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No words needed. Totally amazing!!!! only one drawback, late release of chapters 😢😢
I wanted to stard reading this story seriously but I ama binge reader & don’t like it when the story yet to finish. so can anyone give me a hint when/which chapter will this story end? how many chapter are left?[img=Speechless][img=Why]
i have read till chapter 6 and it is different frkm other novels, i am really liking this novel
nice story to read, minimal dragging , can't wait for the next chapter..good work buddy
This is one of the best novel that you can get storyline, character development and overall but with all this i think it not getting enough attention it need
Could someone tell me if mc and fl have already consummated their relationship? ..............................................................
really enjoying the story so far. Hey author if you reading this can you please give me an email or something? I need to speak with you regarding some business matters. Thanks.
The Author can't count. I have the habit of writing down everything that happens in novels like creating my own personal wiki in my notes app. In that I always count the age. With 1 week as the smallest unit. Although I can be a bit unaccurate. But of the dozens of novels I have read. Only in this one there is a big discrepancy between the age of MC and the one given by author. Currently I am in chapter 220. But every time the age is mentioned it is always a few months ahead of my counter. Like I am pretty sure I am accurate. So the author doesn't seem to be actually keeping track of age. But is just guessing.
This book is quite enjoyable. Ghost says what he means and then sticks to his word.
I really cant understand why there is no relationship between the MC and the mother of his child? Is the Author perhaps a fan of broken families?
Really good. Hidden gem. Should be way more popular! In terms of constructive feedback, I think the pacing has been a little fast, but that is just my opinion (also probably because I binged it). It feels like the novel might be better if there were some chapters that just develop the characters (especially the Winstons). I think there were more of these earlier on, but from 700 onwards they have been sparse IMO.
the novel was going nicely until around chapter 400.also the character noah is awfully similiar to jiang chen in dragon marked war god except from his personality his love interest, friends etc. are all similiar. i dont know but after involving the gods, future, and multiple universe just confused the story a lot. other than that the story is good along with character development until the part where his family got involved and he doesn't even want to know there side of the story before judging them. there were also created few heart breaking scenes where he hurts his brother without knowing that someone else was responsible for the wrong his brother did.
ネタバレを明かす Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
I am a very picky reader. I hate MC's who are not ruthless enough with a hero complex . Such heroes most often tend to be idiots/ simps . Hence , this novel provided me with a refreshing take on the usually bland MC genre. The MC in this novel is ruthless to his enemies yet loving to his family members. He most often keeps a cool head and does not rush into fights that he know he can't win . He keeps his calm and then dishes out revenge in the most satisfying way possible. He is not a hypocrite and is not aversive to killing for achieving his objective. The writing quality is excellent without much grammatical errors. His power progression is well paced ( does not make you feel bored) . The only suggestion that I have is to include the other girl as his wife as well ( since she bears the child of the MC ) . Eventhough MC had no direct physical role in the conception of the child, he should take responsibility . Moreover the attitude of the girl seems to be good and seems to care for the well being of the MC. Also, I would like the author to explain the stages beyond celestial stage. It seems confusing. We don't have an idea regarding the power levels of his enemies beyond the immortal stage . It seems vague. Also a little bit of kingdom building will do good to the novel. Let the common people understand that the MC is not heartless as his enemies seem to project.
very nice.. compare to other books that keeps on dragging their story with non sense items..
the story was good at first but it lost its spark because it was only about killing the MC has no character development
really love it but the only problem is that the authour is dragging the story literally like alternate dimensions,universe and others except that it is really good 😊.
this book is awesome.....one of the best books I have ever read....currently just in chapter 402 but this book just keeps getting better with every chapter. good job author
Good story, but the MC becomes kinda dumb after loving that gaya. MC doesn't have the resolve to do anything to achieve what he wants. The romance is author's real life fantasies that he is writing in the novel. The romance subplot kinda ruined the story. The mc doesn't have to train he can just fight anyone without any prior experience is kinda stupid.
Great novel, please don't drop it ............................................................. ..............................,............................. ....... .. .....
