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It could have been an masterpiece ,but it isn't now . But the topic was awesome . Have to give it to you bro
The idea behind the story is great and would make for an awesome story if it involved the MC as a king or some kind of leader because he'd be so powerful (or if it had actual good power scaling). Sadly, this story has an MC so weak, a normal human baby could one shot him with their breathing. I'm not sure the Author knows the actual power of a Celestial or an Elder God. Just being the son of an Elder God would make you be powerful. Being the son of a Celestial AND an Elder God, would make you even more so.
Thanks for the story it brings joy and confusion too. Very SATISFYING. .........................................................................................................................................hahahahahh
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The pacing is bad, not just slow. Readers beware. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Need i say more than the MC is dumb and weaker than Young Thor while he is born from 2 OP Races oh and he apparently doesnt have a brain—-—-——-———
This is one of the most boring fanfics i have read. Also a lot of the 5 stars are from the same person this novel is trash . . . . . . . . .
These people must’ve been furious when it was revealed that loki was bi in the MCU and that honestly fills me with such joy. I honestly love this story, despite some minor discrepancies, it is still a great read. Thanks author.
multiple 5 star reviews from single user. I'm here to even the false reviews out. This novel is garbage This novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbage
Ulala tem como dar mais votos 5 estrelas para essa obra de arte? Espero que finalize esta ótimo essa fanfic #ArcoVingadores e também poste mais capítulos durante a semana kkkk
Great fanfic. I don’t really review stuff so you know it’s really quite good. At least I think it’s good. Because there is a certain amount of characters needed per review Im typing this sentence.
Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots. Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.
Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon. Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon.Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon.
ネタバレを明かす When will this arc end? its good but feeling that it is getting too long. Still excited for more. When will this arc end? its good but feeling that it is getting too long. Still excited for more.
Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more. Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more.Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more.
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Nice another great chapters. Loving the fights so far. Also Dont bring tva please. Nice another great chapters. Loving the fights so far. Also Dont bring tva please.
Wow. Great chapter. So this means no reincarnation of asgardian? meaning this thor is op now. Need more......................................
ネタバレを明かす kante😈 no😱 para de😨 corre😰 el balon😠 de🤑 oro😛 lo merece😎el y con mount🥵 para😱 asistir🤡 el primer gol de havertz 🥶 en la Champions league⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
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author will he meet the mc's in the future?😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
trash , mc should be stronger than his mother gea from the beginning .the mc is just plain dumb and has the lowest iq possible for any celestial or being of high power, author clearly doesn’t know what his talking about
Nice. Loving so f far. Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.
It could have been an masterpiece ,but it isn't now . But the topic was awesome . Have to give it to you bro
The idea behind the story is great and would make for an awesome story if it involved the MC as a king or some kind of leader because he'd be so powerful (or if it had actual good power scaling). Sadly, this story has an MC so weak, a normal human baby could one shot him with their breathing. I'm not sure the Author knows the actual power of a Celestial or an Elder God. Just being the son of an Elder God would make you be powerful. Being the son of a Celestial AND an Elder God, would make you even more so.
Thanks for the story it brings joy and confusion too. Very SATISFYING. .........................................................................................................................................hahahahahh
garbage ************************************************************&*&&*&**&**&*&&*&&*&*&*&**&*&*&*&&*&*&*&&*&*&**&*&&*&**&*&*&**&*&*&&*&&**
nice but protagonist have wired power level --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- --- ---
want to read more ......................................................................................................................................................................
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MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA MUTA
The pacing is bad, not just slow. Readers beware. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Need i say more than the MC is dumb and weaker than Young Thor while he is born from 2 OP Races oh and he apparently doesnt have a brain—-—-——-———
This is one of the most boring fanfics i have read. Also a lot of the 5 stars are from the same person this novel is trash . . . . . . . . .
These people must’ve been furious when it was revealed that loki was bi in the MCU and that honestly fills me with such joy. I honestly love this story, despite some minor discrepancies, it is still a great read. Thanks author.
multiple 5 star reviews from single user. I'm here to even the false reviews out. This novel is garbage This novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbageThis novel is garbage
Ulala tem como dar mais votos 5 estrelas para essa obra de arte? Espero que finalize esta ótimo essa fanfic #ArcoVingadores e também poste mais capítulos durante a semana kkkk
Great fanfic. I don’t really review stuff so you know it’s really quite good. At least I think it’s good. Because there is a certain amount of characters needed per review Im typing this sentence.
Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots. Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.Nice. Loving so far. Really fleshed out plots.
Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon. Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon.Another great chapter. But I am hoping this arc ends soon.
ネタバレを明かす When will this arc end? its good but feeling that it is getting too long. Still excited for more. When will this arc end? its good but feeling that it is getting too long. Still excited for more.
Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more. Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more.Great chapters. Loving the ragnarok scenes. Cant wait for more.
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Nice another great chapters. Loving the fights so far. Also Dont bring tva please. Nice another great chapters. Loving the fights so far. Also Dont bring tva please.
Wow. Great chapter. So this means no reincarnation of asgardian? meaning this thor is op now. Need more......................................
ネタバレを明かす kante😈 no😱 para de😨 corre😰 el balon😠 de🤑 oro😛 lo merece😎el y con mount🥵 para😱 asistir🤡 el primer gol de havertz 🥶 en la Champions league⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
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ネタバレを明かす author will he meet the mc's in the future?😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
trash , mc should be stronger than his mother gea from the beginning .the mc is just plain dumb and has the lowest iq possible for any celestial or being of high power, author clearly doesn’t know what his talking about
Nice. Loving so f far. Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.Nice. Loving so f far.
Retards shouldnt write fics. period.......