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Spoiler alert: This is a damn fantastic book. I love how the author sets you up with a ton of mystery and questions at the start then artfully lets it unfold around you as you read. Ooh the level of skill gave me shivers! The characters, more particularly their dynamics with each other, are superb. Evin is fantastic, he is witty, opinionated, but equally tormented by his father and burdened by the pressures of society. He has hopes, dreams, and the author does a great job of making believable, if not entirely realistic characters. Such raw emotion in a book is hard to come by, too. I really felt so much for all of them. The world building was equally as good. Although I had a lot of questions at the start, the more I read the more everything pieced itself together, unravelling the mysterys of the world like any good book should. Not once did I lose interest, the story was fast paced, well thought out, and bolstered by some absolutely top quality description. If you cant tell, I really dont have any bad things to say about this book. Perhaps give a little warning about the abusive nature of the father? But honestly, this novel was so compelling, I would recommend it to anyone either way. Author, fantastic work!
I enjoyed the story until around chapter 200. Where the story is essentially about a kid who has a reincarnated soul in his head. They live with each other, fight, make up, etc. The voice in his head teaches him things and casts some spells for him. Either way, the focus is essentially on the kid and his life, while the soul is really pretty much a side character all that time. But around chapter 200 the soul is given the option to kill the kid and take over his body. Which he ends up doing, so what we were led to believe was the supposed MC just gets killed off like that and the soul is now taking over his body and gonna cut ties with people and live differently. I get that the synopsis and first chapter made it seem lile the guy getting reincarnated would be the MC, but he got turned into a soul instead and pretty much made into what I assumed was a permanent side character position. Either way, I'm pretty disappointed with this turn of events, it feels like all that story and character development the kid went through was just thrown away after all that time, and now we get the side character who had like 80% less development as the new MC.
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Great story, MC can be whiny and immature at times but he is still a kid. It's an interesting dynamic between MC and Endra. Both characters showing growth alongside with some side characters. Sometimes it felt uncomfortable reading the romance between MC and FMC consider it says their age is 10 but year/month scale is different? Story is already expanding to a mysterious bigger picture, with another 100 or so chapters, it would be worth a binge read.
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This... . . . . a SUPERB and Worth While READ... Review Proper after chapter 12 Writing Quality. The narratives are well-written and zero grammar errors so far. Or if there are some, I'm just engrossed reading the story to notice 😌. Stability of Updates. I see no problem here. The author seems to have stable updates so far. Plus it is already 100 plus chapters perfect for binge reading. Story Development. From the first chapter until the next, everything is flowing smoothly. Although from introducing the world background and such, it didn't feel some info. dumps due to the remarks of Voice lol. Character Design. They are all well-rounded from Evin, to voice and the other charas all have a distinct persona with each other. World Background. Very interesting, with the first grade, Emperor, Empress, and others. I look forward to more. Overall, this book is a great read and greatly recommended. And I must warn you, once you start reading you will not be able to stop anymore and you realize you're already far from the first chap. Great Work! Keep it up, author! All the best for the WSA
Hello, your story is great. Wish you can do good in the WSA competition and that you can drive further in your story. I was thinking, do you have any expertise in writing, and do you know how to put on dialogues in stories? I'm waiting for your response in the comments. Good luck!
This is an amazing book, at 1st i was skeptical because most books with high ratings on webnovel aren't that good but this novel deserves it rating and more. My only regret is that I didn't begin reading this book sooner.
[img=update]What an amazing work!! The cover alone is awesome.. it’s well-written.. I love the way you build the character.. and 11 chapters a week?! You’re my motivation! Lol👏🏻
Amazing Plot.. I loved the concept so much and your writing style is very easy. I could visualize every scenes and I enjoyed what I saw while reading ( well that's the fun part of reading) Good work, Author!!
Really a great world of magic, Author has weaved the magic world perfectly, Its really really awesome. Way to go author.
Nice. TBH I got kinda sad when you decided to rewrite but I'm enjoying this. A lot of characters (before rewrite) weren't utilized to their full potential like Aran, Bella, Those twins that some sort of shadow magic inheritance. Also a lot of information weren't as apparent to the readers like the myrmis because of bad writing. Heck I didn't even know they existed until he met some cobfolk despite the fact that there was an entire war with them. I still miss the slice of life version, but Death, Devotion, Dissonance really did do justice to the wasted potential of the old one. Thanks
I must say, this novel is different. There's a new concept here, a very well-thought plot and magnificent writing. If you like supernatural, mana mage story you should try this one. You might like it. The summary is quite good, and the cover is spectacular. Author has provided with an excellent story which certainly deserves more attention. Great story!