This is most interesting novel i have read in a while hands down it has everything characters,action,hype,comedy, action,thirller, romance and every character is interesting and it gets even better with time
good novel but the author is introducing multiple universes which is kinda bad and dragging the story a lot except this reasons the novel is one of the best i have read so far☺
Very solid novel, the author actually put thought into the development of characters.
very good book. but when is the next update? it has been 15 days already since the last uodate
No words needed. Totally amazing!!!! only one drawback, late release of chapters 😢😢
I wanted to stard reading this story seriously but I ama binge reader & don’t like it when the story yet to finish. so can anyone give me a hint when/which chapter will this story end? how many chapter are left?[img=Speechless][img=Why]
i have read till chapter 6 and it is different frkm other novels, i am really liking this novel
nice story to read, minimal dragging , can't wait for the next chapter..good work buddy
This is one of the best novel that you can get storyline, character development and overall but with all this i think it not getting enough attention it need
Could someone tell me if mc and fl have already consummated their relationship? ..............................................................
really enjoying the story so far. Hey author if you reading this can you please give me an email or something? I need to speak with you regarding some business matters. Thanks.
The Author can't count. I have the habit of writing down everything that happens in novels like creating my own personal wiki in my notes app. In that I always count the age. With 1 week as the smallest unit. Although I can be a bit unaccurate. But of the dozens of novels I have read. Only in this one there is a big discrepancy between the age of MC and the one given by author. Currently I am in chapter 220. But every time the age is mentioned it is always a few months ahead of my counter. Like I am pretty sure I am accurate. So the author doesn't seem to be actually keeping track of age. But is just guessing.
This book is quite enjoyable. Ghost says what he means and then sticks to his word.
I really cant understand why there is no relationship between the MC and the mother of his child? Is the Author perhaps a fan of broken families?
Really good. Hidden gem. Should be way more popular! In terms of constructive feedback, I think the pacing has been a little fast, but that is just my opinion (also probably because I binged it). It feels like the novel might be better if there were some chapters that just develop the characters (especially the Winstons). I think there were more of these earlier on, but from 700 onwards they have been sparse IMO.
the novel was going nicely until around chapter 400.also the character noah is awfully similiar to jiang chen in dragon marked war god except from his personality his love interest, friends etc. are all similiar. i dont know but after involving the gods, future, and multiple universe just confused the story a lot. other than that the story is good along with character development until the part where his family got involved and he doesn't even want to know there side of the story before judging them. there were also created few heart breaking scenes where he hurts his brother without knowing that someone else was responsible for the wrong his brother did.
ネタバレを明かす Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
I am a very picky reader. I hate MC's who are not ruthless enough with a hero complex . Such heroes most often tend to be idiots/ simps . Hence , this novel provided me with a refreshing take on the usually bland MC genre. The MC in this novel is ruthless to his enemies yet loving to his family members. He most often keeps a cool head and does not rush into fights that he know he can't win . He keeps his calm and then dishes out revenge in the most satisfying way possible. He is not a hypocrite and is not aversive to killing for achieving his objective. The writing quality is excellent without much grammatical errors. His power progression is well paced ( does not make you feel bored) . The only suggestion that I have is to include the other girl as his wife as well ( since she bears the child of the MC ) . Eventhough MC had no direct physical role in the conception of the child, he should take responsibility . Moreover the attitude of the girl seems to be good and seems to care for the well being of the MC. Also, I would like the author to explain the stages beyond celestial stage. It seems confusing. We don't have an idea regarding the power levels of his enemies beyond the immortal stage . It seems vague. Also a little bit of kingdom building will do good to the novel. Let the common people understand that the MC is not heartless as his enemies seem to project.
very nice.. compare to other books that keeps on dragging their story with non sense items..
the story was good at first but it lost its spark because it was only about killing the MC has no character development
really love it but the only problem is that the authour is dragging the story literally like alternate dimensions,universe and others except that it is really good 😊.
this book is awesome.....one of the best books I have ever read....currently just in chapter 402 but this book just keeps getting better with every chapter. good job author
Good story, but the MC becomes kinda dumb after loving that gaya. MC doesn't have the resolve to do anything to achieve what he wants. The romance is author's real life fantasies that he is writing in the novel. The romance subplot kinda ruined the story. The mc doesn't have to train he can just fight anyone without any prior experience is kinda stupid.
Great novel, please don't drop it ............................................................. ..............................,............................. ....... .. .....
This is most interesting novel i have read in a while hands down it has everything characters,action,hype,comedy, action,thirller, romance and every character is interesting and it gets even better with time
good novel but the author is introducing multiple universes which is kinda bad and dragging the story a lot except this reasons the novel is one of the best i have read so far☺
Very solid novel, the author actually put thought into the development of characters.
very good book. but when is the next update? it has been 15 days already since the last uodate