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*Warning* So this a review from the author about the book in question. I personally think its really good but from chapter 1-18 there are problems with grammar and info drops as I had no idea what I was doing and still don't, I thought I'd give you a honest warning and a promise that I intend to fix it and its get better past that point. It isn't every chapter and it isn't always like that but I just wanted to warn anyone who was expecting a perfect book. anyway apart from that I hope you read past is and enjoy my creation since I think it will brighten up your day even if just a little :)
This novel is a story full of fluffy darkness (which is probably very confusing for anyone reading this review, but let me explain). The MC isn’t your cliche revenge driven kid, but rather an adorable and OP little devil looking for friends (truly wholesome!). He has his own trauma and feelings, and suffers from them, making it way more realistic than most novels. The author definitely grows with each and every chapter (after an already strong start) and the later chapters are of the same quality as published books. In short: definitely worth the read! *Writing quality* 4.5/5 As the author mentions, the first few chapters have some minor spelling mistakes (like really really minor), but nothing out of the ordinary. Way better than some of the current top stories! From chapter 25-27 and onwards it’s pretty much written perfectly! *Updating stability* 5/5 The chapters are generally pretty long, so it takes about half a day to catch up to chapter 40 (current chapter). Best half day spent this month 😊 *Story development* 5/5 It takes about 40 chapters for the MC to get to age 5,5-6. There’s a lot of world building going on, so some might call it slow, but in my opinion it’s not. There are a lot of events happening to our MC, so no chapter ever feels boring! There are also a lot of small hints towards future encounters, which keeps your brain speculating of what might happen. *Character design* 5/5 The MC isn’t just some person that randomly accepts his reincarnation. He has an actual personality with realistic feelings, not just some random ‘I will kill you all because you’re so annoying mwuhahaha’ tendencies. Also, the MC is super adorable sometimes! All of his interactions with others are so cute, as his super pure intentions always come across as the complete opposite. *World background* 5/5 The world is well thought out, with a clear description of how everything works. The magic system is not overly complicated, but not too simple either, which results in a very ‘realistic’ fantasy world that doesn’t leave you pondering over plot holes (cuz there aren’t any, except for maybe the reproduction ability of dragons 😂).
Sadly this novel was dropped so I would not recommend reading it. It’s a great novel but no more updates no more fun. There
I love this book genuinely I just wish there were more chapters this book is sooo good with character building and dealing with his supporting side characters (mom,sis,dad)
ngl this deserve a 5 star the writing the plot is soo good it makes you want to read even more, and the mc personality that made me get interest on this story even further, plus i have an emotionalessmc fetish syndrome so you deserve my 5 star rate author kun
I very much like this novels and wish that it’ll go on for a long time so please don’t every think about dropping it. But I’ll just be very sad if it does. (Not that my feelings fruly matter in this sense)
It’s a really good story, when i started to read I couldn’t stop. You really brought out the feeling that we are in that place with the mc and can feel what he feels. Some grammatical errors but the meaning came across pretty well. Hope you can continue to update this story and not drop it.
It is a nice Story with good Development. The Character are also interesting. The World building is not bad ,but not really original besides the higher realm. I like also that the mc is not so dominant like these alpha Characters. The Mc is overpowered ,but has his equals like Anima.The Update rate is not really stable ,but besides that the novel is very good.
This is a good story. Very underrated. Aside from the once in a while grammatical errors and phrasing, it's very good. Author can consider editing the errors one day. I'm still waiting for the updates, I wish to know what happened next.
I love this type of MC. This is my first book/ webnovel Recommendation. I hope there will be many more chapters for the sake of everyone. Let's see what will happen to our little Prince of darkness ps English is not my native language
The pacing of the story is slow, and that coupled with the trash writing quality makes it hard to read. Making up for that is the character designs, updates stability. The world background seems to be getting fleshed out in the coming chapters, still inconclusive, so 5 stars.
I swear, this is probably the most underrated author of all time. His stories are great, he posts regularly, and he even has time to write 2 other novels. If that isn't dedication, I don't know what is.
While there are a lot of grammar mistakes in the writing and as of right now the updating is not consistent (might be due to school which is perfectly understandable), the novel is really good. Great characters, WorldbuiIding and powers!
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story! The world building excites my curiosity, the story thus far (chapter 40) is interesting and wholesome, the main character is written relatively realistically for his age and goals, and the pacing is pleasant for a relaxing read. The main drawbacks of the book is some editing things that are obviously autocorrect problems and that the main character is a bit of a MarySue, but that also makes some sense for the story and leads to a currently relaxing story.
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At first when I started reading this novel, i thought i would be meet with a lecherous pervert when it said harem but he seems like a genuine person who is trying to get better in social interactions that u feel sad for him and at the same time root for him to bypass this obstacle. I do recommend this book tho but im sad that i discovered this gem so early and not 100 chapters in.
