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The translation feels super lazy, there are a ton of inconsistencies, especially the names of sects or moves, in one sentence, the name of a sect would be Paradise Palace, the immediate next sentence, they would change the name to Elysium Palace. This is not the only example, as this would happen all the time and is super immersion breaking. To be honest, I don't even mind the characters and the world being one dimensional as that is the case for 80% of the translated novels nowadays, but I can't even continue to read this due to having to constantly try to figure out what the translations are saying.
It's getting worse .. .. I stop reading this ! Until ch100+ .. another good story turning into Waste 🥺🥺 .. ........ .... .... ..... ..... ...... ... ....... ..... ..... .... ... .... ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...
There are many haters with 💩 for brains. If they have so many negative comments, why dont they just stop reading eastern and try western stories that hold no innovation? Anyway.. The MC is not overly handsome but his cultivation augments it, he is a sword cultivator with a master-student system. Many common elements can be found, read without scrutinizing eyes and you might enjoy yourselves. Con: SimpleMTL
this translation is utter garbage..... name of MC often changing, gender of MC often changing too from him to her from he to she, and not to mention the chapter. even if it is MTL at least give an effort to edit it. not recomended to spend to unlock the chapter..
Just a machine translation you will get mad after reading it. It will be good if it gets a better translation. Same cultivation levels are called in different names in different chapters, even the names of the same characters are different.
The concept was not bad. It was actually pretty enjoyable. But the translation and wording is all over the place. Some chapters have really bad grammar usage. Power system was not properly introduced and defined properly. Cliche and boring plot. The words of the characters are basically the same. World background is very lacking in details too. All in all, it's okay to read but don't expect to enjoy the novel. The quality of the novel is below average but there aren't really many novels of this type so it's a bit acceptable
Translation quality is mtl level like so many novels recently. The storyline is stupid, the author takes too many detours with plot and forget threats he set up. Homestly, i woundnt read this even for free. There are honestly better novels with the same idea, just better execution. Like that one with the junior sisters.
Arrogant mc... 🤠🤒😿🤠👹😼😼🙀😷🤠😸👹😸😿😿👇🙌🏻👈👐🏽😿🤟😿👆😿👆😼👆😿✋🏻👐🏽👇🙌🏻😿😼🤚🏻😼✋🏻🤚🏻🙌🏻😿😿🤚🏻🙌🏻🤚🏻👐🏽🤚🏻👇👐🏽
it is not bad for machine translation. the story is not fast paced, the MC will level up progressively. MC is handsome, even his disciples like him
The story started okay. It was nothing special but it was enjoyable . The problem is the last 20-30 chapters are unreable . Its random glibberish and i would bet its raw MTL. I dont mind paying but not for that garbage.
Rating only 2.2 after reading 110 chapters. Reasons: - Insane level of grammatical mistakes. - Too much fast pace of story. - No cohortion in many places. - Whenever the situation changes, the reward also chages. (No stability).
The typical type of disciple accepting system. The more the mc gets disciples and the more successful his disciple is the more he will be awarded. He'll be awarded techniques, weapon, or pills but most of the time its a realm increase of his current cultivation base.
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Brother author please keep the realm Straight it so confusing golden elixir the law enForcement then again divinity then law enforcement and lae enforcement realm in 20s trash y waste such time explaining The protagonist is a genius
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I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
It is quite nice disciple training system novel. The character of MC is also nice cuz' he always protects his disciples from harm. Even when Bai weiwei was in trial tower, he rushed to save her but didn't do it recklessly. MC is godly calm.
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The thing is the book is vergood abd pleadong to fhe eue to read dnd to Imagine wow love thus airhor keep jr up love it so much eos wow uhmnnnnn
The book Is well written and the work is Good with master finishing. The stability and the updating of book I can't comment on it as the work is not realsed
IT'S GOOD, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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My disappointment is immeasurable and my day has been ruined. Why tf they chose to translate this trash novel? ...............................
o hope this one pick-up -------------------------- ±±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I didn't give the chapter update any stars because I don't know how often they are released. But, overall, I believe that the novel is very nice. There are very few such novels and I would like for everyone to try this. P.S. Hope they would release the new chapters fastly.
Any master-disciple romance? QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQOQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQWWQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
Boa história. desenvolvimento ritmado.otima escrita .personagens interessantes.kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkķ.trama enriquecedorkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
machine trabslation after chapter 60, cultivation level , place name, char name, gender all messed up. too bad it was good plot, too many plot line left unanswered, all jump plot
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Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
The translation feels super lazy, there are a ton of inconsistencies, especially the names of sects or moves, in one sentence, the name of a sect would be Paradise Palace, the immediate next sentence, they would change the name to Elysium Palace. This is not the only example, as this would happen all the time and is super immersion breaking. To be honest, I don't even mind the characters and the world being one dimensional as that is the case for 80% of the translated novels nowadays, but I can't even continue to read this due to having to constantly try to figure out what the translations are saying.