This is a Great Story. The characters have depth. Even Evin's father and the voice seemed to have a white lining about them. The characters are not shown completely black and white. World background is created with great understanding by mentioning history of 'why the things are happening'. The grammar is on point. Best of luck author. It can a gem for people who likes reading stories with mystery as I could find myself wishing to know what gonna happen? what's that voice?
I dont know why this book doesnt have more stones, best written and one of the most interesting stories on webnovel, also It has a very unique plot
i lobe this one. it is realistic and i'm not talking about the fantasy elements obv, but the genuinety of the characters. they're not flat. world building is gr8 too, no info dumps we get to understand the world with the mc. the sentence structures are impeccable, wide vocab that's far from being repetitive. it is obvious that the author is pulling their weight with this novel. definitely recommend
I like the "old veteran" type of of MC. The protagonist is already experienced, sometimes power progression feels a little repetitive so skipping all that 'growing up' character development can make it easier on the readers. But it comes at the cost of the person's innocence. A typical young and naive MC can feel a little stupid at times but we can be immersed in their individual perspective and character developments and understand why a character would make certain kinds of choices afterwards. By literally combining the 2 into the same body I feel happy getting the best of both worlds. Evin utilizing the valuable wisdom that comes with age while also experiencing moments of first time innocence and ignorance is just so adorable.
I would have loved this a lot more if i didnt read the other one first as i had to many verying assumptions coming into this as this jumped from the original being pretty PG family loving to domestic violance,mental Illness and drugs but its still one of the best books on the website so i cant wait for more
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Like a bunch of people, I'm coming from having read Shades of the New World. So far I'm only 11 chapters in, but this already feels more well thought and planned. The new Evin has a much more interesting and dysfunctional backstory, and the few characters introduced so far feel very real and dynamic. The interactions don't feel forced or unnatural either. The world and magic system are being introduced smoothly and more soundly than before, and from the fights and concepts I remember, there is a lot to look forward to. The worldbuilding as a whole just feels more mysterious and the power system much less messy, its great. Shades had a lot of cool ideas, but they were incorporated too quickly. Here from what I've read naked has done an incredible job establishing a strong foundation with plenty of room for future growth in the world and cast. Overall this just feels much more thoughtful, quality, and unique than Shades, which I already enjoyed. If you're looking for a unique dark fantasy, I can't recommend this novel enough, it really has become one of my favorites in a single day. Hopefully the chaps keep coming in hot, I don't wanna catch up ;-;
Good job on the rewrite author-san. Loving both ethe mc and the voice. Pacing is good. Enjoying it very much. Definetly improved a lot and i love how i feel like im finding easter eggs from the og one. Do your best coz youre doing great. [img=recommend]
just added to my library., when I read a new novel especially an Original one, I usually spend time to read up to 5 chapters only then decide whether to continue or not.. well this novel I got so caught up reading it. it's well written and I like the pace or how the story unfolds, since it's only 26 chaps as of now, all I can say is the author did a great job and this novel has a potential to be a great story. hopefully it continues to update and finish this novel... bcoz most of the Original novel I read so far, either went on hiatus or with no ending..
That was so freaking awesome, what in the world did I just read?! The author is amazing at story-telling and character development. You think you figured something but you get hit with a curveball! I didn't get it at first, but be patient as most of the unexplained is explained in due time in a way that makes sense and is easy to comprehend. I enjoyed reading this novel and can't wait for more chapters, t-there's still so much I need to know!
Awesome work! The story is so interestingly engaging right from the first chapter. It's so well-written. The narration is fluid too. This novel showcases great writing. I am hooked! I am so glad I pick it up. I really enjoy reading. All the best, author.
Holy woah!!! Am I not drowning in the love for this book. Absolutely amazing and I love the plot and style of writing Dope, badass, amazing
Bravo! THis is well written and fascinating. A new twist on the old trope, with characters that shine and a world that feels both familair and new. This is one to watch!
let me just say this here that the writing style is really excellent! first chapter really got me hooked and it was an interesting scene at that! as someone new to webnovel i don't have much to say but a big W O W to this novel.
