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The first fanfiction that I've reviewed on this platform, not because it was my first time to read a fanfiction — because it was one of the hidden gems out there!! it still has an Arknight foundation but with a possible new concept added to the grim world. and it has a frickin Jojo reference!! no everything is a Jojo reference! ehem in only a few chapters, the story plot itself has driven on the get-go, the writing is superb although I wasn't used to the pov change — it doesn't change the experience the fight is intense and boi I want to add more but spoiling everything isn't fun, so read it it has a big potential, is it worth it? you bet it is yeah, frickin read it! Now, kudos to the author! keep making your craft! ( ^ ^)/
Welp this is a surprise the first arknights fanfiction from this place, I'll give this one a read if this stuff is good then you'll got yourself a reader here author
I guess this is my second review on this platform. I like your story, the characters felt real. I'm not an emotional person but you executed it well in Elos vs Ramius scene (I cried (╥﹏╥)), and also the others fight as well. The tension of the fighting and the thriller whenever there is a trap, it feels like I can erect anytime! Well done! Your story now is one of my favorites, keep up the good work, Author!
ネタバレを明かす The first fanfiction that I've reviewed on this platform, not because it was my first time to read a fanfiction — because it was one of the hidden gems out there!! it still has an Arknight foundation but with a possible new concept added to the grim world. and it has a frickin Jojo reference!! no everything is a Jojo reference! ehem in only a few chapters, the story plot itself has driven on the get-go, the writing is superb although I wasn't used to the pov change — it doesn't change the experience the fight is intense and boi I want to add more but spoiling everything isn't fun, so read it it has a big potential, is it worth it? you bet it is yeah, frickin read it! Now, kudos to the author! keep making your craft! ( ^ ^)/
Welp this is a surprise the first arknights fanfiction from this place, I'll give this one a read if this stuff is good then you'll got yourself a reader here author
I guess this is my second review on this platform. I like your story, the characters felt real. I'm not an emotional person but you executed it well in Elos vs Ramius scene (I cried (╥﹏╥)), and also the others fight as well. The tension of the fighting and the thriller whenever there is a trap, it feels like I can erect anytime! Well done! Your story now is one of my favorites, keep up the good work, Author!
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