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ShayZero

Shameless author review. Been working on this story since summer of 2020. Almost everything except the final arc is outlined. In terms of things being written out, there are rough drafts of up to the end of the Oracion Seis arc. Expecting over 200 chapters with this novel.

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Renpangshu

Did he get with a oc or someone from the anime ?

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DaoistYB3veI

The story and pacing is good. Tho meliodas seemee out of character but that is fine. There are circumstances, acceptable. But to me, a fic without love interest dosnt seemed complete. If anyone know, please tell if is there a love interest aside from Elizabeth.

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DeGenerate_KarMa

good storyline and love itachi Uchiha ok

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DJkrish

nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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Nouflex

we seriously need more meliodas fanfictions

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NoCall

Currently on ch 15. But to be honest, quite a hook of a read. Love the interactions happening so far even if it is very minor. Fun read so far 👍. Will do an edit update in some time if I finish this novel 😉

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David_Ibitoye

One of the greatest fanfics I have ever read, especially one involving the seven deadly sins

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Crem_Y
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I don't know if I already wrote a review for this story but if I did then whatever this will be my most recent one. Every time I do a review I take it seriously as I feel like the author and others involved in the story want the truth and to learn while writing, so here it goes. One word to describe this story would be thrilling, most Fairy Tail fan fics are but this one was amazing, the work you put into this story is not lost on me or any other readers. This is a short review from me but it doesn't mean its bad. For any person trying to get into Fairy Tail fan fic don't read this one as your first cause it will seriously give you high expectations compared to other, not saying their bad as currently their are a lot of ongoing ones right now that look to be great. But anyways thank you author for your hard work and everyone else who was apart of this project. Congratulations and good luck on the next project.

1yr
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Bored_Archlich

Been following this since it was in the single digits, glad to see that it turned out better than I expected from the title

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LGK_maore

one word or mybe two ....; completely awesomeeeeeeeee🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 like you're back i really liked this novel❤🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Chalmer_Wayland

I love it. Keep uploading, and I will continue to read it. Thanks for the amazing story author, keep up the good work.

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Manjumanjoooo

Definitely a 5 stars for me the story is well thought and the writing is good. It's one of the best fairy tail Fanfics ever made and I'm quite shocked to see that it's underaprecciated.... I'M WAITING FOR THE NEW CHAPSS MAH BOIII

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Randomidiot2424242

Mi piace voto 9 .👍 Ok okokokokokkokokkookokokokokkookkkkkokkkokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokkokokkokooolookokokokokokkoookokookokokokookookpokokooookolookkkokkoooklokkookooooookook

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getfukked

almost read it the idea was good but then the authour had too introduce unnecessary characters im giving a bad review just because you introduced unnecessary oc's. it gave me a good hype before destroying it with the additions

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HaseoTTD

still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel

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DeepSea

At first when I read the synopsis and saw it was an au I was a little bit off put because that meant oc and so. But despite that the story progresses really well and there doesn't seem to be much of a disconnect with the characters and the world. It captures the character Meliodas and the others quite accurately. At first I was gonna drop because of the first few chapts but once you get past those then you'll be asking for more chapters

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YesTer

Loved this fanfiction! But might I add to spice things up a bit for two reasons? One, you have greatly underpowered the main cast of fairy tail, even at the start when Meliodas' power has diminished greatly, so I'm hoping that you will make the cast catch up to him in some way. And two, it's related to the first reason, the plot has become predictable like MGA; the cast fight a strong villain, they get injured but not a fatal one, and Meliodas comes up with "Sate, sate, sate~" then fights said villain in an overpowered manner, leaving both the cast and villain in awe. Once again, just like in MGA, which had a ton of potential only to be destroyed by the series of cliches. Don't get me wrong, I loved this fanfiction and hope the author would continue this, but I hope this won't become like MGA.

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homeofthelostqueen

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

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AndrewHayden

Love it couldn’t stop reading it after starting, you did meliodas so right, even though I’ve never seen fairy tail your descriptions got me interested in both the characters and universe

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TheReaderWrites

The Story is incredible I am a big fan of the story but can u make the updates more stable or let us know your upload schedule.

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AnDrixo

The story is very good and cohesive, and unlike other stories this one has what we could call a moment of relaxation or rest between the arcs, it's very well written, based on the other fairy tail stories I've read so far, it's the best writing. CONGRATULATIONS TO THE AUTHOR BECAUSE HE DESERVES IT!!!! (my first language is not english sorry for any typos)

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Brice_Tagne

si je devrais décrire ce que j'ai lu, je dirait magnifique. Cet oeuvre fait partie de mon top trois des oeuvres qui parle de transmigration en troisième position juste après Itachi en tant que chinigami

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Nah_U_Stupid

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homeofthelostqueen

LOVE IT PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

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ShayZero

Shameless author review. Been working on this story since summer of 2020. Almost everything except the final arc is outlined. In terms of things being written out, there are rough drafts of up to the end of the Oracion Seis arc. Expecting over 200 chapters with this novel.

