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Reasonable story line, based on a good concept. Unrealistic inter-character relationship development, zero struggle or effort required for anything. It feels slightly bland and lacking intrigue.
Slow as fu!ck like seriously it is so slow that the reader loses interest in the story. Other than that it is a good story well written and good character and world design.
Love the whole idea of this book well written with interesting and likeable characters that have you rooting for them and hating the bad guy!!! Tame more interesting demons i cant wait!!
the start is nice and steady, while some encounters are a little bit to coincidentally. I had high hopes for the first dungeon, but using more than 50 chapters just for one dungeon/fight and scaling the MCs responsibility through the roof at the end...nope, sorry without me
I was always into fantasy. It is a good plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the characters are well explained Well Written!!!!
It is an amazing novel. Really, author, you did a great job on doing this. I added it to my library to see upcoming chapters. Just like the other reviews, I think that this novel is different from the rest of the new novel.
I have read tons and lolo of system novel and they ended up pretty the same, having cheat skills on set of the novel, became powerful in one go and so and so fort. But this one, yeah it seem like your usual system as well but from the looks to it, it doesn't like your everyday OP system and gosh he needs to tame a dragom within 48 hours or die forever? 😅 I would understand if it is 48 days since taming a dragon is not that easy when you just transmigrated or something 😅 All in all, well written novel and every sentence is understandable. I haven't read that far so I'm going to put this on my Library to read it further if I have time. Keep up the work author! 😊😊😊
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Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone
The story idea is really good. Good back ground. the only thing i dont like is the super slow pace. Everything seems to drag for chapters. im all for building the story and world but I would rmhoy it way more if he bumped up the pace of the story
Nice book cover and design. Loving the synopsis and the DEMON pets, as a fan of pokèmon series. Hope this climbs up the rankings and the author doesn't stop writing ^.^
I loved the cover and how the chapters are short. The story line is well defined and I really like the author's writing style. Overall I can say this is an incredible webnovel I have read so far. I am giving it a five star.
I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel is very good and I've already added it to my collection, I'm a fan of the fantasy genre and I really like system tags. The world construction is very good and the plot is interesting, I hope the author stays firm with this novel.
Originally this was supposed to be a review swap, but I don't necessarily think I need to do it anymore. I just realized this book was made by the same author of bloodlines of ancient pantheons, the very first original book I've ever read, and one of my favorites. I've already read through to the first 30 chapters and I just knew that the author wouldn't disappoint. Apart from the fact that there are some mistakes in the writing quality (which btw a simple editor can fix), everything is just perfect Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a bit more to read...
💯 I like the way the story evolves, the description, the characters. Among the many books I have read definitely the best story. Original, fascinating. Keep writing please 💯
I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things. The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top. need something fresh .. kudos!
From what I read so far, I really like your spacial description(the ambiences where the scenes take place). Everything is well written, although you have a tendency of writing ' ... ' a bit too often. Also there is a funny mistake in the first chapters, that REALLY needs to be updated.
I love this kind of BOOK 📙 Definitely one of the most original here! Story development, cover, writing. Almost everything There are too many superficial books, with horrible covers here. I don't understand how they get all this success! It will remain forever a mystery to me 😡 SUPPORT THOSE WHO DESERVE IT!
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The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. This novel is pretty good and the story development is also good. I like the novel and its concept
Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality. Keep it up, author!
Your synopsis is very interesting as well as the story. The storyline is great and the sentences are also neat. I hope you'll update more. Keep it up!👍
Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
The story itself was interesting and it has a good plot that was nicely written out! The characters were unique too!! The story is totally worth to read!! Good job author, keep it up!! [img=recommend]
I think the idea is unique and the writing quality is also good. The character is very interesting as well. Totally worth a read! [img=recommend]
every expectation is fulfilled. the author is amazing and deserves to rise high in contests ✨✨✨✨✨ let's vote for it and support it all! can't stop writing pleaseeee🖋
The plot is interesting and I especially liked the introduction. The writing style is superb with no grammar errors. Overall this is one of the books which would reach heights. Good work, Author!!
Author's notes: No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you. I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read. Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks. Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated. Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).
