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Galaxy Duel System

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作者: Andrew_Oak

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Humanity is on the hard way into the Alliance of the Sentient Races of the Galaxy.
Lee Long takes the System and the special skill of the Duelist.
The development of magic, technology, and Human civilization depends on his success.
GameLit Novel in game-like words of any game and System genre. But doesn't need to heavily focus on visual statistics. I like to describe adventures with intelligent cats and space elves, orcs, and other fantastic sentient races. The System is important, and it serves as the ultimate support for Lee Long's development. But I don't overload the book with descriptions of game statistics.
Chapter 75 begins part of the book in the genre of description of fights and adventures in the Game Locations with great use of game statistics and receiving artifacts and other useful trophies.
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    itslikeametaphor

    What a fun book! The story development is great and the characters are also well formed. I like how cute their banter is 😂 It's very amusing. Great writing! I recommend reading this book!

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    BlindBandit

    The premise of the story is good, worldbuilding is fantastic, it got me hooked up too, Lee long and Hannah Muller's interactions are funny with their constant bickering, keep up the good work author! you're doing a fantastic job.

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    Orc27354

    Fast start+ Clear development+ Cool system+ Space orcs - dude write about orcs! space orcs rule the galaxy. The story is cool. don't drop it.

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    Grant_L
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    I like the story development so far and how unique the world is around the main character. Thanks for making such a cool story! 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

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    YawningBrain

    This is a good system novel, author, really great world background and character design. I feel that you put great thought into the world building and the descriptions, and I, as a reader, feel grateful for that. Love the funny dialogues and fights with Hannah. I want to read more of that. The ML has a strong personality and I like how cool he voices his thoughts. Definitely a great Job, author!😊

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    gaijsnsn

    not good at doing reviews but here we go. really nice story. the author is good at writing fighting scenes and I love how someone else loves the galaxies as much as me! this is really nice author, keep it up!

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    Maryixxx

    Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.

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    meixiaolian

    Reading this novel equals to watching a show on Netflix. Author did a great job for hooking me on the first chapter, I can hear and imagine the character named Lee. This is awesome. love the stats too! This type of novel should be on Netflix.

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    Mineva
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    A fun story whose premise reminds me of the great anime of the 90s like Starship Girl Yohko Yamamoto but with the flair and tropes of the 2010s! An excellent and fresh novel! I look forward to more.

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    Bunny_Junnie

    Cool idea! I have never though of it like that! The characters are developing so finely and I can read it for all day since I like the story of galaxy.

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    Easy_Tiger

    Really enjoying this one. The author has a fantastic imagination and this really comes through in his world building. Love the futuristic fictional world he has painted here. Really brings everything alive, like watching a well-done sci-fi series. The protagonist is well-developed and you really come to care for him, and the supporting cast all seem colorful and unique, further adding to the authenticity of this work. Finally, the fight scenes are really well done and had me on the edge of my seat. This is certainly a series I will follow. Already added it to my library. Very enjoyable.

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    Author_Enigwe

    This is a novel I will term as amazing and on point. The characterization is adequate and the suspense attracts more readers. I must say I'm impatient to read more. thumps up author.[img=coins]

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    AmateurAuthor

    Very interesting galactic novel. Good beginning story and solid character building. I also like how the story develops and was intrigued by the novel's plot while I was reading it. Definitely, adding it to my collection!

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    Mel_Aniv

    The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, 😂 I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️ in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️

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    Dani6
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    The world is built from the get go, sending us straight into the action. The unique characters and strange habitat pulling us along. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

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    Nr_Yet1208

    The concepts are good (Meaning, I liked it). First of all, I was kind of lost in the first half. The second half made more sense. At times it got a little boring, especially the info dump part of part one. but as I said, the concepts are good and I like cats. ( I have five grown-ass cats in my house.) I wish you good luck ahead.

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    saygon

    The system in space is great. blasters and lasers, elves and cats. nice set of all sorts of tricks.

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    schumelcka

    There are sensible cats and elves. human colonists want independence. With each new hero of a new race new perspectives can be discovered. game elements are normal. but they are few. The world is described in detail and cool.

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    Dan_Crow_2033

    Naruto Skywalker continues his space adventures. more and more. give it to mе

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    twistedrose

    I like the MC. this boy is capable of quick unexpected actions that do not involve rationality. it's nice to read the description of the world. the endless story of the set experience is boring to me. The playful element is a good support for real action. But it's nice for me to read about all sorts of unusual places. And I love those ferin.

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