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I'll shamelessly review my own fanfic. Honest review though... :P Hope you'll like my fanfic and gimme loads of powerstones tee hee~ Do give chapter comments if any correction can be made or to ideas to make story better.
When MC decided to tell my parents that he was from another world, I just stopped reading. It's a fiasco bro. The MC is poorly designed. It is not clear who he is, where he is from, why he is so stupid. Although the potential is good. But shit shit, he's too dumb for a reincarnator.
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I'll shamelessly review my own fanfic. Honest review though... :P Hope you'll like my fanfic and gimme loads of powerstones tee hee~ Do give chapter comments if any correction can be made or to ideas to make story better.
When MC decided to tell my parents that he was from another world, I just stopped reading. It's a fiasco bro. The MC is poorly designed. It is not clear who he is, where he is from, why he is so stupid. Although the potential is good. But shit shit, he's too dumb for a reincarnator.