I very much enjoyed the story. I checked out the first version of Death, Devotion and Dissonance and I'm happy to say that this is overall a clear improvement. It feels more fleshed out and personally my biggest factor in the 5 star rating is my personal enjoyment. It's very fun to read and the dialogue seems well thought out. Loved it!
I added the novel in my library! It was an amazing read and very engaging! Unfortuantely, I cannot read them all at one go, but I plan to continue where I had left from the story. I really like the man's actions, dialogue, and personality. It's very unique and mysterious; almost too mysterious but transparent that anyone can relate to. The girl that he met also has a personality with her. Overall, 10/10 descriptions for the characters. The only things that I like to point out are the repeatative words. Although they aren't many that I can hinder readers to their journey, it would be best if the words are unique than its simplest form. One example is the words 'said' , murmured, and others! it will make the story even more interesting that what it is right now! That's all I observed for now! I really like where the story is going! Kudos for the story and the author.
This novel is amazing- it really keeps on the edge of my seat throughout and is very easy to read. I love the cover art- it really makes it stand out against other novels and honestly, it looks professional. This novel is expertly crafted and your attention to detail is outstanding. My only suggestion is that I think your summary needs a bit more clarity and to be more engaging to the reader- that way, I think the novel will draw even more attention towards itself. Overall, I love this novel and I can’t wait to see where it goes in the future!! Keep up the amazing work!! [img=update]
It is an interesting novel, the author had done nice work on the depth of the characters. I hope more chapters bring further charm to the story. Recommended 10 by 10 to all readers who are looking for something fresh to read. Waiting for future chapters by the Author.....
Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version! I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another. Anyhow, let’s get to the review. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Tone Okay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it. Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff. One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers. The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing. Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around. And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories. Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story. Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he. CHARACTERS – MC MC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that? CHARACTERS – Side charas. I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality. It'll probably be okay. Oh yeah, also, Romance~~ WORLD-BUILDING I mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone. MAGIC SYSTEM The fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well. SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUND Some things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices. MISCELLANEOUS STUFF -No harem planned. -There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot. ----- Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3
Spoiler alert: This is a damn fantastic book. I love how the author sets you up with a ton of mystery and questions at the start then artfully lets it unfold around you as you read. Ooh the level of skill gave me shivers! The characters, more particularly their dynamics with each other, are superb. Evin is fantastic, he is witty, opinionated, but equally tormented by his father and burdened by the pressures of society. He has hopes, dreams, and the author does a great job of making believable, if not entirely realistic characters. Such raw emotion in a book is hard to come by, too. I really felt so much for all of them. The world building was equally as good. Although I had a lot of questions at the start, the more I read the more everything pieced itself together, unravelling the mysterys of the world like any good book should. Not once did I lose interest, the story was fast paced, well thought out, and bolstered by some absolutely top quality description. If you cant tell, I really dont have any bad things to say about this book. Perhaps give a little warning about the abusive nature of the father? But honestly, this novel was so compelling, I would recommend it to anyone either way. Author, fantastic work!
I enjoyed the story until around chapter 200. Where the story is essentially about a kid who has a reincarnated soul in his head. They live with each other, fight, make up, etc. The voice in his head teaches him things and casts some spells for him. Either way, the focus is essentially on the kid and his life, while the soul is really pretty much a side character all that time. But around chapter 200 the soul is given the option to kill the kid and take over his body. Which he ends up doing, so what we were led to believe was the supposed MC just gets killed off like that and the soul is now taking over his body and gonna cut ties with people and live differently. I get that the synopsis and first chapter made it seem lile the guy getting reincarnated would be the MC, but he got turned into a soul instead and pretty much made into what I assumed was a permanent side character position. Either way, I'm pretty disappointed with this turn of events, it feels like all that story and character development the kid went through was just thrown away after all that time, and now we get the side character who had like 80% less development as the new MC.
ネタバレを明かす Great story, MC can be whiny and immature at times but he is still a kid. It's an interesting dynamic between MC and Endra. Both characters showing growth alongside with some side characters. Sometimes it felt uncomfortable reading the romance between MC and FMC consider it says their age is 10 but year/month scale is different? Story is already expanding to a mysterious bigger picture, with another 100 or so chapters, it would be worth a binge read.
