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章 162: Quest completion

"Wh-what do you mean...?"

Mika tried to act clueless but it was far too late for that.

Everyone knew that amongst the intelligent races, only certain types of skills would produce a light other than white.

Multicolored skill light was common for monsters, but when it came to intelligent races, only the people well versed with sin exclusive skills could show off that quality.

Each sin-based skill had its own color.

Pride was purple or violet.

Lust was blue.

Envy was green.

Gluttony was orange.

Greed was yellow.

Sloth was light blue or aquamarine.

Wrath was red.

Well, honestly, saying that only people well versed in the sin-based skills would have the light of their skill turn the specific colors was already a generous generalization.

The truth was most of the time only the avatars of sin and their definite, system-assigned successors, would do that.

And it wasn't something that they could hide.


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Hello dear readers.

As always, thank you very much for enjoying the story of the Villainess and I, her Zombie.

Now, a question.

How would you feel if I added some auxiliary chapters (free ones) that would be set between chapters 002 and 003?

I am still very inexperienced and all the comments made me realize that I didn't do a good job with setting up the characters' motives and reasons at the beginning of the story.

For example, some new readers have a hard with Zombie being too easily accepting of Cranberry as his master after his change into a monster.

What if I added a chapter that would show the system messing up with his head right after he became Cranberry's servant and show how Zombie's thougths deterorate from the normal human ones, like anger, into the indifference and loyalty of a monster - an eternal servant- ?

It wouldn't change the overall story but maybe with it, the new readers wouldn't have such a hard time.

Do you think I should try adding things like that or leave it as it is?

(It will not mess up with the normal daily uploads - I have a nice stockpile of chapters ready to be published)

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