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レビューを書くWoow, this book had a way of pulling a reader into it, the plotline story is very creative and flowing. This is a book to read, it's worth the time.
The plot is amazing and the story is so interesting. Honestly one of the best web novels i have read. I totally recommend it to anyone who like this kind of novels.
this story has a wonderful start it actually very interesting i would recommend this book to anyone you should try to read it if you are a old or new reader.
It's a very interesting story that has a good polished character, the plot is planned well and makes the readers understand. I like the plot and the best thing is the author's writing skill. Keep up the good work. We are all waiting for new chapters. Good work and I am always cheering you! well done!
This is a fantastic story. If you've read the cover, don't expect anything less about the development of bonds. I can't say much without spoiling, but following the story of the protagonist, this aspect of bonds is given a new light by the author. The expression used in the first chapters with the angels etc gives you food for thought about the things we take for granted, like birthdays and personal relationships. Drama intensifies as you go deeper into the story in ways that you don't expect. This story deserves traction and I believe it will only continue to get better. Rock on!
I've read the prologue and chapter 1. I appreciate the clear and concise explanation of the novel's mythos. If you like a modern novel involving angels, demons, or mythical fantasy in general, I would bet you'd like to at least try this novel.
I love your creativity. You have brought the story alive. The description is good and give the clear picture of the environment and what's happening. Keep it up. I am waiting for more from you. I am tuned in
Wow, this book is a real drug! Initially i just came for a review but gahdamn! Its really addicting. Your world-building is really one of a kind. i can see how much thought you put in your book. I do spot some english error here and there but who doesnt make mistakes? I really hope you continue writing on like this, author! Ill look forward for more works!
Wow! 😯 This is new to me but I must say, the idea of this novel is very unique❤. I thought it would be like Greek God and Goddesses but, it was not 💕. It was a wholesome idea of using Angels and Demons that we see read in bibles 🌹. You can feel the emotions of the characters as well. I like this novel. I just hope for more chapters. ❤
overall a good read. needs a lot of work grammar wise, especially with punctuation, spacing and a lot of other things, but I can still understand the story, and from what I've read of the last few chapters, I can say I'm happily waiting for the next one.
This book is fascinating and honestly worth the read. I see a lot of grammar issues, but I will never hold that against anyone! But I do suggest that you use Grammarly! Other than that, expect me to read this book every day, till I catch up!
I'm not gonna lie, but this book is really a good read. But the problem is that it's lacking a huge amount of details. I don't know if it's only me but that's what I felt. Some parts are also hard and confusing to other readers. I advise the author to make the book more 'alive'. Put details and show the characters uniqueness! Overall, I really like it!
Extremely engaging story altogether First time reading this genre of novel and I'm hooked in just 10 chapters. Keep up the amazing work, Author 👌
This story has an amazing plot, I continued to read the chapters until the last one, the are some grammatically errors but they soon disappeared for the story as the chapter continued. What a nice work.
amazing beautiful and writing and pacing and character development is well balanced authour knows how to make youstick to the end overall a must read...
It's strange for me to read a didactic piece. I find the story a bit heavy-handed, but maybe that's the writer's intention. What I like most about it are the characters and their interactions. The dialogues reveal not only the personality of the speakers but also the dynamics of their relationships. There's a lot of room to improve when it comes to writing. But I'm pretty sure nothing grammarly or other apps cannot fix. Kudos to the writer. Keep writing.
This story is intriguing and has a unique storyline .. .I like how the author describes the world in writing. It's a great book for releasing one's stress #highly recommended
The plot is unique and truly a breath of fresh air. The characters are very well written and have depth. Hope you keep on writing, this truly is an interesting novel. :)
I'm at work so I don't have time to read more than one chapter yet, but I'm putting in my library for later! From what I've seen so far this is about to be one of my favs! The grammar is excellent, which is so refreshing! And it's a different approach to things than everyone else has taken! I'm ready to be off work so I can really dig in!
Grammar is nice, the book is very interesting, the world is also very detailed and nicely explained, I would recommend it, keep up the great work author!
This is an interesting book honestly. I have read the first few chapters and was quite intrigued by the plot. It's certainly a good plot and it's also very unique too. Keep up the amazing work.
So far so good. An angel and a demon? That's a new one for me and it's a very interesting read. So intriguing you would want to keep turning the page. Good writing quality and character design. I can't wait to find out about the connection between the two. Good job author👍🏾
Good vs Evil in a unique way to save a soul. The story is distinctly good and the words are nicely described. There is a great potential to explore further and I'm looking forward to read morerd
The grammar is good. Love the introduction, the transition between scenes are also commendable, the novel's pace is not too fast or slow for the specific type of novel. Characters are well thought of and the plot is also on par with the best ones out there.
This story is interesting, with a good plot and a lot of attention to character dynamics. The world is interesting and detailed too. The writing quality suffers a bit as there are some minor grammatical and flow errors, but they aren't too bad.
I love the unique plot, its a plot I've never seen before and I'm looking forward to the next chapters NEED MORE NEED MORE NEED MORE NEED MORE
It's amazing. I love the attention to detail, your plot is intriguing, great descriptions. Over all its just a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more!
This story has such a unique storyline I love the concept. Its obvious that the author has put in alot of work and thought in his plot and characters. I cant wait to read more.