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This... . . . . a SUPERB and Worth While READ... Review Proper after chapter 12 Writing Quality. The narratives are well-written and zero grammar errors so far. Or if there are some, I'm just engrossed reading the story to notice 😌. Stability of Updates. I see no problem here. The author seems to have stable updates so far. Plus it is already 100 plus chapters perfect for binge reading. Story Development. From the first chapter until the next, everything is flowing smoothly. Although from introducing the world background and such, it didn't feel some info. dumps due to the remarks of Voice lol. Character Design. They are all well-rounded from Evin, to voice and the other charas all have a distinct persona with each other. World Background. Very interesting, with the first grade, Emperor, Empress, and others. I look forward to more. Overall, this book is a great read and greatly recommended. And I must warn you, once you start reading you will not be able to stop anymore and you realize you're already far from the first chap. Great Work! Keep it up, author! All the best for the WSA
Hello, your story is great. Wish you can do good in the WSA competition and that you can drive further in your story. I was thinking, do you have any expertise in writing, and do you know how to put on dialogues in stories? I'm waiting for your response in the comments. Good luck!
This is an amazing book, at 1st i was skeptical because most books with high ratings on webnovel aren't that good but this novel deserves it rating and more. My only regret is that I didn't begin reading this book sooner.
[img=update]What an amazing work!! The cover alone is awesome.. it’s well-written.. I love the way you build the character.. and 11 chapters a week?! You’re my motivation! Lol👏🏻
Amazing Plot.. I loved the concept so much and your writing style is very easy. I could visualize every scenes and I enjoyed what I saw while reading ( well that's the fun part of reading) Good work, Author!!
Really a great world of magic, Author has weaved the magic world perfectly, Its really really awesome. Way to go author.
Nice. TBH I got kinda sad when you decided to rewrite but I'm enjoying this. A lot of characters (before rewrite) weren't utilized to their full potential like Aran, Bella, Those twins that some sort of shadow magic inheritance. Also a lot of information weren't as apparent to the readers like the myrmis because of bad writing. Heck I didn't even know they existed until he met some cobfolk despite the fact that there was an entire war with them. I still miss the slice of life version, but Death, Devotion, Dissonance really did do justice to the wasted potential of the old one. Thanks
I must say, this novel is different. There's a new concept here, a very well-thought plot and magnificent writing. If you like supernatural, mana mage story you should try this one. You might like it. The summary is quite good, and the cover is spectacular. Author has provided with an excellent story which certainly deserves more attention. Great story!
This is a Great Story. The characters have depth. Even Evin's father and the voice seemed to have a white lining about them. The characters are not shown completely black and white. World background is created with great understanding by mentioning history of 'why the things are happening'. The grammar is on point. Best of luck author. It can a gem for people who likes reading stories with mystery as I could find myself wishing to know what gonna happen? what's that voice?
I dont know why this book doesnt have more stones, best written and one of the most interesting stories on webnovel, also It has a very unique plot
i lobe this one. it is realistic and i'm not talking about the fantasy elements obv, but the genuinety of the characters. they're not flat. world building is gr8 too, no info dumps we get to understand the world with the mc. the sentence structures are impeccable, wide vocab that's far from being repetitive. it is obvious that the author is pulling their weight with this novel. definitely recommend
I like the "old veteran" type of of MC. The protagonist is already experienced, sometimes power progression feels a little repetitive so skipping all that 'growing up' character development can make it easier on the readers. But it comes at the cost of the person's innocence. A typical young and naive MC can feel a little stupid at times but we can be immersed in their individual perspective and character developments and understand why a character would make certain kinds of choices afterwards. By literally combining the 2 into the same body I feel happy getting the best of both worlds. Evin utilizing the valuable wisdom that comes with age while also experiencing moments of first time innocence and ignorance is just so adorable.
