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A novel that tackles a love chance between best friends! The what-ifs between the types of existing love- Looking forward to this book! Love is a beautiful fear that exists between many relationships, I wonder how the characters' love persists in the midst of the pain and melancholy, the struggles and situations in the future- VERY EXCITED!!! ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
First, I wanted to applaud the author for a job well done. The plot is great, * chef's kiss, just felt like it would be so much angst. I have yet to read a chapter that isn't interesting. The plot is great, the synopsis is great the characters are great but there's one thing that is bothering me, the time where the narrator's thoughts transitioned to something else confuses me. I couldn't follow up at times, and there are words that doesn't suit the phrase (I had forgotten already but there are) it's like there is a better word suitable for that but is not used. If this issue is fixed, then it will be great for the readers. Keep up the good worrrkkk a recommended story for y'all.
Oh! Young love~ what an interesting start! The plot is catchy enough. Although there may be a few grammatical errors here and there, it's editable. As for now, the errors doesn't hinder one in reading the story. Hope you can update more~ 🥰💖🥰💖
I think u should update the story in time because u are such good author.u r making us curious about the story .please update the story as soon as possible.. [img=update][img=recommend]
I remembered my childhood huhuhu I really can't stop smiling when I read the first chapter I can relate to the kid when I was a child😂 after all this story was nice and well written. Keep it up the good work!
Chance! Held my wrist too! 😭😭😭 Imma have you in my lifeee.. The story is indeed nice and i wanna read more of this!! Author I'll be waiting for the nxt update of your chapter !! ❤️
Interesting story you got there, author. 🤔🤔🤔 But when will you update your story? It's been one month yet no update... you should make this again.
Another story that I'll love in the long run although it only has few chapters. The grammatical errors are editable but the content is there. So I love this.
It's not for me to review my own novel but I just want to give some points about this novel. This is the first time I made novel in 3rd POV so please bear with me. If there's some mistakes, don't hesitate to leave a comment and tell me so I could edit it right away. Also, it's not the continuation of my other novel, 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' but there some scenes that will mentioned that related to my MC in 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' Thank you for passing by and add my novel to your library! Giving powerstone might support me! I love you all!
A novel that tackles a love chance between best friends! The what-ifs between the types of existing love- Looking forward to this book! Love is a beautiful fear that exists between many relationships, I wonder how the characters' love persists in the midst of the pain and melancholy, the struggles and situations in the future- VERY EXCITED!!! ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
First, I wanted to applaud the author for a job well done. The plot is great, * chef's kiss, just felt like it would be so much angst. I have yet to read a chapter that isn't interesting. The plot is great, the synopsis is great the characters are great but there's one thing that is bothering me, the time where the narrator's thoughts transitioned to something else confuses me. I couldn't follow up at times, and there are words that doesn't suit the phrase (I had forgotten already but there are) it's like there is a better word suitable for that but is not used. If this issue is fixed, then it will be great for the readers. Keep up the good worrrkkk a recommended story for y'all.
Oh! Young love~ what an interesting start! The plot is catchy enough. Although there may be a few grammatical errors here and there, it's editable. As for now, the errors doesn't hinder one in reading the story. Hope you can update more~ 🥰💖🥰💖
I think u should update the story in time because u are such good author.u r making us curious about the story .please update the story as soon as possible.. [img=update][img=recommend]
I remembered my childhood huhuhu I really can't stop smiling when I read the first chapter I can relate to the kid when I was a child😂 after all this story was nice and well written. Keep it up the good work!
Chance! Held my wrist too! 😭😭😭 Imma have you in my lifeee.. The story is indeed nice and i wanna read more of this!! Author I'll be waiting for the nxt update of your chapter !! ❤️
Interesting story you got there, author. 🤔🤔🤔 But when will you update your story? It's been one month yet no update... you should make this again.
Another story that I'll love in the long run although it only has few chapters. The grammatical errors are editable but the content is there. So I love this.
It's not for me to review my own novel but I just want to give some points about this novel. This is the first time I made novel in 3rd POV so please bear with me. If there's some mistakes, don't hesitate to leave a comment and tell me so I could edit it right away. Also, it's not the continuation of my other novel, 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' but there some scenes that will mentioned that related to my MC in 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' Thank you for passing by and add my novel to your library! Giving powerstone might support me! I love you all!