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I love the characters and how the writer describes their emotions Just love this book It's a must read Whoever loves romance must read this romantic journey
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Outstanding, awe-inspiring, heart-felt story,,hello writer i dont really have words to express the feelings after readings this novel, such beautifully written story that I cried along the characters, Huzaifa and Moomal were best characters i have ever read,,,,and how the words you used to express the emotions of characters was really appreciable,,, It was such a thriller, and since it was a Pakistan -based story i loved it even more,,,i cannot get over it,,,i hope you write more novels like this, Thankyou .
Dearly dear author, as you have written this book with great effort I am already in love with this. Please show up. We need This great author to motivate her readers....🥺🥺🥺🥺 Pretty pleaseeeee.... whenever you'll read this Comment You will remember of Your biggest fan who is Impatiently waiting for You...💖💖💖 Sometime everything gets really Mingled and tough But dissappearing is not the solution. When You'll read it Do reply me. I will be waiting. Just know that we all Love You alot, never get dis-hearted You worth more than anything in this world💕💕💕... By the way, I love this Novel......!!!!!!! Thank You Appi✨✨ I miss You alot . A crazy fan of yours😜 Regards,
Nice story, well written and interesting enough to keep you reading. Kudos to author. Would read more of your books……………………………………………………………..
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Dear author, we have been waiting for warm chapters from you. My eyes are getting dried up waiting for your chapter. The story line is no doubt great. But pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee show urself again. We miss your comments and reviews on us. Dear author,please be back to reply us readers when you see this.
Hello Author, Keep up the good work. I know times are tough now and we get it. I don't know if you'll reply this but I need you to know we're all here for you.👌🏽💯
The synopsis is creative n the story is nicely written. I appreciate the hardwork of the author. The emotions n feeling the author wrote the story with, made the story so lively. It creates an atmosphere that u r actually inside the story. This story n author deserves billions of diamonds.💎💎💎💎. lots of love to author.
Deep story in which i'm falling😍. The words touches my heart. Every new sentence hold my emotions. I'm literally crying after reading a few chapters🥺 . As i continue i fell deeper n deeper and when a chapter ends i ain't willing to come back from the story.🥰 this story n author deserves diamonds.💎💎💎💎💎
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Romantic stories always attract me and this romantic story is a gem for me. The way characters are designed and the emotions are described are enough to make you immerse inside this story. As you read the chapters, you get lost in their characters which is because of good writing skills of the author. I can see the author has used a very beautiful cultural setting in the story which itself beautifies the story more. Hope Moomal's unrequited love will come to her and her husband starts loving her dearly. Keep with your good work, dear author.
Great work, ruk dear! I added you book in my library. I can't wait for the next updates!
What can I say? This is such a lovely write. My eyes sting from emotions from the very start. Simple words but great impact. I love it. Oh my! I'm such a hopeless romantic, what can I say? Again? You guys shouldn't miss this book!
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
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This novel is very good. I really really like it. Keep up the good work author. Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love
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Good novel..like this very much..love the character of mommel and husaifa ...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️let them be together .sad story but interesting ..ruby is a selfish women she dont deserve the boy ..😍😍😍😍best of luck dear ..you are a good writter and you have long way to go ..👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep writing ..
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The title dragged me to read the novel. What a great story. The author has truly an amazing way of describing things. The characters makes me fall in love with them. The innocence with which the author has described the romantic moments is simply mesmerizing. I liked the writing style, truly unique. Great work Author. Keep it up. Already added to my collection [img=recommend]
This book is making me cry.. In love with moomal, I can pretty much relate myself to her. I love the story, characters and the development.. The pacing is smooth too. this book has to potential to make it big. Keep going author 💓💓
Best novel I have ever read in my entire life. Holy cow, How could I miss this hidden gem for this long. I have sinned and if you're still reading my review. What are you still doing here? Read it and add it your collection already! For those who think this is fake or shameless, I will bash you!
finally... here i am... 😁 amazing, outstanding novel❤ i am addicted to this novel this much that at every notification i thought may be u have uploaded new episode 🤣 (jaldi upload kya kro yrrrr)
I WISH THE GIRL WOULD JUST CONFESS TO HIM ALREADY AND NOT PLAY AROUND!!!😐😐😐😐 Also I hate dudes like that... beating up someone for liking the same girl you like... what is this? a early 2000's highschool romance show or something. I'm on chap 11 btw😘 my only problem with this story is the excess amount of names to keep track of. I know that all these are unique to this genre but it's too much for me. I can hardly remember the name of the MC dude I hate much less all the other throw away characters but don't change it... I'm just too stupid to remember all those names🤣🤣
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Its a very nice story and wonderful going....please update waiting for the next chapters....i lik this story very much....both of them should understand eachother...its all in hands of Huzaifa....