I would have loved this a lot more if i didnt read the other one first as i had to many verying assumptions coming into this as this jumped from the original being pretty PG family loving to domestic violance,mental Illness and drugs but its still one of the best books on the website so i cant wait for more
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Like a bunch of people, I'm coming from having read Shades of the New World. So far I'm only 11 chapters in, but this already feels more well thought and planned. The new Evin has a much more interesting and dysfunctional backstory, and the few characters introduced so far feel very real and dynamic. The interactions don't feel forced or unnatural either. The world and magic system are being introduced smoothly and more soundly than before, and from the fights and concepts I remember, there is a lot to look forward to. The worldbuilding as a whole just feels more mysterious and the power system much less messy, its great. Shades had a lot of cool ideas, but they were incorporated too quickly. Here from what I've read naked has done an incredible job establishing a strong foundation with plenty of room for future growth in the world and cast. Overall this just feels much more thoughtful, quality, and unique than Shades, which I already enjoyed. If you're looking for a unique dark fantasy, I can't recommend this novel enough, it really has become one of my favorites in a single day. Hopefully the chaps keep coming in hot, I don't wanna catch up ;-;
Good job on the rewrite author-san. Loving both ethe mc and the voice. Pacing is good. Enjoying it very much. Definetly improved a lot and i love how i feel like im finding easter eggs from the og one. Do your best coz youre doing great. [img=recommend]
just added to my library., when I read a new novel especially an Original one, I usually spend time to read up to 5 chapters only then decide whether to continue or not.. well this novel I got so caught up reading it. it's well written and I like the pace or how the story unfolds, since it's only 26 chaps as of now, all I can say is the author did a great job and this novel has a potential to be a great story. hopefully it continues to update and finish this novel... bcoz most of the Original novel I read so far, either went on hiatus or with no ending..
That was so freaking awesome, what in the world did I just read?! The author is amazing at story-telling and character development. You think you figured something but you get hit with a curveball! I didn't get it at first, but be patient as most of the unexplained is explained in due time in a way that makes sense and is easy to comprehend. I enjoyed reading this novel and can't wait for more chapters, t-there's still so much I need to know!
Awesome work! The story is so interestingly engaging right from the first chapter. It's so well-written. The narration is fluid too. This novel showcases great writing. I am hooked! I am so glad I pick it up. I really enjoy reading. All the best, author.
Holy woah!!! Am I not drowning in the love for this book. Absolutely amazing and I love the plot and style of writing Dope, badass, amazing
Bravo! THis is well written and fascinating. A new twist on the old trope, with characters that shine and a world that feels both familair and new. This is one to watch!
let me just say this here that the writing style is really excellent! first chapter really got me hooked and it was an interesting scene at that! as someone new to webnovel i don't have much to say but a big W O W to this novel.
I very much enjoyed the story. I checked out the first version of Death, Devotion and Dissonance and I'm happy to say that this is overall a clear improvement. It feels more fleshed out and personally my biggest factor in the 5 star rating is my personal enjoyment. It's very fun to read and the dialogue seems well thought out. Loved it!
I added the novel in my library! It was an amazing read and very engaging! Unfortuantely, I cannot read them all at one go, but I plan to continue where I had left from the story. I really like the man's actions, dialogue, and personality. It's very unique and mysterious; almost too mysterious but transparent that anyone can relate to. The girl that he met also has a personality with her. Overall, 10/10 descriptions for the characters. The only things that I like to point out are the repeatative words. Although they aren't many that I can hinder readers to their journey, it would be best if the words are unique than its simplest form. One example is the words 'said' , murmured, and others! it will make the story even more interesting that what it is right now! That's all I observed for now! I really like where the story is going! Kudos for the story and the author.
This novel is amazing- it really keeps on the edge of my seat throughout and is very easy to read. I love the cover art- it really makes it stand out against other novels and honestly, it looks professional. This novel is expertly crafted and your attention to detail is outstanding. My only suggestion is that I think your summary needs a bit more clarity and to be more engaging to the reader- that way, I think the novel will draw even more attention towards itself. Overall, I love this novel and I can’t wait to see where it goes in the future!! Keep up the amazing work!! [img=update]
It is an interesting novel, the author had done nice work on the depth of the characters. I hope more chapters bring further charm to the story. Recommended 10 by 10 to all readers who are looking for something fresh to read. Waiting for future chapters by the Author.....
Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version! I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another. Anyhow, let’s get to the review. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Tone Okay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it. Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff. One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers. The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing. Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around. And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic. STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories. Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story. Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he. CHARACTERS – MC MC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that? CHARACTERS – Side charas. I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality. It'll probably be okay. Oh yeah, also, Romance~~ WORLD-BUILDING I mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone. MAGIC SYSTEM The fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well. SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUND Some things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices. MISCELLANEOUS STUFF -No harem planned. -There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot. ----- Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3