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Tyler_2079

As much as I wanted to like it because I felt the writing was pretty good I couldn’t get over how unlikeable and somewhat pathetic the MC was. I’m assuming there is some character development later in the story but I just couldn’t keep reading. But the concept of the system and abilities seemed intriguing. If you have more patience than I do I’d say give this book a chance because the writing quality and general concept of the book seem really good.

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suihsuih

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Arion_Sturmklinge

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Melody_oo

Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com  (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

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Wesley_Grung_8822

Awesome story can't wait for more. Enjoyable progression with power, relationships and plot. Great sexy scene and action packed fights. Hope to find out what's the deal with tge totems soon.

3yr
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Alocusa
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Really want more chapters faster but i'll take the hit if it would lower the quality of writing. fantastic series that I hope is around for a long time.

3yr
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SalsitaHabanera2k

This novel is a gem, although I had a few problems with the scenes where the monsters / bandits raped the women, but in the end I put it aside and without a doubt enjoy reading, follow the author and I hope you do not drop this novel

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Will_Caruso

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elusivell

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $0 advance by joining the contest.

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elusivell

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theyarnuz

Author here... I hope my writing quality will improve over time. Some info dumps may happen every here and now. World building and Character infos will follow the first volume in auxiliary chapters.

3yr
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Nafsu_geass28

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Tyler_2079

As much as I wanted to like it because I felt the writing was pretty good I couldn’t get over how unlikeable and somewhat pathetic the MC was. I’m assuming there is some character development later in the story but I just couldn’t keep reading. But the concept of the system and abilities seemed intriguing. If you have more patience than I do I’d say give this book a chance because the writing quality and general concept of the book seem really good.

1yr
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suihsuih

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2yr
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Arion_Sturmklinge

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2yr
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Melody_oo

Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com  (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

2yr
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Wesley_Grung_8822

Awesome story can't wait for more. Enjoyable progression with power, relationships and plot. Great sexy scene and action packed fights. Hope to find out what's the deal with tge totems soon.

3yr
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Alocusa
LV 15 Badge

Really want more chapters faster but i'll take the hit if it would lower the quality of writing. fantastic series that I hope is around for a long time.

3yr
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SalsitaHabanera2k

This novel is a gem, although I had a few problems with the scenes where the monsters / bandits raped the women, but in the end I put it aside and without a doubt enjoy reading, follow the author and I hope you do not drop this novel

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3yr
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Will_Caruso

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3yr
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elusivell

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $0 advance by joining the contest.

3yr
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elusivell

$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact kerawood.review@gmail.com

3yr
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theyarnuz

Author here... I hope my writing quality will improve over time. Some info dumps may happen every here and now. World building and Character infos will follow the first volume in auxiliary chapters.

3yr
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Nafsu_geass28

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