Historical System

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Arlemit

Hello, author here! Thanks everyone who reads my story. This is a story about a calm, cold, sensible protagonist. I hope you will enjoy.

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Tahmirih

Cool start!!! Non-trivial, fascinating plot and I hope for a further interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Highly recommend!!!

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CodeSpectre

Amazing !!! Its a very interesting world setting and though barely anything about the plot has been revealed it still managed to capture my interest !!!! Anyways I look forward to future chapters and I hope you don't drop this

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Alexiiiii

mc is a vagabond, who due to his unique eyes, very skilled with firearms, or long distance in general. he will do anything as long as it is "legal" or that makes him stronger, but he has no fixed purpose (as far as I read) besides being literally moved by cool things, money, weapons and etc ... to the rest he is a disinterested person who thinks it is better to spend his time sleeping. its level of power is simple, and except for the names, without much difference, but it is still effective and worked, to a certain extent. apart from the MC and this jacket, the author does not focus on any other characters so it seems that they are just stereotypes made to make the story move, because if it depends solely on the MC it would be a chapter of development and 10 of filling. apart from the unique personality of the mc and his faithful companion mister Jacket another notable thing is the mc system. the system has no explanation of what it is, and why choose mc, after all he literally dreamed of a ball of light and BAM! He's a cheater. Of course, this is compensated by its unique way of strengthening the MC. in addition to the good old store of appealing items, it also has a casino (detail: mc is lucky-0), its power is also interesting, as it is in the title the mc is strengthened through titles and stories. In other words, when the MC kills a strong monster or does something for the first time, he will earn a story that compensates him with a bonus, going from a bonus in strength to bargaining with a merchant, the titles are self-explanatory. conclusion: Positives: mc charismatico, interesting features, good story rhythm. Negative points: secondary characters without personality and little involvement, poor background story (the first chapter appears only that he is a vagabond and that he had a crazy dream), rustico beginning has no explanation about what the MC did before the story started and a lot less about his family and friends, both family and friends had few information paragraphs, little world, little information about the empire and the history of important cities and shops. anyway it is a good read, although it is not a masterpiece, and I recommend that you read at least until the paid chapters before thinking about dropping it or not

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crazymonkeyeye13

This is genuinely one of the best light novels I have ever read under the 'fantasy world' and 'system' tags. The only reason the score is 4.8 and not 5.0 is just because there is some awkward wording in some of the chapters, however; it's barely noticeable at all unless you're an immersive reader such as myself. This novel was on the recommended page of the webnovel app and for lack of novel to read, I decided to give it a try and I am very happy about doing so. The pacing is on the better side of novels, and the world background is set up beautifully. The male lead is again, very well-made and consistent in his decisions and personality, unlike some other novels I've read. Currently, there are less than 100 chapters and the new arc is only 2 chapters in; however, I can already tell it'll be great, and I personally cannot wait. I truly this will be one of the greatest hidden gems once it surpasses 175-200 chapters. I strongly recommend that whoever enjoys the 'system' and 'fantasy world' tags reads this. Author, thank you for your hard work and keep it up.

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SilverFox_Rhea

The starting point of this story is very alluring to read , make you wanna read all the way and that's exactly what happened to my case . I've been reading this book continuously ever since I've started reading it for the main reason that as the story progress , the plot itself never fails to impress me over and over again . And one thing I might add , at this point , the term ` like ` will be an understatement for I really really LOVE the MC and everything about him . This book is one of the greatest novels I've ever read and I strictly recommend it for those who are really interested in an Action - Adventure genre themed with system application kind of a novel . Believe me , you won't regret reading this novel EVER! Gotta go and continue reading ! Ba - Bye !

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KMDA

I honestly can't find much negatives in this novel. The wording is awkward at times but if you just take a second to re-read you can understand what it means. Would recommend.

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Jason_Marc_Harris

Excellent storyline, Great character growth, a gripping story from beginning to end. Definitely recommend this novel a brilliant read!!!!!!!!

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StormeShade

I love it. Glad i found this novel, i cant wait to catch up with the book. Im on chapter 53 right now. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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mozza_mello

Aye I really enjoyed reading this! :D Writing-wise, great, no noticeable mistakes. Also, the writing style is amazing hehe! It was interesting, and it has a smooth flow :D I also love the system, I think it's pretty cool, especially since I really really like history/fable themed stuff, like cough-orv-cough so this is exactly my cup of tea :D Best part is the MC tho :D I like the way he thinks hehe! Great work, author! <3

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Freebies_Account

I really enjoyed this book. It's a new concept and plot that I've never read before. The only complaint I have would be that the story was a bit short. There could've been a lot more that could've been added to spice things up. I also felt kinda unsatisfied with the ending. It feels as if it is missing something. Maybe the "purpose" of the story

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CrownedC

Good .

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Sapsushdup

The story is interesting. Great read, really enjoyed reading it so far. I recommend it to anyone.

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Cringe_Lord69420

Amazing novel can't wait for more chapters! Amazing novel can't wait for more chapters! Amazing novel can't wait for more chapters! Amazing novel can't wait for more chapters! Amazing novel can't wait for more chapters!

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Dorplart

Good story with great world building. I really like MC, his character, behavior and decisions.

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Liasis

The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. My only big criticism is that the grammar is very poor, and the spelling of names and terms can be inconsistent, making it hard to follow. It would benefit greatly from an editor, or even just machine grammar checking.

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AutumnSolstice13

The Story is very fascinating and thank you Author for not making it a Harem 😊 Grammar could use a little bit of polishing. Also, a little bit more character and world build up would be nice. Other than that this novel is superb! Great Job Author.

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ILLYAchan

A well-written and nice story! It's a system story but it's entirely different as it involves history. It what makes the story catch readers and the way the system is explained didn't bore me at all. The writing quality is great and updates are fast. Overall, this a good novel to read. Keep it up, author!

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Lua_Kai

I love the concept and plot of this novel. Everything about it is cool, calm, and refreshing, exactly like its main character. Plus, Stroph is such a good name, I love it!