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Well i am a fan of the orinal Author Carrot123, and while i could not read the story seeing the chapter have already disappeared, just came to put the nail in the coffin here. But i have to say plagarism scum you are but a man of culture you are.
Author has said that this story was originally a Naruto story and that he thought it would be better based on splinter cell but he’s just copy and pasted the hard work of carrots123 and only changed mc’s name it’s disgusting. Show support to the original author than this one.
When someone told me that there was a story called splinter cell that had copied my book, I didn’t believe them. Then I read your first two chapters and besides changing the name of the mc your chapters are a word for word copy for my own. Please remove this story or write your own.
really good the over all plot is really good the story and premise is interesting the character interactions are really smooth and the author does a good job conveying the emotions of the character and making them human and not robotic
What can I say? It's Splinter Cell. That already earned it 6 stars in my book, but not only that the development of Sam so far (Ch. 5) has been great and I haven't seen any writing mistakes. Excited to see where this story goes in the future.
Love the story it feels really grounded and not just about an OC that’s basically god after the 1st chapter. Main character actually feels like a person with real down to earth motives
This story is very good, the writing is also very good, I don't see many mistakes, I really like the concept of the antihero. Do you have a schedule for when you upload chapters?
this is great the writing is good the story is good the premise of the story is good honestly its good all around except for how few chapters there are (currently only 2)
Well i am a fan of the orinal Author Carrot123, and while i could not read the story seeing the chapter have already disappeared, just came to put the nail in the coffin here. But i have to say plagarism scum you are but a man of culture you are.
Author has said that this story was originally a Naruto story and that he thought it would be better based on splinter cell but he’s just copy and pasted the hard work of carrots123 and only changed mc’s name it’s disgusting. Show support to the original author than this one.
When someone told me that there was a story called splinter cell that had copied my book, I didn’t believe them. Then I read your first two chapters and besides changing the name of the mc your chapters are a word for word copy for my own. Please remove this story or write your own.
really good the over all plot is really good the story and premise is interesting the character interactions are really smooth and the author does a good job conveying the emotions of the character and making them human and not robotic
What can I say? It's Splinter Cell. That already earned it 6 stars in my book, but not only that the development of Sam so far (Ch. 5) has been great and I haven't seen any writing mistakes. Excited to see where this story goes in the future.
Love the story it feels really grounded and not just about an OC that’s basically god after the 1st chapter. Main character actually feels like a person with real down to earth motives
This story is very good, the writing is also very good, I don't see many mistakes, I really like the concept of the antihero. Do you have a schedule for when you upload chapters?
this is great the writing is good the story is good the premise of the story is good honestly its good all around except for how few chapters there are (currently only 2)
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