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dont lose the spirit in writing bruh,, hope you don't drop this one in short time.. Let's ride this boat together, cheers.......................
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жду новые главы.......................................................................................................................................
dont lose the spirit in writing bruh,, hope you don't drop this one in short time.. Let's ride this boat together, cheers.......................
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Shameless author here!!! HAHAHA This is my first fanfic so pls point out my mistakes and give me tips for better writing thank you!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAH
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