This book is actually good, the plotline is well thought of, even though it's a new author, she had put her total spirit in it, it's worth the time. Please read it, you will enjoy
Woow, this book had a way of pulling a reader into it, the plotline story is very creative and flowing. This is a book to read, it's worth the time.
The plot is amazing and the story is so interesting. Honestly one of the best web novels i have read. I totally recommend it to anyone who like this kind of novels.
this story has a wonderful start it actually very interesting i would recommend this book to anyone you should try to read it if you are a old or new reader.
It's a very interesting story that has a good polished character, the plot is planned well and makes the readers understand. I like the plot and the best thing is the author's writing skill. Keep up the good work. We are all waiting for new chapters. Good work and I am always cheering you! well done!
This is a fantastic story. If you've read the cover, don't expect anything less about the development of bonds. I can't say much without spoiling, but following the story of the protagonist, this aspect of bonds is given a new light by the author. The expression used in the first chapters with the angels etc gives you food for thought about the things we take for granted, like birthdays and personal relationships. Drama intensifies as you go deeper into the story in ways that you don't expect. This story deserves traction and I believe it will only continue to get better. Rock on!
I've read the prologue and chapter 1. I appreciate the clear and concise explanation of the novel's mythos. If you like a modern novel involving angels, demons, or mythical fantasy in general, I would bet you'd like to at least try this novel.
I love your creativity. You have brought the story alive. The description is good and give the clear picture of the environment and what's happening. Keep it up. I am waiting for more from you. I am tuned in
Wow, this book is a real drug! Initially i just came for a review but gahdamn! Its really addicting. Your world-building is really one of a kind. i can see how much thought you put in your book. I do spot some english error here and there but who doesnt make mistakes? I really hope you continue writing on like this, author! Ill look forward for more works!
Wow! 😯 This is new to me but I must say, the idea of this novel is very unique❤. I thought it would be like Greek God and Goddesses but, it was not 💕. It was a wholesome idea of using Angels and Demons that we see read in bibles 🌹. You can feel the emotions of the characters as well. I like this novel. I just hope for more chapters. ❤
overall a good read. needs a lot of work grammar wise, especially with punctuation, spacing and a lot of other things, but I can still understand the story, and from what I've read of the last few chapters, I can say I'm happily waiting for the next one.
This book is fascinating and honestly worth the read. I see a lot of grammar issues, but I will never hold that against anyone! But I do suggest that you use Grammarly! Other than that, expect me to read this book every day, till I catch up!
I'm not gonna lie, but this book is really a good read. But the problem is that it's lacking a huge amount of details. I don't know if it's only me but that's what I felt. Some parts are also hard and confusing to other readers. I advise the author to make the book more 'alive'. Put details and show the characters uniqueness! Overall, I really like it!
Extremely engaging story altogether First time reading this genre of novel and I'm hooked in just 10 chapters. Keep up the amazing work, Author 👌
This story has an amazing plot, I continued to read the chapters until the last one, the are some grammatically errors but they soon disappeared for the story as the chapter continued. What a nice work.
amazing beautiful and writing and pacing and character development is well balanced authour knows how to make youstick to the end overall a must read...
It's strange for me to read a didactic piece. I find the story a bit heavy-handed, but maybe that's the writer's intention. What I like most about it are the characters and their interactions. The dialogues reveal not only the personality of the speakers but also the dynamics of their relationships. There's a lot of room to improve when it comes to writing. But I'm pretty sure nothing grammarly or other apps cannot fix. Kudos to the writer. Keep writing.
This story is intriguing and has a unique storyline .. .I like how the author describes the world in writing. It's a great book for releasing one's stress #highly recommended
The plot is unique and truly a breath of fresh air. The characters are very well written and have depth. Hope you keep on writing, this truly is an interesting novel. :)
I'm at work so I don't have time to read more than one chapter yet, but I'm putting in my library for later! From what I've seen so far this is about to be one of my favs! The grammar is excellent, which is so refreshing! And it's a different approach to things than everyone else has taken! I'm ready to be off work so I can really dig in!
Grammar is nice, the book is very interesting, the world is also very detailed and nicely explained, I would recommend it, keep up the great work author!
This is an interesting book honestly. I have read the first few chapters and was quite intrigued by the plot. It's certainly a good plot and it's also very unique too. Keep up the amazing work.
So far so good. An angel and a demon? That's a new one for me and it's a very interesting read. So intriguing you would want to keep turning the page. Good writing quality and character design. I can't wait to find out about the connection between the two. Good job author👍🏾
Good vs Evil in a unique way to save a soul. The story is distinctly good and the words are nicely described. There is a great potential to explore further and I'm looking forward to read morerd
The grammar is good. Love the introduction, the transition between scenes are also commendable, the novel's pace is not too fast or slow for the specific type of novel. Characters are well thought of and the plot is also on par with the best ones out there.
This story is interesting, with a good plot and a lot of attention to character dynamics. The world is interesting and detailed too. The writing quality suffers a bit as there are some minor grammatical and flow errors, but they aren't too bad.
I love the unique plot, its a plot I've never seen before and I'm looking forward to the next chapters NEED MORE NEED MORE NEED MORE NEED MORE
It's amazing. I love the attention to detail, your plot is intriguing, great descriptions. Over all its just a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more!
This story has such a unique storyline I love the concept. Its obvious that the author has put in alot of work and thought in his plot and characters. I cant wait to read more.
This book is actually good, the plotline is well thought of, even though it's a new author, she had put her total spirit in it, it's worth the time. Please read it, you will enjoy