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Like the stlry, and even like it more when it involved the trio acting all crazy and funny. Overall, the story is great and would definitely reccomend reading it.
I really like it😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This FF is the fresh air of the Naruto Fanfics. The only shortcoming and lacking in this novel were either the author was lazy or the chapter was too short. I can't wait to see how it will end...
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I’m really sorry but where is the Naruto FF here? From what it looks like you just use the naming sense in it. There is no plot or anything from the original but there is useless thing about shokugeki, deadly sins, JSDF gate and other mangas. Thi idea and beginning nice but the rest unfortunately a disappointment. I could count the original characters on one hand and the repeatable being Hasirama and Madara. To me this has almost nothing to do with Naruto and looking at story progresses he won’t even be born.
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Overall is good, only that the chapter is so short and too fast paced, like the story is good you were immersed in the story but the chapter is just too short....
By no means am I hating on this fanfic. I liked the direction you were going with a new hidden village. But to me it seems that you’re obsessed with dragons. I wouldn’t mind the constant mentioning of dragons, if your mc had any other substance or personality other than ‘dragon village this, I’m the dragon king that’. The personalities seemed rushed and the pacing is way too fast for a fanfic of Naruto. We’re just suddenly thrown in Tanaka’s life without an explanation of any of his Powers/arsenal.
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Basic op naruto story where mc is basically the strongest by the 10 chapter. the only thing kinda cool is the village he made and him bringing stuff from other stories. Its okay if you have nothing else to read
Absolutely perfect, finally something new, funny, new possibilities, I love the sins weapons, can't wait for more/. If you want to stop, please dont
This is an interesting concept, Im actually thinking of writing something similar, I just have no idea how to at the moment. Im definitely gonna read this
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Like the stlry, and even like it more when it involved the trio acting all crazy and funny. Overall, the story is great and would definitely reccomend reading it.
I really like it😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This FF is the fresh air of the Naruto Fanfics. The only shortcoming and lacking in this novel were either the author was lazy or the chapter was too short. I can't wait to see how it will end...
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I’m really sorry but where is the Naruto FF here? From what it looks like you just use the naming sense in it. There is no plot or anything from the original but there is useless thing about shokugeki, deadly sins, JSDF gate and other mangas. Thi idea and beginning nice but the rest unfortunately a disappointment. I could count the original characters on one hand and the repeatable being Hasirama and Madara. To me this has almost nothing to do with Naruto and looking at story progresses he won’t even be born.
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Overall is good, only that the chapter is so short and too fast paced, like the story is good you were immersed in the story but the chapter is just too short....
By no means am I hating on this fanfic. I liked the direction you were going with a new hidden village. But to me it seems that you’re obsessed with dragons. I wouldn’t mind the constant mentioning of dragons, if your mc had any other substance or personality other than ‘dragon village this, I’m the dragon king that’. The personalities seemed rushed and the pacing is way too fast for a fanfic of Naruto. We’re just suddenly thrown in Tanaka’s life without an explanation of any of his Powers/arsenal.
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Basic op naruto story where mc is basically the strongest by the 10 chapter. the only thing kinda cool is the village he made and him bringing stuff from other stories. Its okay if you have nothing else to read
Absolutely perfect, finally something new, funny, new possibilities, I love the sins weapons, can't wait for more/. If you want to stop, please dont
This is an interesting concept, Im actually thinking of writing something similar, I just have no idea how to at the moment. Im definitely gonna read this
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