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the story was great but i want to know what happened to him. that was a happy ending 😭😭
Frankly, I don't hate the story but the fact that it's badly written. The idea is good, great even. A new village in the Narutoverse with its own technology, awesome but each chapter has a lot of illogical elements. The part of Universe playing basketball is so badly executed that I had to skip the majority. The fact that he has to poach other people in other villages to build his own is embarrassing. The timeline for having the village is poorly executed, the village will be too new to have any legitimacy to become the best in such a short time, it should have been at least a century before canon. These characters should have been manufactured by himself in the system as well as the particulars. Beginners with 10 characters with powers and about fifty civilians and leave the populated the village. Stay discreet and among themselves and don't go to other villages, coded in the very DNA of the inhabitants not to copulate with other villages, be twice as strong as the others, etc. Anyway, a few things to plan
Every fanfiction this dude makes amaze me it always give mw goosebumps you're a legend
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I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!❤️
First story to make me laugh for hours in the last 3 years. Thank you.....................................................................................................................
The idea is very interesting , but there is one big BUT . Firstly , dragons of dragon meat yes , this is normal , but really why impersonate yourself as a dragon ? And 2 author do you have diarrhea ? where are you in a hurry and why did you drink so many different anime 7 sins and then ? as if the author doesn 't think about the future . And why should immortals have children at all ? What 's the hurry ? and the biggest mistake he made was making himself a pawn in someone else 's hands . it would have been better if he himself had figured out how to travel through other universes . In short , the beginning is great , but then everything seems to be on rewind . And for the end of the story in general I put 1
It's great Naruto fanfiction!!! I like how he build his village from start and make it so strong.. The village also have many things from modern age... But, it so fast ended.. I mean if this Naruto there should be story in Naruto era, maybe make him another Naruto teacher.. But overall it's quite good... Love your story author san!!! 😁😁👍👍😍😍😍
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this such a good nive 100/5 i love the author novel hope he makes one like this but like a sequel where the main character is trying to find a successor and maybe also some terror infinity but the worlds are leaking into each other but maybe evry anime is already squashed up but other worlds are filled of failed and destroyed world and maybe different ending if the main character did something else.
sungguh novel FF ini adalah harta karun selain seru, juga jiwa wibu saya bergetar ekstrim yah mantap saya sangat puas untuk beberapa bab awal, yah sebenarnya saya berharap Tsunade akan menjadi Istri MC karna di Cannon dia adalah wanita yang kuat tapi sebenernya dia lemah dengan mental karna setiap anggota keluarga yang dia cintai meninggalkan dia sendirian... tapi itu tidak apa apa, jujur saya sangat puas dengan karyamu penulis, tapi saya agak kecewa dengan endingnya, itu seperti kesannya dipaksakan xD
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I'm going to star this out by stating the obvious in that it's well written has good grammar and quite frankly is an enjoyable read. Now, while I honestly think that if "forced assimilation" of were a genre that one could classify stories under kinda like "isekai" is then this fic would be it's poster child. It really isn't a naruto fic but more of a naruto themed one. The characters are there but the meaningful story, vibe and spirit of it isn't really there from what I've read. If you don't enjoy it when a fanfic is more of a light parody of the original works this isn't for you. Oddly enough I usually fit in that category and can quite honestly say that I hate this fic... but I also like it if that makes any sense. It's better if you read it with the mindset that this is a crack fic and isn't going to be leaning to the "lore" or serious plot in the series. If you get past it's a great read.
Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
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Es un fanfic interesante diría si buscas algo muy diferente a los habituales sobre el naruverso, en cuanto los elementos de la trama la verdad hubiera estado bien desarrollaras la trama de gate lástima que se abandonó rápidamente
Good for me just hate the ending. He literally ntr himself cause he felt himself getting sucked out of the universe so what did he do create a clone of him that will continue his life there without his wives knowing and his clones also had kids with his wife. So yeah it's a good story just trash ending.
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I should say I am satisfied with this one but you weren't updated about the gate after that arc. Welp full of timeskip it's better to have slice of life there... You've given me curiosity and given me satisfied. So it'll be okay but lightly dissatisfied with low introduced of children's and grandchildren.
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To be honest this fanfiction has a lot of potential, the concept of starting his own village with advanced technology in narutoverse is personally very pleasing to me who loves kingdom building novels. But its sad to say that I was dissapointed when absurd and illogical things starts popping out everywhere. Furthermore, things were too fast paced and lot of things were skipped that could have made the novel longer. Like the part where there could have been development with his wife and since it was simply stated that he suddenly just had wife and stuff like that. The author could have slowed things down and develop things better. Even though my expectation were shattered, this fanfic was also fun in someway if you just accept everything. Even though my expectations of a good kingdom building novel inside the world of naruto were not met, it was still was a lot of fun reading this fanfiction. I would still recommend this fanfic to people as good wish fullfillment fanfic.
