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レビューを書くOver all it was a really good book I hope it gets picked and author please keep up the good work [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update]
I just started reading your book. I’ very interested to read on.. I added this to my library and can’ wait to read the rest of it!! Of Jupi would also please add my book, The Rising: Vampires Forbidden Lover. I’d greatly appre it.
okayy this novel is great storyline is awesome but I just hate this kind of novel she was in relationship for whole 5 years and didn't even kiss her boyfriend and her first kiss have to be with ML. ML have feelings for FL from past 10 years Still he slept with some one No, that's not my point why did he act like virgin when he was in pub at the starting then? why tf FL is still virgin when ML is clearly not why evey author have to show FL a virgin Mary for God sake
it's such an interesting novel🤧🤧I can't wait to finish it ❤️🤍🤍🤍🤍🌙💎💎💎💎💎💎❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ it's so romantic ❤️❤️❤️💛❤️❤️
Really good book ..👍👍👍👌 😊😊☺️😊😊☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️☺️☺️😚😚😚❣️❣️❣️💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️ Cannot read for free. 😭😢💦💦💔💔💔
Awesome story......🥰ele such a sweetheart ❤❤ n dramatic too everyone spoil her 😊😊😊💕🥰🥰🥰❤❤❤ 💯💯💯every chapter had a interesting part I love this hidden part of story... 💕💕💘💘💘💘💘💘🥰🥰😃 .
Interesting storyline but sadly there’s too many grammatical errors! Anyhoo, I would still gladly read it because of Cedric’s character. haha
I love this story keep going ❤❤❤😘😘😘1[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Books pretty good but the grammar isn’t. The tenses used even from the beginning to chap 200 are wrong and the sentences are reall choppy. Would be more enjoyable If the grammar was better but if y’all can look past the grammar mistakes, it’a pretty decent
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I kinda like this plot... Its not the typical sexy storyline that you always read... I love both their personalities... How both of them were so confused of how innocent yet seductive they were... Wow...
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good always love this type of novel keep it up Author 💛😍 😍💖💖💛💛😍😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍😍😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍😍😍💖💖💛💛😍😍💖💖
The writing quality was a straight 8/10 good updating schedule and the development of the story was outstanding. This book is really irresistible, i Havant read another book in ages! I love how you potrayed teh characters, the stroy is engaing and strong!
the story is beautiful but the chapters are really short can you make them a bite long l think it will be really nice all in all keep up the good work
I was randomly looking at this stroy but then i could not stop reading myself. A story that will make you happy and smile. By the way it is also hot. 😉😆🔥
Dear author nim tysm for this wonderful book every chapter that I read is wonderful and yes ofc I love the fact that fl is strong bdw I love your other book too🧡
Eu espero os proximos capitulos ❤❤❤❤❤❤💝😁💝❤💝❤💝❤💝💝❤💝💝❤❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝💝💝💝💝❤❤💝❤💝❤💝eu amei a história e os peesonagens❤💝❤💝💝💝❤💝❤💝❤
NOTE: I AM REALLY ENJOYING THE STORY, AND AM JUST GIVING HONEST FEEDBACK :) First off, great hook! The premise of the story is very original. I love how you make the two characters so different yet alike to each other. Now I'm going to give a little bit of constructive criticism: The characters are a little one-dimensional, as they seem to have only one motive. However, I think the plotline is intriguing, and the elements of the story are smoothly incorporated. Seeing as this is a modern day world, not too much has to be developed for it; but adding more detail about where and when would be helpful. Maybe try asking questions like, "If the character wasn't in this situation, what would they be doing?" "Do I have enough detail to give the characters a life if the plot was removed?" "What season is it, and how does this affect the characters moods and decisions?" Please keep writing, I think the story is excellent! I hope you are not offended; I merely wanted to help :)
Very interesting storyline. Totally love the plot. Very well designed characters. Loved it how author has designed the story. All the best💖💖[img=recommend]
Fighting gurl takes revenge on them, they deserve to just burn and turn black crispy at the same time. Eleanor is really a strong girl salute to her but the funniest moment when she just said heal her dragon Owo wait what Im looking forward reading this book Author-san
From the very first chapter, I was already captivated. I like it when you stand up for yourself and be brave when being confronted with a challenge. I like the part Eleanor portrayed. Keep it up Author.👍
Nice book and amazing character building up.Waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ネタバレを明かすi love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please!
