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Excelente historia! Me encanta! ahora solo espero que el autor actualice pronto esta historia porfavor!!! Se convirtió en mi favorita!!! Y quiero saber como continuará, autor puedes actualizarla porfavor?
all he needs to do is be stable with updates as i have waited over a month for a chapter and its great this can be a really good fanfic that can be one of the best fanfics on Naruto in the warring states period. Keep up the good work
please make more chapters please😭😭🙏 (for word count)単語数用단어 djfjsntncjsjekfjcjskwkfjvjsjeekfjdnejrgjekekgjfjwktjgiejejtij(for word count)
La novela es bastante buena y muy recomendable, lamentablemente para mi, un protagonista amante de las peleas sin sentido no es mi taza de té, pero si a ti te gustan esa clase de protagonista, disfrútalo.
Please make more chapters and yeah this is just for word countПожалуйста, сделайте больше глав Por favor, haga más capítulosSi prega di creare più capitoli
Это просто охуенно. Уберменш во мне радуется. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I really love this and please dont drop this pretty please and also please get hinata, ino,tenten, and temari Word count:sjfjsjsjdjsexsexsexsexsexsesexsexsecsexsexsexsesxsxecscexssexsecsexsexsexsexsexssxscexscexsexsexsexsexsexsecsxescecscecscexsxexsxexsxexsxexsxesex
It is pretty much exactly what it is supposed to be and the main characters behavior echoes Yujiro’s. The only negative I would say is the lack of development of characters other than the MC. However, maybe they will develop the MCs son. On a side note, I feel really bad for Mito, however, I suppose the way she is treated is consistent with Yujiro type behavior…
Hopefully you didn't drop This fic I'm really enjoying it a lot................,..............,.............................................
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A solid concept wasted on a boring villain with none of Yujiro's compelling qualities. If puppy kicking villains who steal candy from babies are your deal this is for you. If you ever wondered why the bigger guys doesn't just eat the smaller guys in his way you may enjoy this novel. Solid execution of a concept I personally find distasteful.
Gostei muito. Começar a história no período dos reinos combatentes, dá mais espaço para desenvolvimentos, assim o autor tem mais liberdade para adicionar elementos desconhecidos num texto. A personalidade games e combina perfeitamente com a linhagem que adquiriu. Só acho que ele não perderia muito tempo confiando só numa mulher para reproduzir o clã , com certeza ele já teria encontrado outras mulheres fortes para produzir um membro da nova linhagem. História muito boa interessante parabéns.
Bruh at first I thought The is was gonna be bad but after first chapter it’s Epic!!!
Hey the book so far has been fire!! I hope this book doesn't drop definitely my favorite book in a while and I hope it won't be a long wait till the the next update!!
Giga chad, ultra chad, mega chad, omega chad mc, he has the hanma bloodline so he’s extra super strong with giga chad strength and yeah, it’s pretty cool althought it only have like 26 chapters, it does seem pretty cool The mc is 6’7 currently so yeah he is extra tall with extra big muscles. he also has a son named Baki so that’s pretty cool although the kid is still almost 1 years old. He ntr’s Hashirama too lol, my guy Hashirama is a walking L no cap 💀
ネタバレを明かす mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,masmas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas
INIIIII BARU NAMANYA MC JAHAT!!!!!, ceritanya sesuai MC hanya melihat melalui kekuatan sesuai dengan dunia yang sedang kacau dan banyak perang.
Its a great novel i loved it since im a bug fan of baki and naruto so if i were you i would read it and honestly this book is hreat for people who like ruthless mc’s and not a dumb mc so yea definitely a good read
This story is masterpiece in making. the start might have been unstable but the after chapter 15 it's gets so much better. the mc is a battle manic with Hanma bloodline that can evolve through battle and slaughter. he can take chakra of his descendant's through his bloodline and strength his own bloodline. mc is not a hero he is just battle manic who lives for battle. story has so much potential just waiting to be unleashed. no grammatical errors , no wannabe hero mc and a realistic mc. what else do you need in a story. now Don't waste time reading my comment and go read the story.