*Warning* So this a review from the author about the book in question. I personally think its really good but from chapter 1-18 there are problems with grammar and info drops as I had no idea what I was doing and still don't, I thought I'd give you a honest warning and a promise that I intend to fix it and its get better past that point. It isn't every chapter and it isn't always like that but I just wanted to warn anyone who was expecting a perfect book. anyway apart from that I hope you read past is and enjoy my creation since I think it will brighten up your day even if just a little :)
This novel is a story full of fluffy darkness (which is probably very confusing for anyone reading this review, but let me explain). The MC isn’t your cliche revenge driven kid, but rather an adorable and OP little devil looking for friends (truly wholesome!). He has his own trauma and feelings, and suffers from them, making it way more realistic than most novels. The author definitely grows with each and every chapter (after an already strong start) and the later chapters are of the same quality as published books. In short: definitely worth the read! *Writing quality* 4.5/5 As the author mentions, the first few chapters have some minor spelling mistakes (like really really minor), but nothing out of the ordinary. Way better than some of the current top stories! From chapter 25-27 and onwards it’s pretty much written perfectly! *Updating stability* 5/5 The chapters are generally pretty long, so it takes about half a day to catch up to chapter 40 (current chapter). Best half day spent this month 😊 *Story development* 5/5 It takes about 40 chapters for the MC to get to age 5,5-6. There’s a lot of world building going on, so some might call it slow, but in my opinion it’s not. There are a lot of events happening to our MC, so no chapter ever feels boring! There are also a lot of small hints towards future encounters, which keeps your brain speculating of what might happen. *Character design* 5/5 The MC isn’t just some person that randomly accepts his reincarnation. He has an actual personality with realistic feelings, not just some random ‘I will kill you all because you’re so annoying mwuhahaha’ tendencies. Also, the MC is super adorable sometimes! All of his interactions with others are so cute, as his super pure intentions always come across as the complete opposite. *World background* 5/5 The world is well thought out, with a clear description of how everything works. The magic system is not overly complicated, but not too simple either, which results in a very ‘realistic’ fantasy world that doesn’t leave you pondering over plot holes (cuz there aren’t any, except for maybe the reproduction ability of dragons 😂).
Sadly this novel was dropped so I would not recommend reading it. It’s a great novel but no more updates no more fun. There
I love this book genuinely I just wish there were more chapters this book is sooo good with character building and dealing with his supporting side characters (mom,sis,dad)
ngl this deserve a 5 star the writing the plot is soo good it makes you want to read even more, and the mc personality that made me get interest on this story even further, plus i have an emotionalessmc fetish syndrome so you deserve my 5 star rate author kun
I very much like this novels and wish that it’ll go on for a long time so please don’t every think about dropping it. But I’ll just be very sad if it does. (Not that my feelings fruly matter in this sense)
It’s a really good story, when i started to read I couldn’t stop. You really brought out the feeling that we are in that place with the mc and can feel what he feels. Some grammatical errors but the meaning came across pretty well. Hope you can continue to update this story and not drop it.
It is a nice Story with good Development. The Character are also interesting. The World building is not bad ,but not really original besides the higher realm. I like also that the mc is not so dominant like these alpha Characters. The Mc is overpowered ,but has his equals like Anima.The Update rate is not really stable ,but besides that the novel is very good.
This is a good story. Very underrated. Aside from the once in a while grammatical errors and phrasing, it's very good. Author can consider editing the errors one day. I'm still waiting for the updates, I wish to know what happened next.
I love this type of MC. This is my first book/ webnovel Recommendation. I hope there will be many more chapters for the sake of everyone. Let's see what will happen to our little Prince of darkness ps English is not my native language
The pacing of the story is slow, and that coupled with the trash writing quality makes it hard to read. Making up for that is the character designs, updates stability. The world background seems to be getting fleshed out in the coming chapters, still inconclusive, so 5 stars.
I swear, this is probably the most underrated author of all time. His stories are great, he posts regularly, and he even has time to write 2 other novels. If that isn't dedication, I don't know what is.
While there are a lot of grammar mistakes in the writing and as of right now the updating is not consistent (might be due to school which is perfectly understandable), the novel is really good. Great characters, WorldbuiIding and powers!
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story! The world building excites my curiosity, the story thus far (chapter 40) is interesting and wholesome, the main character is written relatively realistically for his age and goals, and the pacing is pleasant for a relaxing read. The main drawbacks of the book is some editing things that are obviously autocorrect problems and that the main character is a bit of a MarySue, but that also makes some sense for the story and leads to a currently relaxing story.
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At first when I started reading this novel, i thought i would be meet with a lecherous pervert when it said harem but he seems like a genuine person who is trying to get better in social interactions that u feel sad for him and at the same time root for him to bypass this obstacle. I do recommend this book tho but im sad that i discovered this gem so early and not 100 chapters in.