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your novel is amazing, it has time travel, it has action, adventure and Mysterys the time travel arcs are very well done, character development is fast and very well written. I don't like it: the time travel arcs are creative but would leave people lost if you didn't pay close attention, in the chapters the world is vast and the magic system is similar to that of Harry Potter
Otome type of novel with a male MC? I dig it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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"How can you say a story is logical? To make your story more logical there are two criteria that you need to meet: Consistency and Coherency. Consistent: Your story must follow its own rules and norms, and it must not contradict itself."