ネタバレを明かすPlease correct the grammatical errors. Great story and plot lines. Amazing ending and plot line completion! I thoroughly enjoyed this book
Over all it was a really good book I hope it gets picked and author please keep up the good work [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update]
I just started reading your book. I’ very interested to read on.. I added this to my library and can’ wait to read the rest of it!! Of Jupi would also please add my book, The Rising: Vampires Forbidden Lover. I’d greatly appre it.
okayy this novel is great storyline is awesome but I just hate this kind of novel she was in relationship for whole 5 years and didn't even kiss her boyfriend and her first kiss have to be with ML. ML have feelings for FL from past 10 years Still he slept with some one No, that's not my point why did he act like virgin when he was in pub at the starting then? why tf FL is still virgin when ML is clearly not why evey author have to show FL a virgin Mary for God sake
it's such an interesting novel🤧🤧I can't wait to finish it ❤️🤍🤍🤍🤍🌙💎💎💎💎💎💎❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ it's so romantic ❤️❤️❤️💛❤️❤️
Really good book ..👍👍👍👌 😊😊☺️😊😊☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️☺️☺️😚😚😚❣️❣️❣️💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️ Cannot read for free. 😭😢💦💦💔💔💔
Awesome story......🥰ele such a sweetheart ❤❤ n dramatic too everyone spoil her 😊😊😊💕🥰🥰🥰❤❤❤ 💯💯💯every chapter had a interesting part I love this hidden part of story... 💕💕💘💘💘💘💘💘🥰🥰😃 .
Interesting storyline but sadly there’s too many grammatical errors! Anyhoo, I would still gladly read it because of Cedric’s character. haha
I love this story keep going ❤❤❤😘😘😘1[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Books pretty good but the grammar isn’t. The tenses used even from the beginning to chap 200 are wrong and the sentences are reall choppy. Would be more enjoyable If the grammar was better but if y’all can look past the grammar mistakes, it’a pretty decent
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I kinda like this plot... Its not the typical sexy storyline that you always read... I love both their personalities... How both of them were so confused of how innocent yet seductive they were... Wow...
😙😚😋😛😛🤓🤓🧐🧐🤨🤪😎🥸🤩🥳🥳😏😛🤪😎🤨🥸🍏🍎🍐🍐🍋🫐🫐🍓🍇🍉🍌🍈🍑🍑🥭🍍🥑🍆🍅🥝🥥🥥🥦🥬🥒🌶🫑🫑🧅🫒🫒🥬🌽🥔🍠🥐🥐🧄🧄🧅🍥🥠🥮🥮🍢🍡🍘🍚🍚🍙🍤🦪🍱🍱🥟🥟🍜🍝🍝🥫🫕🥘🧆🌮🌯🫔🥗🥗🥙🥪🥪🫓🫓🍕🍟🍟🍗🍗🍖🦴🌭🍔🎶🎶➖➗✖️✖️©️💱💱💲♾🔚🔙🟠🔘☑️✔️🧅
good always love this type of novel keep it up Author 💛😍 😍💖💖💛💛😍😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍😍😍💖💖💛😍💖💖💛😍😍😍💖💖💛💛😍😍💖💖
The writing quality was a straight 8/10 good updating schedule and the development of the story was outstanding. This book is really irresistible, i Havant read another book in ages! I love how you potrayed teh characters, the stroy is engaing and strong!
the story is beautiful but the chapters are really short can you make them a bite long l think it will be really nice all in all keep up the good work
I was randomly looking at this stroy but then i could not stop reading myself. A story that will make you happy and smile. By the way it is also hot. 😉😆🔥
Dear author nim tysm for this wonderful book every chapter that I read is wonderful and yes ofc I love the fact that fl is strong bdw I love your other book too🧡
Eu espero os proximos capitulos ❤❤❤❤❤❤💝😁💝❤💝❤💝❤💝💝❤💝💝❤❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝💝💝💝💝❤❤💝❤💝❤💝eu amei a história e os peesonagens❤💝❤💝💝💝❤💝❤💝❤
NOTE: I AM REALLY ENJOYING THE STORY, AND AM JUST GIVING HONEST FEEDBACK :) First off, great hook! The premise of the story is very original. I love how you make the two characters so different yet alike to each other. Now I'm going to give a little bit of constructive criticism: The characters are a little one-dimensional, as they seem to have only one motive. However, I think the plotline is intriguing, and the elements of the story are smoothly incorporated. Seeing as this is a modern day world, not too much has to be developed for it; but adding more detail about where and when would be helpful. Maybe try asking questions like, "If the character wasn't in this situation, what would they be doing?" "Do I have enough detail to give the characters a life if the plot was removed?" "What season is it, and how does this affect the characters moods and decisions?" Please keep writing, I think the story is excellent! I hope you are not offended; I merely wanted to help :)
Very interesting storyline. Totally love the plot. Very well designed characters. Loved it how author has designed the story. All the best💖💖[img=recommend]
Fighting gurl takes revenge on them, they deserve to just burn and turn black crispy at the same time. Eleanor is really a strong girl salute to her but the funniest moment when she just said heal her dragon Owo wait what Im looking forward reading this book Author-san
From the very first chapter, I was already captivated. I like it when you stand up for yourself and be brave when being confronted with a challenge. I like the part Eleanor portrayed. Keep it up Author.👍
Nice book and amazing character building up.Waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ネタバレを明かすi love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please!
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Please correct the grammatical errors. Great story and plot lines. Amazing ending and plot line completion! I thoroughly enjoyed this book