. SUNDROP/MOONKISS OTP FOREVER Looking forward to your next work!
Really good story. So far there is a great story line. I‘m really enjoying it. I highly recommend to check it out. The characters are nice too.
I find it hard to find stories with strong female characters because they're always needing rescue but this book proves me otherwise. There's a balance of being strong and soft at the right time and and that's what gets me hooked to it. Please keep up the good work author!
A good story for binge reading. Characters are well depicted and it's easy to fall in love with them. Mysteries, adventures and true love. Definitely recommend!
I’m loving the mystery around the female lead and her man. This story is fun with some romance and magic. All of the characters are intriguing!!
In fact, I ran into this novel because of the title, but after reading it, I really felt that the author had put an effort into writing it. I thank the author for the wonderful time while reading it[img=recommend]
Definitely a good story. I started reading it two days ago...and I'm hooked. I find myself not being able to put it down...without forcing myself.
I'm hooked! The FL is so strong! I love her determination. The ML is equal parts charm and devotion. Their interactions are always smile-inducing. The supporting characters are equally entertaining!
good writing, good story there really isn't any negative to say nothing in the story seems forced or anything I'm always waiting for new chapters ❤️
A really sweet love story. Also, the fantasy world is well crafted. The author’s hard work clearly shows. Thank you to the author for this amazing story.
Love the novel and definitely will be following how the mystery will be solved. Both FL and ML are well written and very likeable. 2nd characters are standing their own ground and are awesome. Highly recommend to vote for this novel to get more recognition for it!
please continue this book! omg I'm in love!!!! it is written so well. love the characters so much and the plot is so neat. cant wait for more chapters
Love it! The story is interesting and the author has an amazing writing style and quality!
I absolutely love the story. The characters are unique and intriguing. The story moves at a perfect pase and I like that the writer gives just enough description to leave the imagination to the reader. Definitely give the book a try.
I love the novel right away when I see this type of genre the author make such a good novel that I read all of them in one go. It's so interesting and beautifully written, the characters are all good too the ML aint a jerk which is great the FL is also strong Thank you Author for creating this can't wait for more
The story is very intriguing and has a good writing style. The story is interesting enough to keep you wanting to read more. Good job Author! 🥰💖
The writing was excellently done that it's so easy to follow. It's has right pacing too and already lots of mystery to unfold in the next chapters. It's a great read. I highly recommend it to readers. 🤗
After reading few chapters, I couldn't help but give five stars to your book. It's fantastic. I love every aspect of this book and the effort author kept for this book is commendable.
I absolutely love this book! It’s amazing! I can’t wait for more chapters to come out! You are doing a wonderful job! Keep up the good work! 🤗🤗
The novel had a promising premise and a lot of potential to be gripping, but unfortunately, it fell short in execution. The protagonist, while portrayed as highly intuitive and intelligent, often failed to connect the dots when the story blatantly laid out all the hints and clues. This inconsistency in her characterization made her actions feel frustrating and unconvincing. For someone who was designed to be sharp and capable, her lack of awareness didn’t align with the foundation of her character. The pacing of the story was another major drawback. Instead of building momentum, the plot dragged unnecessarily with filler chapters that didn’t contribute to the main storyline. This left the narrative feeling disjointed, with key moments overshadowed and lacking the tension they deserved. The climax, when it finally arrived, felt anti-climactic because the buildup was diluted by too much filler. Character development was a significant missed opportunity. At the beginning, the male lead had an intriguing presence, but as the story progressed, his personality fell flat, becoming one-dimensional and unengaging. The female lead suffered a similar fate—her character was initially oversold as extraordinary, but there was little growth or depth to back it up. As a result, their chemistry lacked spark, and their arcs failed to evoke any emotional investment. Overall, while the novel had an interesting premise and some potential for greatness, it was weighed down by poor pacing, lackluster character development, and missed opportunities to create tension and excitement. It’s a story that could have soared with tighter editing and a stronger focus on the main plot, but instead, it left me skimming through chapters, hoping for more substance.