It's getting worse .. .. I stop reading this ! Until ch100+ .. another good story turning into Waste 🥺🥺 .. ........ .... .... ..... ..... ...... ... ....... ..... ..... .... ... .... ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...
There are many haters with 💩 for brains. If they have so many negative comments, why dont they just stop reading eastern and try western stories that hold no innovation? Anyway.. The MC is not overly handsome but his cultivation augments it, he is a sword cultivator with a master-student system. Many common elements can be found, read without scrutinizing eyes and you might enjoy yourselves. Con: SimpleMTL
this translation is utter garbage..... name of MC often changing, gender of MC often changing too from him to her from he to she, and not to mention the chapter. even if it is MTL at least give an effort to edit it. not recomended to spend to unlock the chapter..
Just a machine translation you will get mad after reading it. It will be good if it gets a better translation. Same cultivation levels are called in different names in different chapters, even the names of the same characters are different.
The concept was not bad. It was actually pretty enjoyable. But the translation and wording is all over the place. Some chapters have really bad grammar usage. Power system was not properly introduced and defined properly. Cliche and boring plot. The words of the characters are basically the same. World background is very lacking in details too. All in all, it's okay to read but don't expect to enjoy the novel. The quality of the novel is below average but there aren't really many novels of this type so it's a bit acceptable
Translation quality is mtl level like so many novels recently. The storyline is stupid, the author takes too many detours with plot and forget threats he set up. Homestly, i woundnt read this even for free. There are honestly better novels with the same idea, just better execution. Like that one with the junior sisters.
Arrogant mc... 🤠🤒😿🤠👹😼😼🙀😷🤠😸👹😸😿😿👇🙌🏻👈👐🏽😿🤟😿👆😿👆😼👆😿✋🏻👐🏽👇🙌🏻😿😼🤚🏻😼✋🏻🤚🏻🙌🏻😿😿🤚🏻🙌🏻🤚🏻👐🏽🤚🏻👇👐🏽
it is not bad for machine translation. the story is not fast paced, the MC will level up progressively. MC is handsome, even his disciples like him
The story started okay. It was nothing special but it was enjoyable . The problem is the last 20-30 chapters are unreable . Its random glibberish and i would bet its raw MTL. I dont mind paying but not for that garbage.
Rating only 2.2 after reading 110 chapters. Reasons: - Insane level of grammatical mistakes. - Too much fast pace of story. - No cohortion in many places. - Whenever the situation changes, the reward also chages. (No stability).
The typical type of disciple accepting system. The more the mc gets disciples and the more successful his disciple is the more he will be awarded. He'll be awarded techniques, weapon, or pills but most of the time its a realm increase of his current cultivation base.
HehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheheheheehhehehehehheheHehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheheheheehhehehehehheheHehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheheheheehhehehehehhehe
Brother author please keep the realm Straight it so confusing golden elixir the law enForcement then again divinity then law enforcement and lae enforcement realm in 20s trash y waste such time explaining The protagonist is a genius
Hehehehhehehehehehehheehhehehhehehehhehehehhehehehhehehehehehheehheheheehheehhhhhhehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheheehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehh
I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
It is quite nice disciple training system novel. The character of MC is also nice cuz' he always protects his disciples from harm. Even when Bai weiwei was in trial tower, he rushed to save her but didn't do it recklessly. MC is godly calm.
ネタバレを明かす The thing is the book is vergood abd pleadong to fhe eue to read dnd to Imagine wow love thus airhor keep jr up love it so much eos wow uhmnnnnn
The book Is well written and the work is Good with master finishing. The stability and the updating of book I can't comment on it as the work is not realsed
IT'S GOOD, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
not bad but need more depth usjuddjdjdjdjdhdhuddududuuddu isjsjsududududududududududhhddhdhhddhdu dddddsjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd
My disappointment is immeasurable and my day has been ruined. Why tf they chose to translate this trash novel? ...............................
o hope this one pick-up -------------------------- ±±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I didn't give the chapter update any stars because I don't know how often they are released. But, overall, I believe that the novel is very nice. There are very few such novels and I would like for everyone to try this. P.S. Hope they would release the new chapters fastly.
Any master-disciple romance? QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQOQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQWWQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
Boa história. desenvolvimento ritmado.otima escrita .personagens interessantes.kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkķ.trama enriquecedorkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
machine trabslation after chapter 60, cultivation level , place name, char name, gender all messed up. too bad it was good plot, too many plot line left unanswered, all jump plot