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where were you man, I can honestly say this was the best naruto/Baki fanfic ever, everything is 5 stars except the updates I have yet to see the stability of update since I just started it
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Excelente historia! Me encanta! ahora solo espero que el autor actualice pronto esta historia porfavor!!! Se convirtió en mi favorita!!! Y quiero saber como continuará, autor puedes actualizarla porfavor?
all he needs to do is be stable with updates as i have waited over a month for a chapter and its great this can be a really good fanfic that can be one of the best fanfics on Naruto in the warring states period. Keep up the good work
please make more chapters please😭😭🙏 (for word count)単語数用단어 djfjsntncjsjekfjcjskwkfjvjsjeekfjdnejrgjekekgjfjwktjgiejejtij(for word count)
La novela es bastante buena y muy recomendable, lamentablemente para mi, un protagonista amante de las peleas sin sentido no es mi taza de té, pero si a ti te gustan esa clase de protagonista, disfrútalo.
Please make more chapters and yeah this is just for word countПожалуйста, сделайте больше глав Por favor, haga más capítulosSi prega di creare più capitoli
Это просто охуенно. Уберменш во мне радуется. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I really love this and please dont drop this pretty please and also please get hinata, ino,tenten, and temari Word count:sjfjsjsjdjsexsexsexsexsexsesexsexsecsexsexsexsesxsxecscexssexsecsexsexsexsexsexssxscexscexsexsexsexsexsexsecsxescecscecscexsxexsxexsxexsxexsxesex
It is pretty much exactly what it is supposed to be and the main characters behavior echoes Yujiro’s. The only negative I would say is the lack of development of characters other than the MC. However, maybe they will develop the MCs son. On a side note, I feel really bad for Mito, however, I suppose the way she is treated is consistent with Yujiro type behavior…
Hopefully you didn't drop This fic I'm really enjoying it a lot................,..............,.............................................
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A solid concept wasted on a boring villain with none of Yujiro's compelling qualities. If puppy kicking villains who steal candy from babies are your deal this is for you. If you ever wondered why the bigger guys doesn't just eat the smaller guys in his way you may enjoy this novel. Solid execution of a concept I personally find distasteful.
Gostei muito. Começar a história no período dos reinos combatentes, dá mais espaço para desenvolvimentos, assim o autor tem mais liberdade para adicionar elementos desconhecidos num texto. A personalidade games e combina perfeitamente com a linhagem que adquiriu. Só acho que ele não perderia muito tempo confiando só numa mulher para reproduzir o clã , com certeza ele já teria encontrado outras mulheres fortes para produzir um membro da nova linhagem. História muito boa interessante parabéns.
Bruh at first I thought The is was gonna be bad but after first chapter it’s Epic!!!
Hey the book so far has been fire!! I hope this book doesn't drop definitely my favorite book in a while and I hope it won't be a long wait till the the next update!!
Giga chad, ultra chad, mega chad, omega chad mc, he has the hanma bloodline so he’s extra super strong with giga chad strength and yeah, it’s pretty cool althought it only have like 26 chapters, it does seem pretty cool The mc is 6’7 currently so yeah he is extra tall with extra big muscles. he also has a son named Baki so that’s pretty cool although the kid is still almost 1 years old. He ntr’s Hashirama too lol, my guy Hashirama is a walking L no cap 💀
ネタバレを明かす mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,masmas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas,mas
INIIIII BARU NAMANYA MC JAHAT!!!!!, ceritanya sesuai MC hanya melihat melalui kekuatan sesuai dengan dunia yang sedang kacau dan banyak perang.
Its a great novel i loved it since im a bug fan of baki and naruto so if i were you i would read it and honestly this book is hreat for people who like ruthless mc’s and not a dumb mc so yea definitely a good read
This story is masterpiece in making. the start might have been unstable but the after chapter 15 it's gets so much better. the mc is a battle manic with Hanma bloodline that can evolve through battle and slaughter. he can take chakra of his descendant's through his bloodline and strength his own bloodline. mc is not a hero he is just battle manic who lives for battle. story has so much potential just waiting to be unleashed. no grammatical errors , no wannabe hero mc and a realistic mc. what else do you need in a story. now Don't waste time reading my comment and go read the story.
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where were you man, I can honestly say this was the best naruto/Baki fanfic ever, everything is 5 stars except the updates I have yet to see the stability of update since I just started it
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