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Great story bro... just wish he didn't lose his memories. Ight I even voted with my POWAH STONES*Evil thunder noise in background* well thanks and tc hoomans!
it sucks, it took the memory of the reincarnated mc, a very bad idea, there is no reason to take the memory, if I didn’t want him to know the plot, it was just to make him a dog in his own world, useless reincarnation.
Bad idea to take memories off. like if you want him not to remember anything why reincarnate? just make him of the danmachi world. Like, god saw the kid in coffin and he revives him with powers. That's all. why bother all this? i was just waiting for him to get his memories back and play well. But, MC is scared to go to dungeon. Like What?
Underatted FanFic. Please Continue. A Good Read. Interesting backstory of MC. Grammar and spelling 👌. Please Continue......................
I haven't read this and I probably won't because there isn't any information in the synapse about what this story is about. You need a little bit of info to get readers attention.
i read this novel thinking tensura but got me baited, and the way mc loses his memory bruh no i can't. alert, its danmachi fanfic
Grammar:Good Background:👌 Character Development:Need more chapters but pretty good so far Some people are batching about MC loosing his memory saying just make him an oc in danmachi will be better(I do t agree) and being scare of going in dungeon(imagine going to another world where you don't have memory of and there are a place with monster that have a high chance of kill you would you go in?of course not you need to be really desperate or decentat fighting)but don't mind them and keep up the good work
wh it's good but I dropped it cuz the mc is kinda naive way too naive he showed his status the the logic familiar Sebastians n Susan's status's to aid just like that ye he likes her but still
I had high hopes about this fanfic but in the end it's onr of many and very forgettable, the only good thing about this is the writing of the author. A personal opinión: don't make the characters to Op at the beggining of the story it make it boring
Uh huh. Underrated Danmachi FanFic. A bit of a downer about MC's memories but overall it's all ok. By the way, does MC look like Rimuru? Thanks
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Seemed kinda interesting until it turned out that the MC also *acts* like a child.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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卷 1 : The First Step
- 1 The Beginning (Edited) 3 years ago
- 2 Burned 3 years ago
- 3 Fallen 3 years ago
- 4 Equal Exchange 3 years ago
- 5 A/N 3 years ago
- 6 Time Passes 3 years ago
- 7 A look into the past 3 years ago
- 8 Status UP! 3 years ago
- 9 Wealth 3 years ago
- 10 Fungeon Crawling 3 years ago
- 11 Made what a maid?! 3 years ago
- 12 Warmth... 3 years ago
- 13 LEVEL UP! 3 years ago
- 14 New Sword 3 years ago
- 15 Dwarven Dragon Wine 3 years ago
- 16 Punishment 3 years ago
- 17 Date 3 years ago
- 18 Level 10?! 3 years ago
- 19 Using ‘Bed Arts’ 3 years ago
- 20 Freya... 3 years ago
- 21 Puss- Puranos... 3 years ago
- 22 HER young master~ 3 years ago
- 23 Embodiement of Magic 3 years ago
- 24 Burn the invaders? 3 years ago
- 25 Demon Lillies 3 years ago
- 26 Welp, I messed up... 3 years ago
- 27 Distancing... 3 years ago
- 28 Where I belong 3 years ago
- 29 Tainted 3 years ago
- 30 Denatus 3 years ago
- 31 Mad Ramblings = Futuresight? 3 years ago
- 32 A/N 3 years ago
- 33 I am... 3 years ago
- 34 Shake on it 3 years ago
- 35 Fucking Capes... 3 years ago
- 36 Evolve and Fade Away (ALT) 3 years ago
- 37 Power Trio 3 years ago
- 38 Dad? 3 years ago
- 39 Unnamed 3 years ago
- 40 The Scar 3 years ago
- 41 Shine Bright 3 years ago
- 42 Nightmare... 3 years ago
- 43 Familia? 3 years ago
- 44 My story... 3 years ago
- 45 A Man, and Boy 3 years ago
- 46 Over doing it... maybe... 3 years ago
- 47 Poor Loki... 3 years ago
- 48 ‘Ordinary’ Sword 3 years ago
- 49 Unworthy 3 years ago
- 50 Dropped... 3 years ago
- 51 Payment Incoming 3 years ago
- 52 Spirit Kin? 3 years ago
- 53 [ERROR] 3 years ago
- 54 “Ah Ah, Wait” 3 years ago
- 55 Before the trip... 3 years ago
- 56 Beraan Kingdom 3 years ago
- 57 Loss 3 years ago
- 58 “*Smack* Seriously?” 3 years ago
- 59 Retribution 3 years ago
- 60 Umm Okay? 3 years ago
- 61 He’s Awake 3 years ago
- 62 The First Step 3 years ago
卷 2 : The Second Step
- 63 A New Chapter 3 years ago
- 64 Status 3 years ago
- 65 Blinkstrike 3 years ago
- 66 Just a peek? 3 years ago
- 67 Story Time 3 years ago
- 68 Time Skip 3 years ago
- 69 Aria 3 years ago
- 70 Before the depth… 3 years ago
- 71 Haru 3 years ago
- 72 Into the depths 3 years ago
- 73 Sudden Pain 3 years ago
- 74 Ignorance is Bliss… 3 years ago
- 75 Wrath 3 years ago
- 76 Awakening… 3 years ago
- 77 Save him! 3 years ago
- 78 (A/N) 3 years ago
- 79 Update 3 years ago
- 80 Unnamed 3 years ago
- 81 The End 3 years ago
- 82 I was wrong 3 years ago
- 83 Shameless Plug 3 years ago
The Idea has potential Noja, however it wasnt executed very well. From the very start everything is happening at the same time not giving any chance for the events to unfold before something new and uncomplete comes in, for example his past is suddenly given however the MC has no character at all before this happens and it does literary nothing besides saying that he has a "title" or even the interactions between the characters, they have no reason shown in why they act like they do towards the mc and even then they have short sections, the thing that was done well in those however is that the author managed to show that those side characters do care about the mc in a way I have never seen to be honest, it might be unique to the author here or its just me, who knows Noja. So I think that this has potential, just needs proper preparation for it to be great Noja. My advice would be to give it space, since the like I said earlier the idea is interesting but its just not done correctly Noja. Before he was reincarnated we were seen that the MC was quite shameless and brave, but due to the memory loss the MC became a blank state again with literary no character, while am at chapter 8 and you may have added him a character later on I dont really want to read more with how clustered it was at the start.
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