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don't bother reading it boring and it about mc babysitting naruto and Sasuke mcs wishes were stupid he asked for regeneration when he could ask for sage body it would be the sake and better it not like he's regeneration is good or shit it takes to much time he asked for blood control with is also shit why not ask ketsuangun(don't know how to pronounce) he has pitifull about of Chakra borderline nonexistent he teaches naruto many thing and nobody says nothing and says loud to Sasuke hel help him awakening his saringan and should meet him later and nobody says shit so don't bother reading it just a waste of time
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Well written. Good grammar. Nice and refreshing story. MC gets OP after 10 and something chapters. The only thing that could be made better is the length of the chapters. I can only recommend this fanfic
Somethings wrong from the very start first of all naruto fails the test entrance exam 2 times and you can only apply for it ones a year basically means in this story he didnt fail that means he wasnt supposed to be in the same class or year of other anime cast and what that means is what supposed to happen in you're story is that naruto and the mc is supposed to be in the class/year ahead of the class/year of neji and lee. Lee and neji class is ahead of one year to the rest of the cast of the anime
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Great book. Keep up the amazing work✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊💫💫💫⭐⭐⭐
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TBH i wasn't expecting much when I started but it was quite a surprise to see that the quality of the story is really good !! All of it is pretty good but please don't make it a Danzo is coming after MC story cuz they aren't really that rare....It would be better if he befriended shikamaru,choji,ino,sasuke and Hinata since that would also make sure Danzo can't do anything to him since they're all clan heirs !!Please do mention what level of control over blood does he have and what the limit of his ability is !!!
Its good till now, but its still too early to say anything For now I will give it a 5 star. If the quality stays the same for future chapters, then its definitely worth the read.
this is a novel that i know will be dropped but i will say that so far it is good so and author when you drop this novel pls tell us when you will drop the novel
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Hello, I am the author so what do u expect? Anyway, I am currently on my bed, feeling regret, and contemplating life decisions. What about you??
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don't bother reading it boring and it about mc babysitting naruto and Sasuke mcs wishes were stupid he asked for regeneration when he could ask for sage body it would be the sake and better it not like he's regeneration is good or shit it takes to much time he asked for blood control with is also shit why not ask ketsuangun(don't know how to pronounce) he has pitifull about of Chakra borderline nonexistent he teaches naruto many thing and nobody says nothing and says loud to Sasuke hel help him awakening his saringan and should meet him later and nobody says shit so don't bother reading it just a waste of time
NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG NOTHING TO SAY NOTHING WRONG
Well written. Good grammar. Nice and refreshing story. MC gets OP after 10 and something chapters. The only thing that could be made better is the length of the chapters. I can only recommend this fanfic
Somethings wrong from the very start first of all naruto fails the test entrance exam 2 times and you can only apply for it ones a year basically means in this story he didnt fail that means he wasnt supposed to be in the same class or year of other anime cast and what that means is what supposed to happen in you're story is that naruto and the mc is supposed to be in the class/year ahead of the class/year of neji and lee. Lee and neji class is ahead of one year to the rest of the cast of the anime
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It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique. It's good and unique.
Great book. Keep up the amazing work✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊💫💫💫⭐⭐⭐
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TBH i wasn't expecting much when I started but it was quite a surprise to see that the quality of the story is really good !! All of it is pretty good but please don't make it a Danzo is coming after MC story cuz they aren't really that rare....It would be better if he befriended shikamaru,choji,ino,sasuke and Hinata since that would also make sure Danzo can't do anything to him since they're all clan heirs !!Please do mention what level of control over blood does he have and what the limit of his ability is !!!
Its good till now, but its still too early to say anything For now I will give it a 5 star. If the quality stays the same for future chapters, then its definitely worth the read.
this is a novel that i know will be dropped but i will say that so far it is good so and author when you drop this novel pls tell us when you will drop the novel
Very good novel More please More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Hello, I am the author so what do u expect? Anyway, I am currently on my bed, feeling regret, and contemplating life decisions. What about you??
very much bad I can do better with time to get up