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Awesome! l love the novel author. Keep up the good work, l love the journey to other planets. Looking forward to more novels written by you.
This story is wonderful! I made it myself! Doesn't it give you guys that little anime feel from seeing the action and characters! If so, reply to me to let me know. And what I can do to improve this story. I need support for its future domination!
The plot is good. It has an easy-to-follow flow. Just minor issues with grammar that can be solved a bit by proofreading the chapters. Good luck on the next chapters!
Overall, the plot is good and the story is enjoyable. However, there are minor issues with grammar but they are easily fixed with a bit of proofing. Good job and good luck.
Really loved reading this novel, a great creation author . Love the characters the grammar is not bad at all keep it up author and please update more chapters soon, Can't wait for more.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I would like to see how the story unfolds. You can work a bit on editing. The plot has potential. The characters are good. Please continue writing and Keep going!
Awesome! l love the novel author. Keep up the good work, l love the journey to other planets. Looking forward to more novels written by you.
This story is wonderful! I made it myself! Doesn't it give you guys that little anime feel from seeing the action and characters! If so, reply to me to let me know. And what I can do to improve this story. I need support for its future domination!
The plot is good. It has an easy-to-follow flow. Just minor issues with grammar that can be solved a bit by proofreading the chapters. Good luck on the next chapters!
Overall, the plot is good and the story is enjoyable. However, there are minor issues with grammar but they are easily fixed with a bit of proofing. Good job and good luck.
Really loved reading this novel, a great creation author . Love the characters the grammar is not bad at all keep it up author and please update more chapters soon, Can't wait for more.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I would like to see how the story unfolds. You can work a bit on editing. The plot has potential. The characters are good. Please continue writing and Keep going!