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I really like this story and I want to see it finished . I'm just wondering when are you going to update again? So can you please update or at least let us know when you plan on updating next?
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I want you to continue this novel, this story in continuing nicely! despite being a bit fast developing, it still gives me great pleasure reading it! i hope you continue this web novel! Try to keep updates atleast once a day to make sure fans can stay frequenting the novel, and this might end up high on the list of my favorite novels so far! Keep up the good work.
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I really liked it And the fact that a random dude is so smart is pretty cool Plus his calculations on what animal to level up is just crazy.... if it was me i wouldnt do so good
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this is a good novel that has room for improvement just as any others do I hope that they author continues this novel while having it be ever changing
.................. E interessante espero que continue.........................................................
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there are interesting elements to this book. hoping to see more of it. from what I have read this could be one of my new favorites to read. needs more chapter stability.
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This series has an MC who spontaneous has a monster-rearing system in a fantasy world. Unfortunately, there is no imagery, so we don't know much about what this world looks like. There is no background either. The MC randomly transmigrates over to this world, but we don't know anything about his past or personality. This is also true for his current body. He lives for a month raising critters without working or buying food or anything, so I guess he's rich? He acts like he's poor, but then how would he be able to go without working and still get to eat so much? It just doesn't make sense. The MC doesn't have a personality. He's excited to use his system without questioning where it came from, and that's all. He's basically a slave to its development. He's one of the flattest MCs I've come across in a long while. How can there be an entire book series based on him? Like some other reviewers said, the MC isn't very smart. He just randomly raises all sorts of things without telling them to avoid humans to stay out of trouble. Although he could have a portable insect army for surveillance, he does not. He uses birds, but they haven't proven their worth in the narrative. Oddly enough, no logistics for this self-made army of his are mentioned. Nothing about their diets or need for dens and nests. Not a word about their reproduction and breeding. Why not? Of course, none of these beasts have any personalities either, so it's not like they're pets. They're mostly just system slaves like the MC so far. Things like character design and world background are practically nonexistent in this story. The story development is terrible. The translation quality is pretty decent, but it looks like bees have gotten mixed up with wasps as well as maybe thunder and lightning. After reading the first twenty chapters, I just can't recommend this series. It simply has nothing going for it. Although it could have had potential, poor writing killed it from the first chapter.
I hope it doesn't contain romance in this book. I loved this General King White Wolf! He is extremely intelligent and strategic! Well, I feel like there's something missing in the plot i'm not getting... That's weird. I think in the plot, you missed something.
The beginning of showing an Isekai-style novel with a system is a bit of a cliché, but the narration of the story, as well as the introduction of the characters, was very captivating, and with this great translation, it left that desire to read a little more of the story.
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It's an okay story. However, there is no tension. Rather than struggling and earning rewards, the protagonist only grinds, which isn't very interesting to read; even the narrative agrees, and skips over it and just says he earns 600 points overnight. In addition, the system is very OP. The animal the protagonist tames obtain special/magic-esque abilities almost immediately. It is disappointing because the protagonist does not use the system very effectively. As mentioned before, earning points is very easy if a bit tedious and the protagonist grinds to get enough points to easily level up his pets. While I can understand wanting to carefully choose which one he wants, the system makes it so that there's no need to be careful. He can easily obtain points, and (so far) he has no limit to how many pets he can have. Likewise, he doesn't have to take the time to tame them as they are immediately 100% docile to him. Lastly, there is no time limit. He doesn't have an urgent reason to rush to gain power. Of course, the world is very dangerous, but his village seems relatively safe. If there is danger just being in the village as a citizen, there is no mention of it, so it seems safe to assume he isn't in immediate danger. He could've just tamed as many insects and small animals as he could and gradually form an army of lethal animals.
GOOD NOVEL WITH SOME FUN ELEMENTS.😋 . ..............,....................................,...............................,...............................
are you not yet done with your break i haven checking out this novel for several months now why are you planning to drop it please don't this novel it DOPE
I really like this story and I want to see it finished . I'm just wondering when are you going to update again? So can you please update or at least let us know when you plan on updating next?
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I want you to continue this novel, this story in continuing nicely! despite being a bit fast developing, it still gives me great pleasure reading it! i hope you continue this web novel! Try to keep updates atleast once a day to make sure fans can stay frequenting the novel, and this might end up high on the list of my favorite novels so far! Keep up the good work.