I love the characters and how the writer describes their emotions Just love this book It's a must read Whoever loves romance must read this romantic journey
What?! Can’t i support my own book?!😅🙈🙈❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Outstanding, awe-inspiring, heart-felt story,,hello writer i dont really have words to express the feelings after readings this novel, such beautifully written story that I cried along the characters, Huzaifa and Moomal were best characters i have ever read,,,,and how the words you used to express the emotions of characters was really appreciable,,, It was such a thriller, and since it was a Pakistan -based story i loved it even more,,,i cannot get over it,,,i hope you write more novels like this, Thankyou .
Dearly dear author, as you have written this book with great effort I am already in love with this. Please show up. We need This great author to motivate her readers....🥺🥺🥺🥺 Pretty pleaseeeee.... whenever you'll read this Comment You will remember of Your biggest fan who is Impatiently waiting for You...💖💖💖 Sometime everything gets really Mingled and tough But dissappearing is not the solution. When You'll read it Do reply me. I will be waiting. Just know that we all Love You alot, never get dis-hearted You worth more than anything in this world💕💕💕... By the way, I love this Novel......!!!!!!! Thank You Appi✨✨ I miss You alot . A crazy fan of yours😜 Regards,
Nice story, well written and interesting enough to keep you reading. Kudos to author. Would read more of your books……………………………………………………………..
I like it, the story is different but I know some real story is like this. 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
Dear author, we have been waiting for warm chapters from you. My eyes are getting dried up waiting for your chapter. The story line is no doubt great. But pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee show urself again. We miss your comments and reviews on us. Dear author,please be back to reply us readers when you see this.
Hello Author, Keep up the good work. I know times are tough now and we get it. I don't know if you'll reply this but I need you to know we're all here for you.👌🏽💯
The synopsis is creative n the story is nicely written. I appreciate the hardwork of the author. The emotions n feeling the author wrote the story with, made the story so lively. It creates an atmosphere that u r actually inside the story. This story n author deserves billions of diamonds.💎💎💎💎. lots of love to author.
Deep story in which i'm falling😍. The words touches my heart. Every new sentence hold my emotions. I'm literally crying after reading a few chapters🥺 . As i continue i fell deeper n deeper and when a chapter ends i ain't willing to come back from the story.🥰 this story n author deserves diamonds.💎💎💎💎💎
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Romantic stories always attract me and this romantic story is a gem for me. The way characters are designed and the emotions are described are enough to make you immerse inside this story. As you read the chapters, you get lost in their characters which is because of good writing skills of the author. I can see the author has used a very beautiful cultural setting in the story which itself beautifies the story more. Hope Moomal's unrequited love will come to her and her husband starts loving her dearly. Keep with your good work, dear author.
Great work, ruk dear! I added you book in my library. I can't wait for the next updates!
What can I say? This is such a lovely write. My eyes sting from emotions from the very start. Simple words but great impact. I love it. Oh my! I'm such a hopeless romantic, what can I say? Again? You guys shouldn't miss this book!
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Dudufufuffcufcjcufuxufuch. Ugh h ugh n huh j Hru j Hru h hcucu j. I’ve k job n be I eh if I’d j r is ur ur if if I ur. So ur or I ur iron. Great book
This novel is very good. I really really like it. Keep up the good work author. Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love
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Good novel..like this very much..love the character of mommel and husaifa ...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️let them be together .sad story but interesting ..ruby is a selfish women she dont deserve the boy ..😍😍😍😍best of luck dear ..you are a good writter and you have long way to go ..👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep writing ..
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The title dragged me to read the novel. What a great story. The author has truly an amazing way of describing things. The characters makes me fall in love with them. The innocence with which the author has described the romantic moments is simply mesmerizing. I liked the writing style, truly unique. Great work Author. Keep it up. Already added to my collection [img=recommend]
This book is making me cry.. In love with moomal, I can pretty much relate myself to her. I love the story, characters and the development.. The pacing is smooth too. this book has to potential to make it big. Keep going author 💓💓
Best novel I have ever read in my entire life. Holy cow, How could I miss this hidden gem for this long. I have sinned and if you're still reading my review. What are you still doing here? Read it and add it your collection already! For those who think this is fake or shameless, I will bash you!
finally... here i am... 😁 amazing, outstanding novel❤ i am addicted to this novel this much that at every notification i thought may be u have uploaded new episode 🤣 (jaldi upload kya kro yrrrr)
I WISH THE GIRL WOULD JUST CONFESS TO HIM ALREADY AND NOT PLAY AROUND!!!😐😐😐😐 Also I hate dudes like that... beating up someone for liking the same girl you like... what is this? a early 2000's highschool romance show or something. I'm on chap 11 btw😘 my only problem with this story is the excess amount of names to keep track of. I know that all these are unique to this genre but it's too much for me. I can hardly remember the name of the MC dude I hate much less all the other throw away characters but don't change it... I'm just too stupid to remember all those names🤣🤣
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Its a very nice story and wonderful going....please update waiting for the next chapters....i lik this story very much....both of them should understand eachother...its all in hands of Huzaifa....