Reasonable story line, based on a good concept. Unrealistic inter-character relationship development, zero struggle or effort required for anything. It feels slightly bland and lacking intrigue.
Slow as fu!ck like seriously it is so slow that the reader loses interest in the story. Other than that it is a good story well written and good character and world design.
Love the whole idea of this book well written with interesting and likeable characters that have you rooting for them and hating the bad guy!!! Tame more interesting demons i cant wait!!
the start is nice and steady, while some encounters are a little bit to coincidentally. I had high hopes for the first dungeon, but using more than 50 chapters just for one dungeon/fight and scaling the MCs responsibility through the roof at the end...nope, sorry without me
I was always into fantasy. It is a good plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the characters are well explained Well Written!!!!
It is an amazing novel. Really, author, you did a great job on doing this. I added it to my library to see upcoming chapters. Just like the other reviews, I think that this novel is different from the rest of the new novel.
I have read tons and lolo of system novel and they ended up pretty the same, having cheat skills on set of the novel, became powerful in one go and so and so fort. But this one, yeah it seem like your usual system as well but from the looks to it, it doesn't like your everyday OP system and gosh he needs to tame a dragom within 48 hours or die forever? 😅 I would understand if it is 48 days since taming a dragon is not that easy when you just transmigrated or something 😅 All in all, well written novel and every sentence is understandable. I haven't read that far so I'm going to put this on my Library to read it further if I have time. Keep up the work author! 😊😊😊
ネタバレを明かす Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone
The story idea is really good. Good back ground. the only thing i dont like is the super slow pace. Everything seems to drag for chapters. im all for building the story and world but I would rmhoy it way more if he bumped up the pace of the story
Nice book cover and design. Loving the synopsis and the DEMON pets, as a fan of pokèmon series. Hope this climbs up the rankings and the author doesn't stop writing ^.^
I loved the cover and how the chapters are short. The story line is well defined and I really like the author's writing style. Overall I can say this is an incredible webnovel I have read so far. I am giving it a five star.
I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel is very good and I've already added it to my collection, I'm a fan of the fantasy genre and I really like system tags. The world construction is very good and the plot is interesting, I hope the author stays firm with this novel.
Originally this was supposed to be a review swap, but I don't necessarily think I need to do it anymore. I just realized this book was made by the same author of bloodlines of ancient pantheons, the very first original book I've ever read, and one of my favorites. I've already read through to the first 30 chapters and I just knew that the author wouldn't disappoint. Apart from the fact that there are some mistakes in the writing quality (which btw a simple editor can fix), everything is just perfect Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a bit more to read...
💯 I like the way the story evolves, the description, the characters. Among the many books I have read definitely the best story. Original, fascinating. Keep writing please 💯
I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things. The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top. need something fresh .. kudos!
From what I read so far, I really like your spacial description(the ambiences where the scenes take place). Everything is well written, although you have a tendency of writing ' ... ' a bit too often. Also there is a funny mistake in the first chapters, that REALLY needs to be updated.
I love this kind of BOOK 📙 Definitely one of the most original here! Story development, cover, writing. Almost everything There are too many superficial books, with horrible covers here. I don't understand how they get all this success! It will remain forever a mystery to me 😡 SUPPORT THOSE WHO DESERVE IT!
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨support this book support this book support this book ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. This novel is pretty good and the story development is also good. I like the novel and its concept
Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality. Keep it up, author!
Your synopsis is very interesting as well as the story. The storyline is great and the sentences are also neat. I hope you'll update more. Keep it up!👍
Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
The story itself was interesting and it has a good plot that was nicely written out! The characters were unique too!! The story is totally worth to read!! Good job author, keep it up!! [img=recommend]
I think the idea is unique and the writing quality is also good. The character is very interesting as well. Totally worth a read! [img=recommend]
every expectation is fulfilled. the author is amazing and deserves to rise high in contests ✨✨✨✨✨ let's vote for it and support it all! can't stop writing pleaseeee🖋
The plot is interesting and I especially liked the introduction. The writing style is superb with no grammar errors. Overall this is one of the books which would reach heights. Good work, Author!!
Author's notes: No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you. I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read. Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks. Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated. Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).