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I am a simple man, I see a pet novel, I upvote.......................... .................................. .......... .......... ..................
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Worth taking the time to read .😃. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me.
I really liked it And the fact that a random dude is so smart is pretty cool Plus his calculations on what animal to level up is just crazy.... if it was me i wouldnt do so good
ik u他就犯困犯困咖啡咖啡咖啡i发i日加入今天就痛苦痛苦痛苦体贴开发开放ii反恐防范今天集体经济疯狂疯狂疯狂今天疯狂疯狂疯狂推荐推荐今天今天今天今天他今天积分积分i从公共平台平台进入金融开放i fit款推荐推荐放你房间分阔腿裤天天就痛苦痛苦看看疯狂了咯额今天他呢几积弱难返快让开让开客人痛苦放假放假今天发i富太太推荐推荐几款热咖啡i疯狂i人口日日记体日方i提提i痛苦推荐推荐替他今天积分能否能否能否处处女那份难得没课可怜了譬如平台kjhg……一起来看下个赛季如图
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Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me. Exp like me.
this is a good novel that has room for improvement just as any others do I hope that they author continues this novel while having it be ever changing
.................. E interessante espero que continue.........................................................
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there are interesting elements to this book. hoping to see more of it. from what I have read this could be one of my new favorites to read. needs more chapter stability.
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This series has an MC who spontaneous has a monster-rearing system in a fantasy world. Unfortunately, there is no imagery, so we don't know much about what this world looks like. There is no background either. The MC randomly transmigrates over to this world, but we don't know anything about his past or personality. This is also true for his current body. He lives for a month raising critters without working or buying food or anything, so I guess he's rich? He acts like he's poor, but then how would he be able to go without working and still get to eat so much? It just doesn't make sense. The MC doesn't have a personality. He's excited to use his system without questioning where it came from, and that's all. He's basically a slave to its development. He's one of the flattest MCs I've come across in a long while. How can there be an entire book series based on him? Like some other reviewers said, the MC isn't very smart. He just randomly raises all sorts of things without telling them to avoid humans to stay out of trouble. Although he could have a portable insect army for surveillance, he does not. He uses birds, but they haven't proven their worth in the narrative. Oddly enough, no logistics for this self-made army of his are mentioned. Nothing about their diets or need for dens and nests. Not a word about their reproduction and breeding. Why not? Of course, none of these beasts have any personalities either, so it's not like they're pets. They're mostly just system slaves like the MC so far. Things like character design and world background are practically nonexistent in this story. The story development is terrible. The translation quality is pretty decent, but it looks like bees have gotten mixed up with wasps as well as maybe thunder and lightning. After reading the first twenty chapters, I just can't recommend this series. It simply has nothing going for it. Although it could have had potential, poor writing killed it from the first chapter.
I hope it doesn't contain romance in this book. I loved this General King White Wolf! He is extremely intelligent and strategic! Well, I feel like there's something missing in the plot i'm not getting... That's weird. I think in the plot, you missed something.
The beginning of showing an Isekai-style novel with a system is a bit of a cliché, but the narration of the story, as well as the introduction of the characters, was very captivating, and with this great translation, it left that desire to read a little more of the story.
ネタバレを明かす It's an okay story. However, there is no tension. Rather than struggling and earning rewards, the protagonist only grinds, which isn't very interesting to read; even the narrative agrees, and skips over it and just says he earns 600 points overnight. In addition, the system is very OP. The animal the protagonist tames obtain special/magic-esque abilities almost immediately. It is disappointing because the protagonist does not use the system very effectively. As mentioned before, earning points is very easy if a bit tedious and the protagonist grinds to get enough points to easily level up his pets. While I can understand wanting to carefully choose which one he wants, the system makes it so that there's no need to be careful. He can easily obtain points, and (so far) he has no limit to how many pets he can have. Likewise, he doesn't have to take the time to tame them as they are immediately 100% docile to him. Lastly, there is no time limit. He doesn't have an urgent reason to rush to gain power. Of course, the world is very dangerous, but his village seems relatively safe. If there is danger just being in the village as a citizen, there is no mention of it, so it seems safe to assume he isn't in immediate danger. He could've just tamed as many insects and small animals as he could and gradually form an army of lethal animals.
GOOD NOVEL WITH SOME FUN ELEMENTS.😋 . ..............,....................................,...............................,...............................
are you not yet done with your break i haven checking out this novel for several months now why are you planning to drop it please don't this novel it DOPE