章 59: Chapter 59. Carla

If you really want this to work, you have to have a wider vocabulary, your novel is reduced to using the same 20 words throughout. So it's kind of amazing that without using a lot of words you've been able to tell so much, but you have to learn to use more, because reading something that repeats itself all the time even if it's to refer to different things makes it a bit tiring, and I have to be honest with you, I think your manuscript has a very good potential to be a literary success. 

Then say no more, where do I sign," the girl was already getting excited. 

No, you haven't understood what I'm trying to tell you - I settled back in my seat so I could explain it to you again - go home and read at least 3 new books, but REAL books - I specified - don't read instructions for use, no matter how long they are, that won't help you in anything we want it to help you with. 

I have the contract or not," he wanted me to answer him directly.