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4yr
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Renpangshu

Did he get with a oc or someone from the anime ?

11mth
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DaoistYB3veI

The story and pacing is good. Tho meliodas seemee out of character but that is fine. There are circumstances, acceptable. But to me, a fic without love interest dosnt seemed complete. If anyone know, please tell if is there a love interest aside from Elizabeth.

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DeGenerate_KarMa

good storyline and love itachi Uchiha ok

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DJkrish

nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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Nouflex

we seriously need more meliodas fanfictions

1yr
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NoCall

Currently on ch 15. But to be honest, quite a hook of a read. Love the interactions happening so far even if it is very minor. Fun read so far 👍. Will do an edit update in some time if I finish this novel 😉

1yr
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David_Ibitoye

One of the greatest fanfics I have ever read, especially one involving the seven deadly sins

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Crem_Y
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I don't know if I already wrote a review for this story but if I did then whatever this will be my most recent one. Every time I do a review I take it seriously as I feel like the author and others involved in the story want the truth and to learn while writing, so here it goes. One word to describe this story would be thrilling, most Fairy Tail fan fics are but this one was amazing, the work you put into this story is not lost on me or any other readers. This is a short review from me but it doesn't mean its bad. For any person trying to get into Fairy Tail fan fic don't read this one as your first cause it will seriously give you high expectations compared to other, not saying their bad as currently their are a lot of ongoing ones right now that look to be great. But anyways thank you author for your hard work and everyone else who was apart of this project. Congratulations and good luck on the next project.

1yr
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Bored_Archlich

Been following this since it was in the single digits, glad to see that it turned out better than I expected from the title

1yr
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LGK_maore

one word or mybe two ....; completely awesomeeeeeeeee🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 like you're back i really liked this novel❤🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

2yr
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Chalmer_Wayland

I love it. Keep uploading, and I will continue to read it. Thanks for the amazing story author, keep up the good work.

2yr
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Manjumanjoooo

Definitely a 5 stars for me the story is well thought and the writing is good. It's one of the best fairy tail Fanfics ever made and I'm quite shocked to see that it's underaprecciated.... I'M WAITING FOR THE NEW CHAPSS MAH BOIII

2yr
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Randomidiot2424242

Mi piace voto 9 .👍 Ok okokokokokkokokkookokokokokkookkkkkokkkokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokkokokkokooolookokokokokokkoookokookokokokookookpokokooookolookkkokkoooklokkookooooookook

3yr
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getfukked

almost read it the idea was good but then the authour had too introduce unnecessary characters im giving a bad review just because you introduced unnecessary oc's. it gave me a good hype before destroying it with the additions

3yr
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HaseoTTD

still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel still need finish Itachi novel

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DeepSea

At first when I read the synopsis and saw it was an au I was a little bit off put because that meant oc and so. But despite that the story progresses really well and there doesn't seem to be much of a disconnect with the characters and the world. It captures the character Meliodas and the others quite accurately. At first I was gonna drop because of the first few chapts but once you get past those then you'll be asking for more chapters

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YesTer

Loved this fanfiction! But might I add to spice things up a bit for two reasons? One, you have greatly underpowered the main cast of fairy tail, even at the start when Meliodas' power has diminished greatly, so I'm hoping that you will make the cast catch up to him in some way. And two, it's related to the first reason, the plot has become predictable like MGA; the cast fight a strong villain, they get injured but not a fatal one, and Meliodas comes up with "Sate, sate, sate~" then fights said villain in an overpowered manner, leaving both the cast and villain in awe. Once again, just like in MGA, which had a ton of potential only to be destroyed by the series of cliches. Don't get me wrong, I loved this fanfiction and hope the author would continue this, but I hope this won't become like MGA.

3yr
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homeofthelostqueen

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

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AndrewHayden

Love it couldn’t stop reading it after starting, you did meliodas so right, even though I’ve never seen fairy tail your descriptions got me interested in both the characters and universe

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TheReaderWrites

The Story is incredible I am a big fan of the story but can u make the updates more stable or let us know your upload schedule.

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AnDrixo

The story is very good and cohesive, and unlike other stories this one has what we could call a moment of relaxation or rest between the arcs, it's very well written, based on the other fairy tail stories I've read so far, it's the best writing. CONGRATULATIONS TO THE AUTHOR BECAUSE HE DESERVES IT!!!! (my first language is not english sorry for any typos)

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Brice_Tagne

si je devrais décrire ce que j'ai lu, je dirait magnifique. Cet oeuvre fait partie de mon top trois des oeuvres qui parle de transmigration en troisième position juste après Itachi en tant que chinigami

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Nah_U_Stupid

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homeofthelostqueen

LOVE IT PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

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