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the story was great but i want to know what happened to him. that was a happy ending 😭😭
Frankly, I don't hate the story but the fact that it's badly written. The idea is good, great even. A new village in the Narutoverse with its own technology, awesome but each chapter has a lot of illogical elements. The part of Universe playing basketball is so badly executed that I had to skip the majority. The fact that he has to poach other people in other villages to build his own is embarrassing. The timeline for having the village is poorly executed, the village will be too new to have any legitimacy to become the best in such a short time, it should have been at least a century before canon. These characters should have been manufactured by himself in the system as well as the particulars. Beginners with 10 characters with powers and about fifty civilians and leave the populated the village. Stay discreet and among themselves and don't go to other villages, coded in the very DNA of the inhabitants not to copulate with other villages, be twice as strong as the others, etc. Anyway, a few things to plan
Every fanfiction this dude makes amaze me it always give mw goosebumps you're a legend
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I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!❤️
First story to make me laugh for hours in the last 3 years. Thank you.....................................................................................................................
The idea is very interesting , but there is one big BUT . Firstly , dragons of dragon meat yes , this is normal , but really why impersonate yourself as a dragon ? And 2 author do you have diarrhea ? where are you in a hurry and why did you drink so many different anime 7 sins and then ? as if the author doesn 't think about the future . And why should immortals have children at all ? What 's the hurry ? and the biggest mistake he made was making himself a pawn in someone else 's hands . it would have been better if he himself had figured out how to travel through other universes . In short , the beginning is great , but then everything seems to be on rewind . And for the end of the story in general I put 1
It's great Naruto fanfiction!!! I like how he build his village from start and make it so strong.. The village also have many things from modern age... But, it so fast ended.. I mean if this Naruto there should be story in Naruto era, maybe make him another Naruto teacher.. But overall it's quite good... Love your story author san!!! 😁😁👍👍😍😍😍
Rushed wish fullfillment story about op mc that brings many changes to naruto world. ...............................................
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
this such a good nive 100/5 i love the author novel hope he makes one like this but like a sequel where the main character is trying to find a successor and maybe also some terror infinity but the worlds are leaking into each other but maybe evry anime is already squashed up but other worlds are filled of failed and destroyed world and maybe different ending if the main character did something else.
sungguh novel FF ini adalah harta karun selain seru, juga jiwa wibu saya bergetar ekstrim yah mantap saya sangat puas untuk beberapa bab awal, yah sebenarnya saya berharap Tsunade akan menjadi Istri MC karna di Cannon dia adalah wanita yang kuat tapi sebenernya dia lemah dengan mental karna setiap anggota keluarga yang dia cintai meninggalkan dia sendirian... tapi itu tidak apa apa, jujur saya sangat puas dengan karyamu penulis, tapi saya agak kecewa dengan endingnya, itu seperti kesannya dipaksakan xD
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ネタバレを明かす I'm going to star this out by stating the obvious in that it's well written has good grammar and quite frankly is an enjoyable read. Now, while I honestly think that if "forced assimilation" of were a genre that one could classify stories under kinda like "isekai" is then this fic would be it's poster child. It really isn't a naruto fic but more of a naruto themed one. The characters are there but the meaningful story, vibe and spirit of it isn't really there from what I've read. If you don't enjoy it when a fanfic is more of a light parody of the original works this isn't for you. Oddly enough I usually fit in that category and can quite honestly say that I hate this fic... but I also like it if that makes any sense. It's better if you read it with the mindset that this is a crack fic and isn't going to be leaning to the "lore" or serious plot in the series. If you get past it's a great read.
Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
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Es un fanfic interesante diría si buscas algo muy diferente a los habituales sobre el naruverso, en cuanto los elementos de la trama la verdad hubiera estado bien desarrollaras la trama de gate lástima que se abandonó rápidamente
Good for me just hate the ending. He literally ntr himself cause he felt himself getting sucked out of the universe so what did he do create a clone of him that will continue his life there without his wives knowing and his clones also had kids with his wife. So yeah it's a good story just trash ending.
ネタバレを明かす I should say I am satisfied with this one but you weren't updated about the gate after that arc. Welp full of timeskip it's better to have slice of life there... You've given me curiosity and given me satisfied. So it'll be okay but lightly dissatisfied with low introduced of children's and grandchildren.
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To be honest this fanfiction has a lot of potential, the concept of starting his own village with advanced technology in narutoverse is personally very pleasing to me who loves kingdom building novels. But its sad to say that I was dissapointed when absurd and illogical things starts popping out everywhere. Furthermore, things were too fast paced and lot of things were skipped that could have made the novel longer. Like the part where there could have been development with his wife and since it was simply stated that he suddenly just had wife and stuff like that. The author could have slowed things down and develop things better. Even though my expectation were shattered, this fanfic was also fun in someway if you just accept everything. Even though my expectations of a good kingdom building novel inside the world of naruto were not met, it was still was a lot of fun reading this fanfiction. I would still recommend this fanfic to people as good wish fullfillment fanfic.
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